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(OOC: This is a 1x1 parent RP between C. Thunder Dash and Harmony Cube)

 

Link to OOC: http://mlpforums.com/topic/94602-1x1-parent-rp-3-ocs-left-to-choose/page-3#entry2818580

 

@@Harmony Cube

 

Addie was taking a nice walk through Ponyville eyeing everything she saw. She saw an empty bench and decided to go sit on it. "Nothing like another beautiful day in Ponyville." She said with a giggle. 

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Shooting was running as fast as her hooves would let her. A small group of bullies were chasing after her. She looked behind her and ran into a bench, one that somepony was on. Shooting fell, started crying and through her tears, saw the group of bullies getting closer.

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Addie jumped when she heard the thud. She looked down to see the crying filly. "Awww...poor little filly..." She said as she picked her up and placed her on her lap. She then looked up at the bulles. "You leave her alone!" She stated as she cuddled the little filly. Addie may have appeared to be just a chubby earth pony, but she was more than that. 

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Shooting kept crying, she was hungry, cold and in pain. The bullies still got closer, not wanting to go until Shooting was in more pain. Shooting squirmed, trying to get away and to adjust herself. She watched the bullies get closer but didn't do anything.

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Addie got up and gathered some magic. She then released a strong wave that was able to send a pony flying 10 feet away before landing on the ground hard. She then turned back to the crying filly. She picked her up and stroked her fur. "It's okay....Addie's got you now...you're safe with me." She said.  

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The bullies ran off after the wave was realesed. Shooting's crying quieted down a bit. She was really tired and started to fall asleep, trying to stay awake. She kept squirming when Addie picked her up, unsure what she would do to Shooting. Shooting was really thin for her age and was somewhat sensitive about it. When her crying was finished she turned inwards to be warmer. "M-mommy?" Shooting asked into the fur. She felt that Addie was her mom, even though she left Shooting at a very young age. Shooting kept trying to not fall asleep but it was hard, she kept almost falling asleep and then woke herself up.

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"Y...yes sweetie?" Addie asked. She was a little surprised that the little foal called her "mommy" so quick. "What's your name?" She asked as she continued to cuddle and stroke the little foal in her arms as she sat on the bench. She saw the last of the bullies running away in her peripheral.   

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Shooting knew it wasn't her mom due to the voice but still cuddled the other mare. "You just met me, why are you being my mommy?" Shooting asked. She wished it was her actual mom but didn't mind. "I-it's Shooting Star." Shooting responded. She kept falling asleep and waking up still.

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"Well...you just called me mommy..." Addie stated. "And Shooting Star...why...that's a beautiful name." Addie stated as she continued to stroke Shooting's fur lovingly. "I can...be your mommy...if you'd like..." Addie stated as she continued to snuggle and comfort Shooting.  

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"I thought you were my old mommy. She hasn't came back for me yet." Shooting said, whimpering a bit. "Thank you..." Shooting said quietly. She adjusted herself so Addie wasn't stroking near any bones.

 

"You would? I haven't had a mommy in a long time." Shooting said, surprised.

 

She held her stomach a bit, getting hungrier due to the fact she couldn't get food easy. Her stomach grumbled loudly.

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Addie continued to stroke Shooting's fur. "Are you hungry?" Addie asked as she continued to sit and stroke the little filly. "But...I don't get it. Did your old mommy do something? Did she just go away?" Addie asked the little filly as she got up and headed towards a nearby cafe.  

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Shooting looked up at Addie. "Oh yes. I haven't eaten in a while now. I haven't liked not eating." Shooting said. She showed Addie her unusually thin front hooves and her stomach, which the rib cage was starting to become more defined. "My mommy said we were going for ice cream and then camping but once we got to the woods she lost me and hasn't found me, I think she just didn't like me..." Shooting said crying a bit again but hugging Addie. She stayed clung to Addie's back as they headed to the cafe, falling asleep quietly.

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"You definitely need some chub. Mommy was born naturally chubby but likes to have a round belly." Addie said with a giggle as she arrived at the cafe. She then went to sit in a seat. She ordered a foal meal for Shooting, which consisted of a hayburger, hayfries, apple fritters and fruit juice. Addie ordered a hayburger, hayfries, chicken nuggets, apple fritters and fruit juice.  

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(OOC: Wow, that has so much grease you know. After a while without food, this has to be the worst possible thing to eat. I tried doing it once...)

Shooting sat in the seat, forcing herself to stay awake. She watched as the food was placed in front of her and ate a bite of the burger unusually, with her hooves instead of her magic. She finished the burger somewhat quickly. She tried the fries and decided she didn't like them, eating the fritters instead and drinking the juice.

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(OOC: I've started to cut down on fast foods and eat at home. If you haven't tried it, get turkey pastrami. It's really good. Oh, and I totally forgot to post Addie's character link: http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/addie-r6349)

 

Soon, the food came. "Well...looks like it's time to eat." Addie stated as she started to eat her hayburger and drink her juice.  

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(OOC: I once fasted for thirty hours and after had to eat fast food. Worst thing ever to do. My stomach hurt for a while.)

Shooting started falling asleep, using her hoof as a prop for her head. She didn't know why but she was really tired. Shooting thought it was alright since she finished the food she liked already.

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(OOC: Ouch. There was an event at my church where we had to go without food for a day. I didn't do it. However, I fasted for 24 hours without shoes on my old college campus.)

 

Addie had finished her food and patted her round and plump belly. "I guess you're ready to snuggle a bit..." Addie stated as she picked up Shooting and put her on her back. She paid the cashier and headed to her place. Her belly was sagging.  

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(OOC: Speaking of where you are, time zone? It's about 9:10 am here.)

Shooting nodded slightly, still tired. Shooting's stomach didn't feel good so she tried not to move more than she had to. She was really full and was happy about that. "Mommy, my tummy hurts." Shooting stated, trying not to complain.

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(OOC: I'm in eastern time. So that means you live right here in the USA!)

 

"Awww...mommy will be sure to make you feel better." Addie stated as she gathered some magic and let it radiate through Shooting's body, soothing the pain in her stomach as she continued to walk home. She made sure not to walk too fast as her belly was still sagging.  

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(OOC: Yeah, just the complete oppisite side, Pacific. It explains so much.)

Shooting felt a lot better when Addie's magic soothed the pain in her stomach. "Mama, how do you do magic when you're not a unicorn?" Shooting asked. She kept herself as still as she could on Addie's back, mainly because she was really tired. Shooting somewhat nuzzled into Addie's back.

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"Mommy taught herself how to do it. I'll show you my cutie mark when we get home dear." Addie stated as she continued to walk towards her house. Two minutes passed and she arrived. In her house, there was a piano, a corner with a lot of science stuff, some sports stuff and some books.  

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She felt slightly annoyed at her constant use of 'mommy' but went with it, unsure if most mothers did it since her mother left her at a young age.

 

When they got to the house she got off Addie's back, walking instead. She tried holding her hoof but the smallness of her hoof wouldn't allow.

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"Want to snuggle?" Addie asked as she went to her soft carpet and laid on her back. It exposed her nice and round belly for Shooting to lay on. Addie patted her belly. "It's okay, you won't hurt me." Addie stated. Her cutie mark showed, which was a music note, a beaker, a ball, all surrounded by a heart and 6 stars. 

 

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Shooting nodded meekly. She lied on Addie's stomach spread eagle style. Shooting did more of a hug with it too. She felt a bit cold and tried to get warm from Addie, still hugging her. Shooting softly cried. She wasn't used to a mother doing all this with her or loving her this much.

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@@Harmony Cube,

 

Addie's belly started to make funny noises, causing Addie to giggle lightly. She embraced Shooting lightly, but noticed that she was crying. "Don't cry honey. Everything's going to be alright." Addie assured as she started to stroke Shooting's fur lovingly.  

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