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Line 8: He told the Ponies that they could play with all the Plushies they wanted to, except for the one Plushie, the Plushie called Discord. 

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Line 9: the Discord plushie he "acquired" when he found Discord and turned HIM into a plushie. He then scattered the ponies into 6 towers across Equestria in which he arranged into a magical fashion and connected the magic to him to make him an immensely powerful necromancer. Who constructs powerful creatures to fight in a war to take Equestria for his own.

Edited by SirBlazinGames
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Okay so here is what we got so far:

 

Once upon a time in the magical land of Equestria, there was a great war. A war between the great pony nation and a evil pony 
 
wizard that has turned the mane six into plushies and giving them to 6 young ponies. He told the Ponies that they could play with all 
 
the Plushies they wanted to, except for the one Plushie, the Plushie called Discord. The Discord plushie he "acquired" when he found 
 
Discord and turned HIM into a plushie. He then scattered the ponies into 6 towers across Equestria in which he arranged into a magical 
 
fashion and connected the magic to him to make him an immensely powerful necromancer. This magic user constructs powerful creatures to fight in a war to take Equestria for his own. But he forgot to take away the mane 6's ability to talk and the Mane 6 told the Ponies what the Wizard had done. 

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The tribes listend to what they plushies had said, and assembled a massive army to hunt the necromancer

What tribes? The plushies were given to little ponies that were sent to 6 magical towers

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Okay so here is what we got so far:

 

Once upon a time in the magical land of Equestria, there was a great war. A war between the great pony nation and a evil pony 
 
wizard that has turned the mane six into plushies and giving them to 6 young ponies. He told the Ponies that they could play with all 
 
the Plushies they wanted to, except for the one Plushie, the Plushie called Discord. The Discord plushie he "acquired" when he found 
 
Discord and turned HIM into a plushie. He then scattered the ponies into 6 towers across Equestria in which he arranged into a magical 
 
fashion and connected the magic to him to make him an immensely powerful necromancer. This magic user constructs powerful creatures to fight in a war to take Equestria for his own. But he forgot to take away the mane 6's ability to talk and the Mane 6 told the Ponies what the Wizard had done. 

What tribes? The plushies were given to little ponies that were sent to 6 magical towers

The 3 tribes of ponies.

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Once upon a time in the magical land of Equestria, there was a great war. A war between the great pony nation ruled by princess Celestia and a evil pony wizard that has turned the mane six into plushies and giving them to 6 young ponies. He told the Ponies that they could play with all the Plushies they wanted to, except for the one Plushie, the Plushie called Discord. The Discord plushie he "acquired" when he found Discord and turned HIM into a plushie. He then scattered the ponies into 6 towers across Equestria in which he arranged into a magical fashion and connected the magic to him to make him an immensely powerful necromancer. This magic user constructs powerful creatures to fight in a war to take Equestria for his own. But he forgot to take away the mane 6's ability to talk and the Mane 6 told the Ponies what the Wizard had done.


Line 11: The 6 ponies are shocked to have found out what has happened to their favorite ponies, the mane 6 think of a plan to get out and stop the Necromancer name....

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