Living One Day At A Time (Demo/Concept) In need of a singer and help with lyrics

[ListArt 9]

This is another demo for song, but this one I plan to include lyrics in it.

 

However, I'm not the best singer so I was wondering if there were any singers who'd be up for this. Also, I'm hoping to get some help with the lyrics.

 

Livin' Day at a time (Reworked Demo).mp3

 

(Note: I posted the wrong version with this post and was unable to correct it beforehand.)

Edited August 6, 2014 by ListArt

[Cosmic Nexus 21]

Wish I had a better microphone, I'm not sure if this is out or not, but I would of offered to sing it, as well this beat has a great potential to it, just maybe a suggestion? ever thought about adding some "More" bass in the back? there's a traces of it scattered, add enough to make a speaker kick constantly?

Edited August 29, 2014 by AM Awakening

[ListArt 9]

Wish I had a better microphone, I'm not sure if this is out or not, but I would of offered to sing it, as well this beat has a great potential to it, just maybe a suggestion? ever thought about adding some "More" bass in the back? there's a traces of it scattered, add enough to make a speaker kick constantly?

Well, I did rework the track a bit, adding a few more chorus spots. Hopefully, it isn't too different. I'll see what I can do in terms of bass.

As for being out, I posted this version to Pony.fm. However, I was intending for a version to contain lyrics and hope I can still do it.

 

Luna's Modern Life (One Day At A Time).mp3

Edited August 30, 2014 by ListArt

[Cosmic Nexus 21]

Well, I did rework the track a bit, adding a few more chorus spots. Hopefully, it isn't too different. I'll see what I can do in terms of bass.

As for being out, I posted this version to Pony.fm. However, I was intending for a version to contain lyrics and hope I can still do it.

 

Luna's Modern Life (One Day At A 

It has definitely improved as far as I can tell. Compared the both, I like this one more, it has I'ts differentials yes, but you've managed to keep the same feel. Do you have any clue when the "Vocal Version" will come out? Or you hoped it to be?

[ListArt 9]

It has definitely improved as far as I can tell. Compared the both, I like this one more, it has I'ts differentials yes, but you've managed to keep the same feel. Do you have any clue when the "Vocal Version" will come out? Or you hoped it to be?

 

Well, that's part of the problem. The chorus is the only thing in terms of vocals that is complete. I had some demo lyrics, but they weren't strong and were built around the previous version.

[Cosmic Nexus 21]

Well, that's part of the problem. The chorus is the only thing in terms of vocals that is complete. I had some demo lyrics, but they weren't strong and were built around the previous version.

Well, If you still need vocals, i'm still open to it. I'm getting a better microphone in short time from now (Not a guarantee, have one ready, just gotta order it >.<). just wondering too, is the vocals just a test or is that how you'd like it to sound?

[ListArt 9]

Well, If you still need vocals, i'm still open to it. I'm getting a better microphone in short time from now (Not a guarantee, have one ready, just gotta order it >.<). just wondering too, is the vocals just a test or is that how you'd like it to sound?

 

The vocals in the chorus are the actual lyrics I want there, but my voice being there was just a test. Just to show how I want the chorus to be phrased. As for how it sounds, surprise me. And you'd be open for this?

Edited August 30, 2014 by ListArt

[Cosmic Nexus 21]

The vocals in the chorus are the actual lyrics I want there, but my voice being there was just a test. Just to show how I want the chorus to be phrased. As for how it sounds, surprise me. And you'd be open for this?

Oh absolutely yes! I hope time isn't a bother is it? cause i'm going to need it. Trial and error I mean, Shipment time as well. I would have to find a certain voice for it to work. other than that, I'm willing to give it a shot, if your serious about giving me one.

[ListArt 9]

Oh absolutely yes! I hope time isn't a bother is it? cause i'm going to need it. Trial and error I mean, Shipment time as well. I would have to find a certain voice for it to work. other than that, I'm willing to give it a shot, if your serious about giving me one.

 

I'll give you a shot and don't worry. We've got time. It's not like this is due anytime soon. Question: Do you have any experience writing lyrics?

[Cosmic Nexus 21]

I'll give you a shot and don't worry. We've got time. It's not like this is due anytime soon. Question: Do you have any experience writing lyrics?

Only for about a year, I used to play guitar in a band at party's and other celebrations, One time the lead singer couldn't make it cause he was sick, (Wish I could remember) And nobody dared to step, I offered and they no choice cause they only had like a day and a half. I knew I could sing, but not as good as I thought I was, Anyway I started to write my own songs for the past year now and we've grown more popular with opened up a lot of different techniques. So I could say I've had singing and writing experiences.

[ListArt 9]

Only for about a year, I used to play guitar in a band at party's and other celebrations, One time the lead singer couldn't make it cause he was sick, (Wish I could remember) And nobody dared to step, I offered and they no choice cause they only had like a day and a half. I knew I could sing, but not as good as I thought I was, Anyway I started to write my own songs for the past year now and we've grown more popular with opened up a lot of different techniques. So I could say I've had singing and writing experiences.

I see. Well, I'm going to need some guidance with writing lyrics for this song.

[Cosmic Nexus 21]

Well, I could try thinking of a few ways to improve the lyrics, The title itself gives a lot of ideas to the table which is a bonus, But it also has a bunch of different meaning to it, could you care to explain please? I'm a bit stumped at where your aiming.

[ListArt 9]

Well, I could try thinking of a few ways to improve the lyrics, The title itself gives a lot of ideas to the table which is a bonus, But it also has a bunch of different meaning to it, could you care to explain please? I'm a bit stumped at where your aiming.

Well, the idea behind the song is that since Luna was on the moon for so long, she is out of her time and now has to adjust to modern day pony life. The verses name off things that are normal anymore. Such as using the Royal Canterlot voice constantly. But it comes down to the fact she has to live one day at a time in order to adjust while the singer states reluctantly that she'll be fine. 

[Cosmic Nexus 21]

Wow, as soon as I read the last line, all these words barged into my head. I can easily understand it too, Luna been imprisoned on the moon and gone for a thousand years! Life itself would for sure change after that course of time, everything does. You put a lot of thought into this, And I can't wait to see this project when it's complete, hate to see it go to waste. Have you had anyone else offer to do the vocals?

Wow, as soon as I read the last line, all these words barged into my head. I can easily understand it too, Luna been imprisoned on the moon and gone for a thousand years! Life itself would for sure change after that course of time, everything does. You put a lot of thought into this, And I can't wait to see this project when it's complete, hate to see it go to waste. Have you had anyone else offer to do the vocals?

Wow, as soon as I read the last line, all these words barged into my head. I can easily understand it too, Luna been imprisoned on the moon and gone for a thousand years! Life itself would for sure change after that course of time, everything does. You put a lot of thought into this, And I can't wait to see this project when it's complete, hate to see it go to waste. Have you had anyone else offer to do the vocals?

Edited August 30, 2014 by AM Awakening

[ListArt 9]

Wow, as soon as I read the last line, all these words barged into my head. I can easily understand it too, Luna been imprisoned on the moon and gone for a thousand years! Life itself would for sure change after that course of time, everything does. You put a lot of thought into this, And I can't wait to see this project when it's complete, hate to see it go to waste. Have you had anyone else offer to do the vocals?

Wow, as soon as I read the last line, all these words barged into my head. I can easily understand it too, Luna been imprisoned on the moon and gone for a thousand years! Life itself would for sure change after that course of time, everything does. You put a lot of thought into this, And I can't wait to see this project when it's complete, hate to see it go to waste. Have you had anyone else offer to do the vocals?

 

Besides you. No one else has offered to do it.

[Cosmic Nexus 21]

Besides you. No one else has offered to do it.

 

Sad, Really is... Good thing I asked when I did then . I could start brainstorming some lyrics, I got a pen and pad somewhere.

Anyways I can contact you? Is PM fine?

[ListArt 9]

Sad, Really is... Good thing I asked when I did then . I could start brainstorming some lyrics, I got a pen and pad somewhere.

Anyways I can contact you? Is PM fine?

Sure. ^^ Sounds great. And, you'll get full credit when this track drops.

[Cosmic Nexus 21]

Awesome! don't worry, I'll make sure it'll be the best of my potential! Talk to you another time?