Editors wanted for MLP WWII crossover

[Stancet 673]

I need an editor for a Christian themed fanfic series about World War II happening in Equestria. It's kind of an alternate history story, but I need fellow Bronies who like to write and are interested in every theme I've mentioned.

 

Synopsis:

For ten long years nazi ponies have been invading and capturing Equestria piece by piece until finally they've stormed Canterlot and Celestia's favorite student, Twilight, is forced to flee to Ponyville; which is already under nazi occupation. But once there, Twilight believes Celestia had one final mission for her that could drive back the Nazis forever and searches her new home to find the underground resistance. When she rediscovers her friends running the resistance she also discovers their own efforts to fight back the nazis, but their enemy has plans also that could spell devastation for Equestria if they don't do something about it. 

 

The story is about espionage and informational warfare, as well as fierce battles and the political drama of war. But Twilight and her friends also discover the devil's influence, as well as God's plan to stop him. The tone of the story paints World War II realistically like it would have happened, but does have exciting moments like Indiana Jones, and stylized moments like Hellboy, and sometimes just plainly resembles My Little Pony like you're all familiar.

 

Needless to say, the project is ambitious and probably won't be completed. But if it sounds at all interesting, I need editors who can review the plotline, tell the difference between good writing and bad writing and know a thing or two about spelling. (And yes, you will be judged by how articulate you make your post sound). I also like creative advice, so if you believe you can add something to this story I would definitely love to review it.