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Hey! So, a while back, I made a post featuring Riptide (I have settled on that name, but thanks to all who suggested!) and I now am looking for some feedback about his design before I properly make him an OC (which I will probably do).

 

Here he is!

 

 

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Thanks! 

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@@MiniKirby123,

 

Well, I presume that this OC is connected to the sea/ocean, so I love the colour scheme you picked out. The mane and tail style vaguely resemble waves, so there's another perk.

 

Maybe we could chat each other up sometime and figure out explanations for the cutie mark, the markings around his rear leg, and the shell necklace.

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well personally i always feel like accesories should be kept to a minimum, the necklace is alright but the sell tied to it could go a tad smaller because that's the first thing that cught my eye. usually the face should be the first thing the viewer looks at. then i do enjoy the small change in color on his back leg but jus the same i would make it less in sight, perhaps make the colors a bit more pale/light in order to make it look more on the pony.

 

the hair and tail both look good, love the way the hair moves over the eye, not to mention the color scheme one him ^^

all in all i'd say great job!

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Cool! Will do :L I just didn't want to include too many colours in his colour scheme, so I ripped em straight out of his hair. but now I see that that may not have been wise ^^

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Very cool design and excelent colourscheme.

Most of the changes I'd consider have already been mentioned (make the shell a bit smaller, desaturate the mane & tail just a little bit).

Also, I'd change the colour of the thong to brown of maybe blue.

Maybe get rid of the sunbeams on the cutiemark.

 

-Take care that allthe strands in the Mane & tail actually rech the body

-the tail should attach to the body at a slightly higher angle

-is the mouth supposed to be coloured black?

 

Hope some of it helped.

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@@Silverwisp the Bard

 

Oh yep! 

 

The mouth was just black cause I wanted it to stand out while I was drawing him. WILL FIX NOW! Also, thanks for the colour suggestion for the necklace thing. I couldn't find a good one ^^ I reckon the brown rocks it and makes it less obvious and jarring. :D THANKS MAN!


 

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I think it looks a little better now with all your help! Thanks muchly!

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