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Grin For Me (Vector #2 - Still working on getting better)

visual art Grin Coroner Vector NNL

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#1 NeverNeverland

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Posted 27 May 2012 - 06:35 PM

http://nnland.deviantart.com/#/d51gpqo



Done almost immediately after finishing up the first one. Edited and done today. There are somethings I'd like to edit, but I don't know how to very well, so this will do now. Opinions? Compliments? Criticisms? Dislikes?

Any advice would be great, by the way.

Edited by NeverNeverland, 16 June 2012 - 02:47 PM.


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Posted 27 May 2012 - 06:38 PM

Seeing as I have no idea what the heck a Vector is, I say you did a pretty d*mn good job!

#3 NeverNeverland

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Posted 27 May 2012 - 06:39 PM

I say you did a pretty DAMN good job!


You don't need to hide the bad words on my threads dude, its all good. :lol: And thank you for the kind words. :)

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Posted 27 May 2012 - 06:40 PM

Wow....I really don't see anything negative about this one! Your vectoring skills are obviously getting very better very fast!

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Posted 27 May 2012 - 06:43 PM

Amazing!

Much better then anything I could ever do. Keep at it!

#6 Bohtty

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Posted 27 May 2012 - 06:47 PM

Seeing as I have no idea what the heck a Vector is, I say you did a pretty d*mn good job!

http://mlpforums.com...ic-actually-is/

Any advice would be great, by the way.

Well, If I had to be picky then maybe, don't use solid black in an image. You should use an off black, it just looks better usually.

#7 NeverNeverland

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Posted 27 May 2012 - 06:50 PM

Amazing! Much better then anything I could ever do. Keep at it!


Thank you. And now you've got your schmile. Happy? :P

Well, If I had to be picky then maybe, don't use solid black in an image. You should use an off black, it just looks better usually.


No no no! Picky is GOOD! In something like this brutal honesty is great for improvement.

#8 Bohtty

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Posted 27 May 2012 - 06:55 PM

No no no! Picky is GOOD! In something like this brutal honesty is great for improvement.

Well if you insist then...
The darker green around the mouth doesn't seem to work with MLP and I don't think I've seen it on any other vectors, maybe just dropping it? I don't really know how I would get that to work.
Additionally, the hair looks a bit stiff, but that's something you get better at with time.
Lastly, the eyes seem a bit off shape, the MLP eyes are usually a bit bigger and more ovaly.
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#9 NeverNeverland

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Posted 27 May 2012 - 06:57 PM

Well if you insist then...
The darker green around the mouth doesn't seem to work with MLP and I don't think I've seen it on any other vectors, maybe just dropping it? I don't really know how I would get that to work.
Additionally, the hair looks a bit stiff, but that's something you get better at with time.
Lastly, the eyes seem a bit off shape, the MLP eyes are usually a bit bigger and more ovaly.


Exactly what meant. The reason for the hair looking stiff is because... well, I don't think I added any borders around it... it looks more incomplete, which is a slight problem that I want to fix. Other than that, I totally get at what you're saying.

#10 Chigens and Kay

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Posted 27 May 2012 - 07:01 PM

Thank you. And now you've got your schmile. Happy? :P


Exactly what I was looking for!

#11 Apocalyptic Chaos

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Posted 27 May 2012 - 07:07 PM

That's actually really awesome, i see nothing wrong, i don't know how to do vectors so i wouldn't know anything about them, Nicely done man :) really good stuff!

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Posted 27 May 2012 - 07:20 PM

Brutal honest-ness.
http://www.youtube.c...XTIY_R2s#t=173s
:P
Joking aside, good job! Especially if you're just starting out.

#13 NeverNeverland

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Posted 27 May 2012 - 07:22 PM

Brutal honest-ness.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=tK4XTIY_R2s#t=173s
:P
Joking aside, good job! Especially if you're just starting out.


Haha, I wouldn't mind getting pissed on by Skwisgaar! :lol: However, if it was Murderface...

...murder plans aside, thanks for the kind words!

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Posted 27 May 2012 - 07:48 PM

Dat be good! I'm pretty sure I'd suck at vectors, seeing how I'm terrible at using drawing tablets.
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