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[Kolwynia]

Hello, this is my first attempt at writing fanfiction. Any constructive criticism is appreciated.

Falls the Shadow

http://www.fimfiction.net/index.php?view=category&search=falls+the+shadow

A fantasy adventure story...

When the stars start going out over Equestria, and ponies start disappearing, it's up to Twilight and her friends to try and save the day. With the help of the Doctor, they will travel back in time to the Canterlot of a thousand years ago. A terrible evil is threatening the world, two eras are in danger, and unless they can stop it, Death will come to Equestria, and their innocent world will be lost forever.


Hope you like it. (If you don't, let me know what I'm doing wrong)