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[Metalshy]

I decided to try drawing a pony, for the first time, so here I drew Rarity. Please tell me how I did.. comments and constructive criticism are welcome. It took me 2 and a half hours.



EDIT: I don't know if this makes a difference, but I drew this imagining her sitting down. That may explain her rather thick neck.

Edited by EEYYYUP, 18 June 2012 - 10:15 AM.

[Dragonshy]

The colors are really well done! A few proportion problems, but other than that it's awesome!

[Raiyny Day]

Good for a first try. I'd say work on the muzzle/mouth/whatever it's called on ponies Other than that, it's pretty good

[Another Creative Username]

You did a fantastic job! Better than what I can do. Its also pretty impressive for your first attempt.

[Krystal]

Awesome Rarity The colors are really well done, but her neck is kinda fat and too long. Other than that it's great

[Cloud Zephyr]

there are no words for me to describe how awesome it is.

[Metalshy]

Thanks everypony :]

[Apocalyptic Chaos]

I love how you Colored her, it is really a great piece of art, the only thing is the thickness of the neck but it's an awesome drawing! nice work!

[XraYZ]

Some proportion issues, as mentioned, but the colouring's really cool! (I'm terrible at using pencil crayons)

[TimberStrum]

Wow thats really good!

[Rainbow Danger Dash]

that is amazing for a first!!! you are gifted!!! a brohoof for you!!! i love the coloring and the lines are nice an smooth! 100% prefect!!!

[Metalshy]

Thanks again :]

[Tdroid]

I like it, very good for a first attempt.

[TheFlyingLettuceBros]

Eyes-Beautiful and full of detail!
Hair-Exactly like Rarity
Smile-Dont like it sorry
Neck-A bit too thick
Overall- 8 out of 10 GOOD JOB

[Croaks]

I like it.
Could use a sharper nose or a thinner neck, maybe, but it's still amazing.

[~Lawful Jordo~]

A pretty good first try, Some proportion issues, but other than that very solid

[Flow (Naru)]

This is really great for a first time, the only thing that needs improvement is the neck, as it needs to curve outward a bit, overall, it's a great piece for a first time. Keep it up!

[Metalshy]

I think the reason you guys think her neck is thick is because I drew her imagining she was sitting down. I don't know if that makes a difference.