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[Phaeston-e12]

I've posted a preliminary picture of this thing, but I've decided to color it entirely and add some background from the scratch to see how it would work when I put it together and shrink it down.

There are some problems in the picture, apples lack shining-factor and lemon is sort of floating upward and Rarity's hair is bit weird; but her hair is seriously hard to compromise.

Tell me what you guys think about it please; (the picture is much more clogged up than what I've originally intended because there was few experiments I've tried to conduct while drawing it.)

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[Mavis]

My critique:

• Been waiting for more works form you. I love your OC.
• Her mane is again, lovely.
• Her facial expression is clear, and gives the work an emotional standpoint.
• Apples don't need shine for it to work, silly!
• Rarity's hooves are odly created. Too skinny and not round enough.
• I actually really like her mane, even if it is too high.

You never fail to impress me.
Crona Stamp of Approval

5/5

[Phaeston-e12]

My critique:

• Been waiting for more works form you. I love your OC.
• Her mane is again, lovely.
• Her facial expression is clear, and gives the work an emotional standpoint.
• Apples don't need shine for it to work, silly!
• Rarity's hooves are odly created. Too skinny and not round enough.
• I actually really like her mane, even if it is too high.

You never fail to impress me.
Crona Stamp of Approval

5/5

Thank you for the detailed criticism. I've tried to fluer-fy Rarity to try to figure out how to make her look older (8~15yrs after the s2) My assumption was that with Rarity's unnatural obsession about making herself look beautiful; she would end up sporting a body that's close to that kind of pony; I probably should practice drawing Fluer-di-lis in future to help myself out.

Again thank you.