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[Crona The Critic]

Being a teenager,
it has proved harder than I thought.

Not once did I ever think I could cry so much,
crying for no apparent reason.

All these pent up emotions rush to escape,
all my hormones going wild.

I can't help these bursts of emotions that I have,
they explode whenever they feel appropriate.

I seem to receive emotions whenever the times are at their worse,
and it only makes situations worse.

I become angry so easily,
I become sad so easily.

I don't even see a reason why this is so,
no matter how hard I try.

I am so happy all of the time,
yet at night I feel so terrible.

The second Amanda leaves,
my emotions run wild.

I miss her severely bad for whatever reason,
when I know she is simply sleeping.

I don't know why I feel this way,
or why I get so mad.

In any argument,
my blood is the one that boils first.

I cannot take an insult,
which makes my insults turn out even deadlier.

And they always hit their marks,
and either lose or win the fight.

But in a fight,
no one truly wins.

Everyone loses,
everyone ends up hurt.

I'm so tired of being such an emotional teenager,
so tired of these damn hormones forcing me to get so angry.

Guess I will have to wait until this goes by,
these natural emotions to lower themselves.

Until then,
I don't know what to do with myself while I am alone.

And apologizing is so painful,
yet I have to do it.

*Sigh*

I don't want to be an adult,
nor be a teenager.

I would love to be a child again,
a time where I had no worries.

My emotions were always in check,
and I rarely got angry.

I miss those times,
but they are gone.

Gotta live with it now.

I'm emotional as hell.

[Klopp]

Nice work, Finest Crona! Awesome stuff! Woohoo! You rock!

**stands outside thread with shotgun**

Edited by Klopp Pwny., 19 July 2012 - 10:59 PM.

[Whiteshade]

So.... nice poem?

Also some people are emotional and some people are less so. As long as you use some moderation and suppress the extremes, it shouldn't have any negative impacts.

[Crona The Critic]

Nice work, Finest Crona! Awesome stuff! Woohoo! You rock!

**stands outside thread with shotgun**

Don't shoot Klopp!
I love you!

[One]

My post was a sarcastic compliment, that was slightly off-topic. Why hide it? lol, but decent poem I guess.

[Whiteshade]

My post was a sarcastic compliment, that was slightly off-topic. Why hide it? lol, but decent poem I guess.

I have no idea why.

Also I'm curious, why couplets and not stanzas? You do the same structure for all your poems, no?

[Crona The Critic]

I have no idea why.

Also I'm curious, why couplets and not stanzas? You do the same structure for all your poems, no?

I just like it my way.
My own personal style, I suppose