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#1 Morrigan Aensland

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Posted 28 July 2012 - 09:47 AM

I know my dear that I've caused you much pain
And from all of this I've taken the gain
But now I lower my head, leave in shame
At least I taught you a lesson this day.

Nothing's forever, no love is true
Eyes on the prize that I've stolen from you
Now that I'm gone you can start fresh, anew
But please know I apologize too.

There were so many things I left undone and unsaid
And so many bad things that I did as a friend
I swear I thought that it was all for the best
But in truth love I think I just lost my head.

Now as I sit in this chair, write this funeral dirge
All the terrible thoughts in my head finally purged
All the hate for myself coming back in a surge
Oh I wish that the first time I learned-

Nothing's forever, no love is true
Eyes on the prize that I've stolen from you
Now that I'm gone you can start fresh, anew
But please know I apologize too.

As I finish this song, I finish my story
I take the cowardly way-in that they's no glory
But be glad that I'm gone, don't you dare mourn me
Cuz this time you learned it, surely-

Nothing's forver, no love is true
Eyes on the prize that I've stolen from you
Now that I'm gone you can start fresh, anew
But please know I apologize too.

Nothing's eternal, nor set in stone
This is the point that I try to hit home
And at last, with my life, I hope I can show
In life you're abandoned-you're always alone.

But here in my final words and last breaths
I've broken my own laws, slipped from my steps
All of the secrets from you that I've kept
I write in this song that I've left.

Nothing's forever, but this sorrow is true
I revoke all the lies that I've spilled to you
Despite that I'm gone, you'll push through
But please know that I apologize too.

Nothing's forever, but this love is true
Tears spill from my eyes-I don't want to leave you
But I know that you're strong, you'll go one, start anew
And at last my last words: I'll always love you.


Goodbye, everyone. I wish you all happy lives. I'll miss you all...but this is the only way.

Edited by PinkieDaShy.avi, 28 July 2012 - 09:56 AM.


#2 Skullbuster

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Posted 28 July 2012 - 10:03 AM

this is just a peice of fiction right? your not really leaving right???

if its not then why are you leaving?

#3 Filly Pinkie Pie

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Posted 28 July 2012 - 10:15 AM

Wait... WHAAAT?
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! Sad :(

#4 Whiteshade

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Posted 28 July 2012 - 10:23 AM

Nice poem. Bonus points for including dirge, one of my favorite words. Also I'm slightly confused as to whether you are serious or not.

#5 Stalkin'guu

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Posted 28 July 2012 - 10:59 AM

*Snip*

... I give you until season three. When you finally feel like coming back to talk ponies, we'll all embrace you with open arms. Until then, have a nice break. As you stated in your poem, "Nothing's forever..." ;)
Au revoir, mon ami. Je t'aime.

Edited by Kamina, 28 July 2012 - 10:59 AM.


#6 Jokuc

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Posted 28 July 2012 - 11:46 AM

Today is my last day...if you know what I mean.


False information. This will not ever happen.

...Right? :o

Anyways the poem is really nice. Good work :)

#7 Shadow Eclipse

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Posted 28 July 2012 - 01:59 PM

Completely beautiful, so sweet so touching.
You got an amazing talent for writing and your grammar is really good.

#8 Morrigan Aensland

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Posted 29 July 2012 - 01:41 PM

False information. This will not ever happen.

...Right? :o

Anyways the poem is really nice. Good work :)

Changed my mind *laughs*
But thankee.

Completely beautiful, so sweet so touching.
You got an amazing talent for writing and your grammar is really good.

Oh, thank you! :D I'm a bit of a Grammar Nazi, TBH XD





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