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Flamestreak1990

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welcome to my review of episode of mlp:fim we start off with celestia narrating a book about how Luna was banish to the moon. one intro later twilight rejects going to a party that moondancer is throwing. this starts a problem with twilight being portrayed that makes her seem like a a**hole she is mean to spike by not saying sorry to him after she clearly saw herself accidently hit spike with the door. being rude to all of her future friends especially pinkie pie and cringing every time that friend of friends is said and lastly calling every in ponyville crazy which is kind of rude. Anyway after seeing a book that says nightmare moon will return at the summer sun celebration she notifies princess celestia right away. after celestia basically tells twilight she crazy and sends her check on the preparation for the celebrations. she meets the first of the rest of the mane 6 pinkie pie. nothing really important she just screams and run away....(facepalm). anyway twilight meets up with applejack and the whole apple family. nothing happen important here so yeah. than she meets up with my favorite pony rainbow dash oh yeah! other than rainbow clears the clouds in ten secs nothing much happens here again. Than she meets fluttershy, than pinkie who throw twilight a party and twilight is ungrateful :okiedokielokie:.ugh I understand that twi needs to get back to her studies but at least should be grateful that someone threw her a party out of the kindness of their heart and twilight isn't even grateful. friendship is magic my a**. anyway upon arriving to the celebration. twilight turns out to be right about nightmare moon as she is here instead of celestia. after nightmare moon says she will drown equestrian in external darkness twilight rushes to her home and she meets with mane 6 while looking about he elements of harmony. discovering that there in the dangerous everfree forest she wants to go it only but the mane 6 go with her a cliff breaks and after applejack tells twilight to let go she falls into the hoofs of fluttershy and rainbow dash who already saved everyone alse and fluttershy shows kindness to a mancora tames it. rarity cuts her tail for a dragon to replace his shaved beard rainbow dash doesn't leave her friends foe the shadowbolts pinkie laughs at the face of danger and they meet with nightmare moon and one taste the rainbow motherf***er moment we are done. well there were problems with the episode like twis meanness but all in all thought it was good bye and brony out

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Paragraphs and capitalization are your friends!

 

As for Twilight's meanness, that's a good point, but then again, that's where her character development starts. If she were all gung ho about friendship from the beginning, then she wouldn't have a chance to grow.

 

I think you could have a really good series of episode reviews if you take a bit more time and care on your formatting. Good luck! :D

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Paragraphs and capitalization are your friends!

 

As for Twilight's meanness, that's a good point, but then again, that's where her character development starts. If she were all gung ho about friendship from the beginning, then she wouldn't have a chance to grow.

 

I think you could have a really good series of episode reviews if you take a bit more time and care on your formatting. Good luck! :D

yeah this was rushed as i was in the library and had an hour to write this 

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