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Overrated Blues: Sweetie Belle Toils and Best Night Ever


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http://mlpforums.com/blog/91/entry-12840-the-ten-best-and-worst-fim-episodes-part-1-of-3/

 

Read all three parts and then come back.

 

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So if you notice, number 9 on the best list is For Whom the Sweetie Belle Toils (I kid you not, that is no typo). I kinda have a huge problem with that episode.

It's way too overhyped.

 

You see, we just had an episode about sisters that was charming, funny, and not mean-spirited in any way. Watch Maud Pie to know what I'm talking about. Then they follow it up with this... thing... and it seems that the idea is being overplayed (already happened in Sisterhooves Social; same FREAKIN' characters, BTW). I got bored after the first five minutes and didn't finish it for three days. THREE DAYS.

 

And that's one of the biggest problems. It's boring. Not boring like Maud Pie's expressions, just boring. It tries to tell a good story. And in a sense, it does it. But the execution is horrible.

One of my favorite movies is Scrooged, so why wouldn't I like this? Because OF the reference. It goes on for way too long and holds little substance towards the plot. I could have liked the dream sequence, but we got too much exposition and filler for me to decide what I think of the scene.

 

Like I mentioned before, this episode was done in Sisterhooves Social, except Rarity and Sweetie Belle's roles are switched. If they had made it more original, I could see myself liking it. But it's an overrated episode.

 

6/10 - While not bad, it's not something I'd watch again. Speaking of overrated things I won't watch again...

 

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So if you read the entire top 10 best and worst list, you'd know that #1 is Best Night Ever. This falls into my "I don't give a damn" category. The story? Subpar. It's barely a story. The execution? Sloppy and inconsiderate of what they were trying to do.

 

In fact, let me reiterate on that. First off, the story. It's the overplayed everything-goes-wrong-but-everything-is-actually-right story. Nope. Just no. That ending was a slap in the face for anyone expecting a GOOD ENDING to the season finale! (and I don't care Return of Harmony was supposed to end the season originally. what was the season finale in the end?)

 

Next, the execution. The pacing is awful, guys. At some points, such as the beginning, it's real damn slow. But at other points, it's way too fast, such as Flutterbitch's breakdown. And the story stays sloppy the whole time.

Also, I should mention the song. Because apparently IT'S THE BEST THING EVER, duh! No, it's not. I said this with Babs Seed (I fucking hate that song), but I'll say it again. IT'S BORING. It also describes the selfish wants and desires of the main characters. We came for likable characters, but instead we got selfish assholes.

 

Finally, the worst part of the episode is the characters themselves. NONE OF THEM ARE LIKABLE. Not at all! This show is known for some of the most likable characters, but this episode diminishes our love for them. Applejack, Rarity, Fluttershy, and Rainbow Dash are all being a bitch, Twilight won't stop complaining, and Pinkie Pie is being flanderized beyond repair! GOD!

 

2/10 - Yeah, I've got a vendetta against this episode. I really hate it.

 

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Get a bottle of wine, grab a rope, and forget this night. I'm Ludicrous.Speed signing off!

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Then they follow it up with this... thing... and it seems that the idea is being overplayed (already happened in Sisterhooves Social; same FREAKIN' characters, BTW). I got bored after the first five minutes and didn't finish it for three days. THREE DAYS.

It's a far cry from having "already happened," darling.

 

In Sisterhooves Social, Sweetie Belle and her family show up to Rarity's home, invite themselves in and immediately make a mess of things. Sweetie Belle, out of good will, proceeds to mess with a lot of Rarity's things uninvited. While the frustration of Sweetie Belle always ruining Rarity's things was understandable, Rarity did lash out a bit too much and Sweetie's hurt was understandable, especially since she just wanted to help.

 

In the end, Rarity goes to hell and back to make it up for her sister, including posing as Applejack, completely immersing herself in mud, running the race, and going against everything she's about just to make it up to her sister, having realized her wrong and putting herself aside for her own sister.

However, the wrong is executed in a much more darker and selfish way in "For Whom the Sweetie Belle Toils." Rarity tries to help her sister by making her the best outfits she can for her play, despite having a career making-or-breaking client who's order she was really lagging behind on. She not only took the time she didn't have to work on her sister's clothing, but she also put 110% of her work in there, and it required assistance that she likely didn't want to ask for just so she'd be able to finish Sapphire Shore's ensemble.

 

Sweetie Belle's play was meh at best, apparently, but the outfits Rarity helped her with were met with universal praise and stole the show, so to speak. This frustrated Sweetie Belle who got really angry and took it ALL out on her undeserving sister.

 

What happened next? She sneaks into Rarity's room and sabotages the outfit for Sapphire Shores. It went further than just a contest - she was sabotaging Rarity's lifeblood, her passion - all out of jealousy and spite because the outfits shehad Rarity help her with stole the show.

 

There's a huge difference right there - more was at risk. Rarity's whole career was at risk, and Sweetie Belle essentially just wanted to run in a race with her sister.

 

Another difference that I mentioned much earlier was that Sweetie Belle also did things wrong in Sisterhooves Social, as opposed to Toils, where Rarity didn't deserve any of it. Sweetie deserved some of what she got, but definitely not all of it. Rarity didn't deserve a damn thing, let alone the potential loss of her lifelong passion at the hands of a greedy younger sibling.

 

Another difference is that Rarity realized her mistake. Sweetie Belle was content with letting Rarity's life crumble around her and didn't realize anything - and likely wouldn't have - until Luna intervened. Rarity was able to figure out by herself and correct the mistake - but what if Sweetie Belle didn't figure out on her own? Rarity's life would be ruined.Sweetie Belle showed no signs of remorse until Luna showed up.

 

So it was executed in a much different way, one that was much darker.

 

Furthermore, there was a huge ordeal at the end where they ran out and stole the headdress to fix it, this prompted running away from Rarity to fix the mistake, as opposed to Sisterhooves Social, where they had to work together. This time, to mend the mistake, they had to go up against each other, and that created a whole different feeling of urgency and anxiety.

 

The differences stop past the sibling bickering between Rarebear and Sweetie Belle. Overall, Toils was handled in a much darker way that emphasized pulling the viewer in by high risks and incredibly dark themes for this show, whilst Sisterhooves was much lighter and just focused on the sibling bickering in general.

 

Toils was much more of a personal battle of overcoming envy and selfishness on Sweetie Belle's part, and realizng how much it could hurt others, as opposed to Sisterhooves which was essentially Rarity needing to learn to be more appreciative and patient with her younger siblings.

 

Similar, yet very different, even to the untrained eye.

 

But the execution is horrible.

Part of being an analyst is providing supporting evidence as to why you felt that way, not just saying "it's like that" and then leaving it there. This whole analysis of these two episodes is laden with loose ends such as this that offer no explanation as to why you feel that way. How was the execution horrible? How was this character flanderized? Those statements mean nothing unless you can back them up with evidence supporting this.

 

Personally, I found the execution in Toils amazing. It created a real dark atmosphere that had me very worried for Rares and made think about about what a little bitch Sweets was being - Sisterhooves execution was much weaker in creating the emotions and feels because it showed Sweetie Belle doing wrong herself and there was much less at stake, as well as focusing more on Sweetie Belle when the development was meant for both her and Rarity, as opposed to Toils, where there was little development needed for Rarity.

 

If you feel the execution was bad, you gotta give it some evidence - because the execution in that episode was pretty great, honestly, and you can see why I feel that way by looking above.

 

 

Because OF the reference. It goes on for way too long and holds little substance towards the plot. I could have liked the dream sequence, but we got too much exposition and filler for me to decide what I think of the scene.

It was entirely crucial to the episode and what happened later. It built atmosphere and it helped Sweetie realize her mistake - otherwise she wouldn't of. It wasn't dragged out at all, it was all very crucial to helping Sweetie Belle see the error of her ways. If she didn't do that, she wouldn't have received any development and would have essentially become a villain for ruining Rarity's life - which she would've done, since Luna showed her in that dream sequence what *was going* to happen - not would *could have* happened, but 100% *was going* to happen.

 

Without that dream sequence, Sweetie Belle never would've seen what she did wrong, would've ruined Rarity's life, and never would've headed to Canterlot to mend her mistake, meaning that the rest of the episode wouldn't have happened and the dream sequence would've took it's place, meaning that cute little Sweetie Belle totally ruined her sister in the eyes of the public and the eyes of herself, and she'd be the only one to blame, making her, for all intents and purposes, a villain.

 

That dream sequence was not only completely necessary to the episode itself, but it was crucial to the series from that point forward, meaning that the criticism of it being "exposition" is completely false and nullified.

 


 

I only skimmed through your review on The Best Night ever, and I don't feel like typing out a long wall to defend it - ultimately, though, as a reviewer, I think you have a lot of things you need to work on. There's a lot you need to work on - I'll be glad to help you if you ever want it :D Until then, peace!

 

 

 

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