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You do a pretty good job at commentating I must say ;p. For some reason I like your commentary style, there were a few odd moments, but overall you did a pretty good job, and as someone who has tried, and done commentaries in the past, I know they are not easy, so kudos!

 

The main critique I have to give for the review is it felt a bit disorganized, the start of it was good as far as organization, with you focusing on the bad, then you go to the good, and you just kinda start talking about random parts of the movie it felt like.

 

The solution i'd propose for that, is to have some kind of script made for your reviews, detailing what you want to say, in order, or just have bullet points, just to keep on track. 

 

If you already have that, well, then if you like doing it this way that's fine, I just feel like it could use some more structure.

 

But overall, you did a pretty good job. Certainly a lot less long winded that I would be, so kudos! Can't wait to see some more!

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You do a pretty good job at commentating I must say ;p. For some reason I like your commentary style, there were a few odd moments, but overall you did a pretty good job, and as someone who has tried, and done commentaries in the past, I know they are not easy, so kudos!

 

The main critique I have to give for the review is it felt a bit disorganized, the start of it was good as far as organization, with you focusing on the bad, then you go to the good, and you just kinda start talking about random parts of the movie it felt like.

 

The solution i'd propose for that, is to have some kind of script made for your reviews, detailing what you want to say, in order, or just have bullet points, just to keep on track. 

 

If you already have that, well, then if you like doing it this way that's fine, I just feel like it could use some more structure.

 

But overall, you did a pretty good job. Certainly a lot less long winded that I would be, so kudos! Can't wait to see some more!

I actually did write a script. I started out writing it with the mindset of, "Yeah this is gonna be a great review!" And then about halfway through I just wanted to get this done.

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I actually did write a script. I started out writing it with the mindset of, "Yeah this is gonna be a great review!" And then about halfway through I just wanted to get this done.

Yeah, i can understand the feeling. I wrote a script for an analysis video I did on my YouTube channel for "Omega Ruby and Alpha Sapphire" and it took a while to write the script, especially with my procrastination, not to mention how many takes I recorded to get it right. And I spent a good bit of time on google images looking for images to fit the scripts too. Spent quite a few hours just making that one video.

 

Just try not to rush though, you'll be more proud in the end :).

 

Of course, I don't even do videos at all anymore, but that's my personal issues really.

 

Good job regardless again!

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