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Dark Qiviut


NOTE: Copied and pasted my review from here and contains some extra edits.

Trixie and Starlight's chant and dance were total cringe.

Looking for me to dish another negative? You ain't gonna find it here. :P

(On the) Road to Friendship's story's incredibly simple, its focus driven 100% by Starlight, Trixie, and their incredible chemistry. Just like Spike, Big Mac, and Discord from Break Down, they only became friends two seasons ago, yet thanks to Haber's clever writing, you'd think their friendship goes back to childhood. Until Season 6, Trixie only stood center stage for Boast Busters, Magic Duel, and Rainbow Rocks as a tertiary character. But Haber brought her into becoming a reoccurring character and has become a vehicle for storytelling around Starlight.

Their magnificent chemistry is thanks to Haber's incredibly tight dialogue, a continuous improvement of the show started by Shadow Play. With everything they say to and about each other, you buy into it, whether it's their praise, banter, jokes, passive-aggressive insults, and full-blown arguing. Their exchanges were snappy and completely believable; each moment and line flowed so well, even when the vocabulary repeats, with no hitch at all.

Thanks to their chemistry, Haber takes advantage of as many comedic opportunities as possible. Virtually all of them land. Some of my favorites include:

  1. Starlight teleporting back to the school in a hurry, only to briefly return to say goodbye in between.
  2. Starlight throwing a little meta joke about how Twilight and friends would sing a song to commemorate their voyage, only for them both to start a song themselves.
  3. Blowing open the inflatable raft causes Starlight to get pinned to the window.
  4. During their descent into fighting, Starlight and Trixie share passive-aggressive barbs at each other during the Somnambula magic show.
  5. While sleeping in the caravan in Somnambula, Trixie talks and rehearses in her sleep, while Starlight snores noisily, each a callback to previous episodes. Kudos to Haber for using a combined pun of the village's name.
  6. The elder pony peaks out of the chest, sees nothing happening, and returns to sleep. Cue credits. :laugh:

But the best comedy comes during We're Friendship-Bound. Aside from being the season's best song up to this point, it's incredibly upbeat with catchy lyrics and just-as-catchy jazzy beat. Like Apples to the Core four seasons ago, its jovial tone reverberates through each scene, which ranged in activity, danger, and atmosphere. I don't recall the last time Pinkie broke the fourth wall, but Trixie and Starlight shattered it everywhere, especially this line(!):


Trixie: For untold seasons yet to come, our friendship will be here.

Starlight Glimmer: For nine, at least!


But like the rest of the season, Haber progressively tests their friendship.

  1. While Starlight's preoccupied at the school, Hoo'Far asks if he can trade his bigger caravan for hers. She says no, because it's her home. Her smaller, cramped wagon comes into play twice, including as they relaxed the first time.
  2. Trixie closes the door, causing SG to accidentally drop a smoke bomb.
  3. Starlight wasting bits on street food over essentials.
  4. Trixie waiting a long time in line for a particular street vendor over shopping at another empty vendor that orders the same thing.
  5. After all the hotels are booked, they get really testy with each other. Despite apologizing with each other…
  6. …they get really cramped inside her wagon. Starlight can't move, so she moves the smoke bombs, squashing Trixie. They couldn't sleep in the same room! Trixie wrapped a bandana around her muzzle to stop her snoring.
  7. Next morning, thy passive-aggressively take the last of each others' food, the haycake by SG, the juice by Trixie. This passive aggression continued into the failed magic show, one of Road to Friendship's funniest scenes.
  8. The water boils that night when they traded sleep- and meal-related insults and accusations, culminating with Starlight ejecting Trixie's supplies and:

    Trixie: Well, since you're so concerned about space, you can have it all! I'll sleep under the stars, where at least the wild animals will be QUIETER THAN YOU!

But the boiling foamed the next morning when Starlight traded away her wagon for his behind her back. You think that her impulsiveness would let her think twice about trading it away. Despite her decent alibi of traveling with a roomier wagon, Starlight has two major problems here:

  1. Her timing. Neither of them got along and fought the night before. Those feelings pass over here.
  2. Starlight traded it while Trixie slept. It doesn't matter if your intentions are good. This is her property, and she decides what to do with it, not SG.

It ain't no surprise why Trixie's so upset; her anger's completely justified. Starlight comes off as a major plothole here, why she's primarily written to be in the wrong in Act 3, and becomes the episode's primary apologizer. This is a reversal of No Second Prances, but done way better. In the former, Trixie used Starlight, and she had to make it up to her. Here, Starlight screwed up badly and has to make it up.

Some are a little disappointed we see nothing of Saddle Arabia beyond just Hoo'Far (who, BTW, had really excellent and witty dialect), but like Chrysalis in The Mean Six, those who do miss the point. This episode's about experiencing the ups and downs of friendship, having their friendship tested, overcoming it, and becoming closer. In the grand scope, Saddle Arabia isn't necessary, and the story in between more than makes up for it.

All in all, it's an excellent episode — one of the best of not just the season, but the show, too. :D


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Another good review! :) Bonus points for how you used the word "plothole"! :laugh:

I agree with most of the points so I don't have much to add myself... I especially liked how the episode was comedic but that didn't keep them from exploring Starlight and Trixie's friendship well. I think it made up a little for the lack of Trixie this season. Also part of an amazing five-episode streak – one of the most impressive in the whole series.

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@Dark Qiviut

First off, great review, My Friend! :-D

If Starlight snores so loud her village thought they heard a bear every night, Starlight must've spared every expense when it came to constructing "Our Town".

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