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Trying out narrative


Eniac

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Aaarrrgh. I just have so much work to do and I can't work non stop so I just don't have time!! So I am going to try out writing in the narrative style because I have never done that before!! So we will see how this goes.

I'll try the landlord, so I have to get into the 'mind' of the landlord late at night. Now most people don't always focus on the task at hand anyway, I am going to start from him saying goodnight to a fellow pony:

 - Goodnight, I will try and remember to get them to you tomorrow morning. At the moment I have to wait for a new visitor. No time to explain now, it's late. - Yea far to late. Look the moon is nearly at it's peak. Though winter is coming so the moon will be higher. But no the moon is still at it's peak so it's the phase of the moon that is important. Actually what's important is that I am freezing, should have brought a coat. I could go get a coat, ah but then knowing sods law he, is it he I can't remember should be obvious though. What was I thinking, oh yes must remember to get the paper work sent to Mr. Field or else I'll be quite a few bits short this next month, how do you remember stuff again. Oh yes repeat the name 5 times

- Mr. Fields, Mr Fields, Mr. Fields, Mr. Fi. - Mr. I sound like and idiot. this is useless I need to write it down somewhere. Ah yes I have some paper in my pocket. So papers to Mr. Fields ASAP. I wish I could do that ASAP beats standing around in the cold out here waiting for a pony, though he does pay a fair price, more than fair he pays overprice. But then I have to organise groceries? Seems kinda sketchy, like Sketchy himself, glad he has left this town. It was him on the outskirts when Mr. Fields was shouting about missing planks one hundred percent, hundred and ten. But no he was long go by then, don't believe one bit of that he's still biding his time he'll come back. Best buds way back when stopped that pretty swiftly straight after he stole...the thing or was that he asked for some bits for something. He'll be back he doesn't know what to do out there.

- Mr. Fields. - Nope can't do that just can't in the middle of the night right on the edge of town people would think I'd gone loony. Loony, Is that just werewolves? It has the word lunar, well sort of, must be talking to the moon. It is pretty large must be full moon, definitely clear skies thanks to the weather ponies I am freezing down here. But who's going to go out of their way for a pony waiting for who knows what coming over the horizon. Coming over the horizon. It's not moving with much pace. I'll go meet him but it might not be him might just be the mind, yup I am definitely loony.

I don't know, this was just word purge but that's generally how internal monologue works. Might have to spin to take in the surroundings. Maybe have him walking to the house not him already being there. Also I do not need to track every train of thought. using the dashes rather than speech marks because speech normally flows into internal monologue seamlessly, this allows the reader to know when something is said out loud. Anything said by another pony will be in quotations

Anyway, this was the worst post because I am tired and a bit enough of all this work:unamused:

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