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Nightmare Night Fanfic Contest Entry - The Demon Of The Everfree


TheRockARooster

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Here's my Nightmare Night Fanfic Contest Entry, I hope you like it. ^^

 

Once upon a time in the magical land of Equestria, a group of ponies were gathered around a campire on what was known as Nightmare Night.

This group of ponies consisted of Applejack, Big Macintosh, Granny Smith, Applebloom, Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo.

Applejack said 'Happy Nightmare Night Everpony!' and the others yelled back 'HAPPY NIGHTMARE NIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!'.

Applejack asked 'who wants to hear a scary story?' and the group nodded.

Big Mac said 'Eeeeyup!!'

Applejack said 'I have one, have y'all heard about the Demon Of The Everfree'.

The group shook their heads.

Granny Smith asked 'what's that one about, Applejack?'.

Applejack replied with 'well, you're about to find out'.

Applebloom said 'this sounds so scary and exciting'.

Sweetie Belle answered 'more scary to me'.

Scootaloo also answered 'it sounds awwwwwesome'.

Applejack smiled and started telling the story 'once, long ago in the Everfree Forest was a group of ponies camping like we are tonight', the ponies were a female amber unicorn named Caramel Bee, a female charcoal gray earth pony named Little Twister, a female turqoise blue pegasus named Pinwheel and an older cream coloured earth pony named Moondust who was Little Twister's grandfather.

Applejack continued 'they were just finished having their supper when they all heard a roar in the forest and it was like nothing they'd heard before in their lives, Caramel asked 'what was that?' and Moondust said 'that's the Demon Of The Everfree and it's hunting tonight, we should leave', the group of scared ponies packed up all that they owned and started to leave the area when Little Twister screamed, the others ran to her side and saw what she was screaming at, two bright red eyes in the total darkness staring at them, watching them which could only mean the Demon Of The Everfree'.

The group gasped loud as Applejack continued telling the story, 'Moondust yelled at them to run as the eyes started moving towards them, the ponies started running as fast as they could to get away as the eyes got closer to them'.

'Caramel Bee, Little Twister, Pinwheel and Moondust got to safety but could hear loud footsteps behind them'.

'Moondust said 'it's coming' while Pinwheel yelled 'RUN!!!!', the ponies started running as the monster stepped out of the forest, they looked back and the head of the giant beast, it's skin was all black and it's eyes still red like hot coals and it had white sharp teeth, they finally saw the Demon Of The Everfree, which made them run faster than ever'.

'They made it back to town where they finally got a chance to rest after the scariest moment of their lives'.

'As they were resting, they heard a voice say 'you saw it and you survived?'.

'They looked up and saw a black pegasus with red eyes and the blue and yellow mane standing before them'.

'Moondust said 'the stories were true, it's real', the pegasus started to walk away but he turned and said 'I believe you' then he continued walking away'.

'Moondust and the others watched as the pegasus then flew away, Moondust then hugged Little Twister, Pinwheel and Caramel Bee as all went back to their homes'.

Applejack finished the story, 'and they all lived happily ever after'.

Big Mac, Granny Smith, Applebloom, Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo all clapped.

Applebloom said 'Wow sis, that was wicked scary'.

Sweetie Belle said 'I'm glad they all made it home safely'.

Scootaloo asked 'Hey Applejack, is this a true story?'.

Big Mac intervened and said 'EEEEYUP!!!!', which made the three fillies shake and scared.

Granny Smith scolded him, 'Big Mac, you don't go around scaring the young ones'.

Big Mac smiled and shrugged.

Applejack laughed, 'maybe it's time for us all to get some sleep'.

The ponies all turned around and headed to their tents and lay themselves down for sleep as Applejack turned to face the forest and looked at it and smiled.

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Moments ago, Rainboomer Zap said:

Well written!

Thank you, my friend. ^^

 

4 hours ago, Thankful Brony 42 said:

I had a pony named Pinwheel in the first draft of my story, but I took him out.

That's awesome. ^^

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1 minute ago, Diane Velvet said:

This is a lovely story :BrightMacContent:

how was writing this story for you rocky?

It was fun, Guardian. ^^

Thank you. ^^

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Glad it ends on a good note, I wrote a story not too long ago, it was about G3 ponies going corrupted and saddened from  being seemingly forgotten by their fans long ago, it was up to a couple of ponies (Minty, Kimono, Sunny Daze, Rarity and Wysteria) along with Spike, saving the day and returning Rainbow Dash, Scootaloo, Starsong, Pinkie Pie, Cheerilee, Sweetie Belle, and Toola Roola to their original forms. I haven't finished it, but I would like to soon. 

Love the story BTW, and everypony seems in character! :D 

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6 hours ago, Stellar Heights said:

Glad it ends on a good note, I wrote a story not too long ago, it was about G3 ponies going corrupted and saddened from  being seemingly forgotten by their fans long ago, it was up to a couple of ponies (Minty, Kimono, Sunny Daze, Rarity and Wysteria) along with Spike, saving the day and returning Rainbow Dash, Scootaloo, Starsong, Pinkie Pie, Cheerilee, Sweetie Belle, and Toola Roola to their original forms. I haven't finished it, but I would like to soon. 

Love the story BTW, and everypony seems in character! :D 

Thank you so much, Stellar. ^^

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