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Wrote a song


Acoustic Cloud

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Random song I just did now :/ I had written the chorus forever ago but I just sat down and typed out some versus. Saw some sad pictures and put some lyrics to it...

I think it would be key of Am and the chorus would be in F or C or something of that sort. (probably doesn't flow except in my head.)

It's pretty slow so...yah. :mellow:

What do you guys think??? :huh:

EDIT: I'd prefer if nobody make fun of it...

 

Verse 1

Is anyone there?

Can you see my despair?

Does somebody care...

That this is happening to me

 

Verse 2

Why try and race?

Why try to win?

I need to face...

these fears within.

 

Chorus

Because life is but a memory;

soft, fragile, and easily forgotten

and as it passes you will see

that life is but a memory.

 

Verse 3

I'm lost, I'm sore

What am I here for?

Can't get up off this floor.

I'm done with it all.

 

Bridge

There must be something more,

past what my eyes can see

It's there, my sight does not decieve

We'll wait and see what it may be

But for now let this here remain....

Nothing more than a memory.

 

//It's a bit rough but I think with some tweaks I might get this into a full song....

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Do you have a melody for it? If you do, you should try to see if you can get someone to sing it for you (when it's done of course) :)

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I'm actually making a melody for it now! Just got the m-audio fast track plugged in and I'm fiddling around with it until I like the sound.

Either I or someone else will sing it :/ I'll see :P

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