Greetings, everypony!

So the first chapter of my most recent fan fiction is finished, now I just need someone to help me out with editing it before posting it on FimFiction.net!

If anypony wants to provide a helping hand, please let me know! I would like to have one or two people just look this over and provide any critical feedback on grammar, content, and consistency/flow.

Thank you in advance!

~Silver Quill