Glad to see some more positive reactions here than on r/mylittlepony, Sure it wasn't perfect, but it was really enjoyable(even more than some real mlp episodes like "Spike for your Service").
The jokes worked out for me, the animation was well and I also liked the pacing because it put emphasis on gestics, mimics, etc....
Only the end felt a bit rushed and not so good. Overall a 8/10 from me. I feel really bad for the person who made it though, because he worked hard and some Bronies seem to be completely off their rocker lately with unreasonable critics. It's quite shocking in my opinion that so many people in that community are really ungrateful, harsh and seem to be not able to enjoy anything that isn't completely perfect. (I am talking more about what I've seen on reddit, not here)