I, too, like to pull out the old typewriter and lay down some phat rhymes. May I provide some critique?
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CamRad18's List of Things to Change/Work on
1. The way you wrote this is quite cliche (monster inside me, internal struggle, persecution, etc.) Poetry is all about taking an idea and putting your unique twist on it. Every teenager in existence has written a "tortured soul" poem like this at some point.
2. As fun as being chained to a delectable cut of beef sounds, I believe the word you're looking for is "stake".
3. Capitalization is an awesome way to emphasize an idea or start a new line (although it's not necessary). However, capitalizing all willy nilly robs it of any importance and makes the poem look like it was hastily scrawled in an awkwardly spaced Word document.
4. Same goes for indentations. Lines and stanzas should be divided purposefully. Don't just hit the Enter key whenever it feels convenient.
5. comma, comma, comma, comma, comma, comma...no ending punctuation? It's like a cliffhanger with no foreseeable conclusion! Punctuation isn't required, but if you're going to use it make sure to do so consistently throughout the poem. Make sure it grammatically correct, too.
p.s. If you like poetry, then keep on writing it! I'd be happy to help you out with any future work if you'd like.