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  1. CamRad18
    I like you, you have good ideas. Gustave shall arrive late, and it will be FABULOUS. griffin griffin
  2. CamRad18
    hmmm...maybe I'll attempt a post a little later. For now, homework has me chained to my Word document.
  3. CamRad18
    I hate to do it guys, but I'm going to withdraw from this RP. You guys are WAY to far in the story and I don't want to awkwardly butt in.
  4. CamRad18
    brohoofs are nice, but comments would be most appreciated. Five stood ‘round one graveside Tears in their eyes “Kindness may pass but never truly dies” Four sat ‘round one graveside Near another old plot “Keep Ponyville laughing That’s what she would want” Three knelt ‘round one graveside Their sextet now halved “Death took the one thing She’d have taken back” Two lay ‘round one graveside Near four aging stones “A hard truth to swallow; she found her way home” One cried at the graveside of five dear old friends “such morbid irony by life’s cruel pen” Naught stirred at the graveside save life incarnate words left unspoken dripped upon granite
  5. CamRad18
    In that case, I'm sorry for needlessly assaulting you with my reasoning behind this poem. I most certainly plan to do free verse in the future.
  6. CamRad18
    Jolly good on you, but that doesn't answer the question. Here's the reasons I chose this structure: Reason #1: Separating the deaths creates continuity. Each death wears the characters down a little more. Free verse would create a jumbled mess, with no sense of time. Free verse would also render each death meaningless, as another one would take it's place in mere seconds Reason #2: Funerals are orderly, processional events. I wanted the structure of this poem to reflect that. Reason #3: Each stanza serves as an epitaph for the character mentioned. They are each a separate entity, similar to the phrases written on a gravestone. So, why do you think free verse would contribute to this poem. (again, genuine curiosity. I'm not trying to be mean.)
  7. CamRad18
    What do you mean "get much better"? How would a different structure and rhyme scheme contribute to the poem? This was NOT meant to sound mean/accusatory. I'm genuinely curious as to what you would suggest.
  8. CamRad18
    Here's the "fleshed out" version of the poem I posted a few days ago, which can be found here. As always, comment, brohoof, and criticize. Five stood ‘round one graveside Tears in their eyes “Kindness may pass but never truly dies” Four sat ‘round one graveside Near another old plot “Keep Ponyville laughing That’s what she would want” Three knelt ‘round one graveside Their sextet now halved “Death took the one thing She’d have taken back” Two lay ‘round one graveside Near four aging stones “A hard truth to swallow; she found her way home” One cried at the graveside of five dear old friends “such morbid irony by life’s cruel pen” Naught stirred at the graveside save life incarnate words left unspoken dripped upon granite
  9. CamRad18
    yes sir, there is. There's a thread (conveniently titled "MLP Trading Cards") in which people discuss, share, and trade their cards.
  10. CamRad18
    Does playing the recorder in 4th grade count? Just kidding. I, like everyone else here, play the guitar. I've had this decidedly common skill for about four years now.
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    CamRad18 posted a blog entry in Rhymey Time with CamRad18

    Here comes the feels train! Have some rhymes n' stuff. when Kindness withers and Laughter dies Generosity ages Honesty says goodbye Magic stayed longer soon to perish what good is Loyalty With no one to cherish?
  12. CamRad18
    I know what you mean; I have the same problem, except online. I just bought a box of MLP trading cards and a binder to hold them. ...I've never collected trading cards in my life.
  13. CamRad18
    Not since the last time I checked, no. TPAM likes teh wubz
  14. CamRad18
    I almost didn't write this poem because it's so sad. Keep an eye out for the companion piece I'm writing. It adds some depth to the story. As always, comment, criticize, brohoof, etc. When Kindness withers and Laughter dies. Generosity ages, Honesty says goodbye. Magic stayed longer, soon to perish. What good is Loyalty with no one to cherish?
  15. CamRad18
    so...I noticed a severe lack of my character in the OC list, even though I posted him about a week ago... Conspiracy?
  16. CamRad18
    A van would probably make a better fortress of tears, don't you think?
  17. CamRad18
    I'm pretty sure molestia's somewhere in my avatar... All of you. Royal bedchambers. Now!
  18. CamRad18
    What you speak of is impossible, the stuff of legends... TPAM has "Smile, smile, smile" stuck in their head.
  19. CamRad18
    I can feel the moisture...it's delightful.
  20. CamRad18
    No, I'm definitely a guy. This was more of a sarcastic post than anything else. Don't blame me, I was sleep deprived when I wrote it.
  21. CamRad18
    no, you go away!
  22. CamRad18
    can I have yo numbah?
  23. CamRad18
    I just got a bunch of Prom pictures I can't wait to po- *loading* Celestia damn you, male genitalia! It's your fault I can't be the cutest girl brony on this site!
  24. CamRad18
    I'll give this a chance, albeit with a considerable amount of skepticism. None of this is going to end up as canon, right? Right?!?
  25. CamRad18
    I never really understood the brohoof counter, to be honest. You're either "neutral" or "excellent" and 99.8% of users are in the "excellent" category ...on the other hand, maybe Feld0 just wants everyone to feel special, and we're crushing that dream one post at a time.
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