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    twilight is my favorite pony and always has been. I identify with her because I too am a bookworm and a bit socially reclusive. ever since I moved from my home town in the middle of 2nd grade I have found it hard to make friends and fit in, so I kind of figured it wasn't important to make friends. so I will stick with Twi through thick and thin. besides Wings Are Attractive.
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    Human Twi (Squee!!!)

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    Terran Sol
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    sounds good so far. i would very much like to see more please. i believe this has great potential. and you should continue with this story line
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    WHOOPS!!! Was Under The Fluttershy Effect (yes i came up with that name) it is when you cant help but fall under her enchenting personality and are consumed by her cute-ness where you just want to hug her and keep her safe.
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    you are doing fine except for the curse word near the end i strongly suggest you change or remove it. if i were you i would heed my advice for i have read many, many books in my life. and have become quite adept at critiqueing them, i am glad to help when i can.
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    amnesia the dark decent anyone? I mean you could include an abandoned mental asylum or dark castle lost in a chain of volcanic islands shrouded in dark grey/red mist, or cloud. With alarming shadow shape figures hidden in the depths. In which she takes up residence for the duration of the crisis.
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    yes I agree Pinkie is a much needed stress reliever for those times when you just need to smile
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    yes I agree Pinkie is a much needed stress reliever for those times when you just need to smile
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    I like Trains... Fluttershy is best PONY!!! Hey has anyone heard from <Luna's Chosen>?
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