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withdrawn from her family and friends. Suddenly, she begins to fall ill, and as she is state a fever dream appears before her showing her images of destruction, and decay. Once awaken from the dream, she begins to recall the images and they drive her mad. Finishing with her running off to create a world of her own design in which she can feel safe.

That is really cool, but the last line sounds like the start of a story or RP of its own. Overall a cool premise for a character. And now I have the burning urge to play a RP that takes place in a world created by a demented girl with powers to shape the world around her.

Huzzah, my plan worked. I actually had a terribly difficult time trying to make darkish without falling to much into cliché, and I figured that having a incredibly confusing dream brought on by illness would be the best bet.