Pieces of a Grey Cloud. A sad fic about a mentally challenged Derpy Hooves. Its simplified writing style emphasizes her innocent and emotionally painful experiences as she attempts to survive each day. It is written to be very simple and honest, and hurts deep because of that.
I'll read deflated first and give my opinion on all the fanfics I read. I don't think I'll red Pieces of a Grey Cloud though. It doesn't really seem that interesting
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