Blue Moon

For having a pretty avatar and username.

8/10

Sure! I will make sure to just review Dust then when I get to your request. But if you ever change your mind, don't hesitate to ask for a review for Volt.

I will make sure to do your review as soon as I finish the requests before you. Patience, my friend. OC: Cerulean Sky Owner: Cerulean Sky First off; the design. I've always loved that color scheme, so I definitely have no problems with it. It is very pretty and the colors go very well together. They don't clash, and aren't too flashy. I like how that color scheme goes with the name as well. I love the mane style as well; it is really unique and pretty. So yeah, I like this design quite a bit, and have no issues with it. Her personality. Well, there technically isn't anything wrong with the personality. It has negative traits, positive ones, and interests that reflect off the cutie mark. However, this OC has a really plain personality due to the fact that the traits chosen for her are some of the most common ones in OCs I see. I recommend adding more traits that better define Cerulean Sky. Perhaps you could use some traits often found in people with creative abilities. And a little personal touch to the personality is always nice. Aside from that, you could also pick more traits that you yourself have and incorporate them into Cerulean Sky's personality (I'm assuming the already existing traits are yours as well.) Lastly, her backstory. Well, it feels overly tragic to me. I'm not particularly fond of OCs being orphaned for no good reason, and there doesn't appear to be any reasoning other than the fact that she gets to live under the care of Starlight. Now, you have the right idea in showing how she earned her cutie mark, but they're better ways that this can be accomplished. You could just have her be a teacher that your OC's mom hired to teach Cerulean Sky artistic things and go from there; establishing a relationship between them. Also, I don't think you should kill both of the parents, but I guess only having the Dad die would be okay, but I would like it better if they stayed alive. Keeps her a bit more normal. But I like how she earned her cutie mark in the backstory. Overall, an OC with a great design, a plain personality that could use some additions, and a backstory that could have been written better. Grade: B-

Harry Potter is my absolute favorite book (well, book series) ever and will probably stay that way. I love those books to death and have read all of them at least three times; if not more. I also like The Hobbit and some of Stephen King's work along with White Fang. The Underneath is a great book as well as Milkweed.

OC: #1 OC Ever Owner: Shift I shall begin my review with the design. Wow. Well, she is certainly colorful. However, OC's related to rainbows usually don't have the best color schemes and your's is no exception. There is simply too much going on and the colors clash very badly. For starters, the coat color. It is very bold and obtrusive, so I recommend toning the color down to a more pastel color. But the accessories really look bad on this OC and should be excluded entirely. Next, the mane. It looks really weird to have a single base mane for half the mane and rainbows for the rest. I recommend just using one or two colors for mane color schemes. For this OC, after you tone down the coat, you should just use the pink color in the mane for the whole mane color. This would probably look very nice with a lighter tone of the color for the coat. As for the wings, they should match the coat color and you should get rid of the white and rainbow parts. That should fix the clashing. Lastly, the eyes. They should be just one color, not rainbow colored. Pick a single color and use that. Aside from that actual design, the written description for the appearance is inaccurate and should match the actual design. And you really shouldn't add all those powers regarding the appearance. In this case, they make your OC into a Mary Sue. Next off; the personality. There are simply too many positive traits and little flaws. The personality you give to this OC makes the world work perfectly for the OC and that is very Mary Stuish. Try to lower down all of his positive traits and add more interests. And try to use more distinct personality traits for the OC. The ones you chose are very plain and are used way too much. Using more distinct traits helps differentiate your OC from other OCs. Lastly, the backstory. Please rewrite this. It makes no sense whatsoever. Why is your OC an all powerful being and there is no reasoning behind his actions or the events that happen to him. And, please don't give your OC all those powers. All those powers and abilities are the exact reasons alicorns are often disliked. If you are going to use an alicorn for the OC, try to make the OC as normal as possible and don't make them all powerful. Overall, an OC that needs a new color scheme, a new personality, and a rewritten backstory. A perfect example of a Mary Sue. Grade: F- I can't believe I just reviewed that seriously. I will do your review as soon as I finish the requests that were made before you. Regular guys tend to be the best kind of OCs in my opinion.

OC: Tropical Jubilee Owner: Tropical Jubilee First off; design. Well, the colors chosen certainly reflect the name "Tropical Jubilee" well, but I have a few suggestions to make the colors even better. Now, this color scheme is certainly unique and I quite like it, but the colors are a bit too bold. Try toning them down a bit. If you do this, making the hair darker or the coat lighter might help along with the toning down of the colors. But overall, I like this design. The expression given in the photos reflect his personality very well, and i love the mane and tail style. The goatee is a nice touch as well. Next up; the personality. You did a great job with this part. I like how he's laid-back and thinks everything in the world is just dandy. It really gives a good character while making the flaws of him correspond with the positive traits of him very well in a subtle manner. It really gives a more polished look to his personality that is very nice for an OC. And I love how you added a little something for his voice and language. It really makes him much more unique. Lastly; the backstory. Well, the only thing you added that could be kind of taken as a backstory is his cutie mark. I know he has a love for his jungle home, but that is a bit broad and I think you should pick something a bit more distinct for his special talent. Perhaps he was meant to grow and harvest bananas and that is what his cutie mark reflects on. Try thinking of a talent that would fit in a jungle environment, and try to use that for the cutie mark. Also, a backstory of his life would be nice. Overall, an OC that could use toned down color scheme and a better backstory for a cutie mark and backstory in general, but has a great personality and unique design. Grade: B-

On piano, I first learned "Mary had a Little Lamb." Yes, I'm pathetic. But I have learned a lot more since then. I can play the first few seconds of Viva La Vida by Coldplay, Most of Clocks by Coldplay, and I'm almost done learning the whole "The Scientist" by Coldplay.

I guess niece then.

Known for liking anime and having adorable avatars.

7/10 See you from time to time.

Parrot

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1/10 First time seeing you. Nice to meet you!

Well, grammar is very important to me and I try to use proper grammar as best as I can in most of my conversations. I like to sound as proper as I can, so that is why. I may correct you from time to time, but I'll usually just ignore anyone else' grammatical errors. Using proper grammar can be useful as well. If you use improper grammar to a certain degree, it may make your intended message come out wrong or make it harder for the reader to figure out what you're trying to say.