Blue Moon

Ok, for the first new one, here are some names. Holly Christmas Rose Fire Flower Purity Christmas Day Morning Bells Belle Golden Bells Sunrise Sun Dawn Fireluck Love Second new OC: Green Tranquility Tranquility Green Wisdom Harmony Olive Jade Green Skies Green Sky Aquamarine Emerald Hope these help in some way. I'm not the best at names.

6/10

10/10 Well, it works. xD

10/10 Not exactly sure what a Zygen is, but it sounds cool.

7/10

You haven't been skipped and not everyone's OC's have been reviewed yet. I am going in order if you look at the requests made and the reviews given. I will give your review as soon as I get through the requests that were made before you requested. It would be very rude of me if I were to skip over the people who requested before you. Please be patient. It takes quite a bit to make the reviews and I am going as fast as possible, but I have been quite busy. Thanks!

Um, I'll leave now...

Ok, sounds good. Rewording usually makes things appear much better and flow better as well. Yeah, I kind of like the look of Dark Moon with a satchel more than his look with armor. Your call though. Your welcome. Glad I could provide criticism. Hopefully you found it helpful. Kind of off-topic, but since it discussing the quality of an OC, I'll say it. Is is odd of me to give my OC a grade of C- ? If I were to give a full review of mine, the grade would be C-.

Kiss

Games tend to be scarier as your put into the shoes of whoever the horror story is happening too which amplifies the scariness factor by quite a bit. So in my opinion, games tend to be scarier. However, movies can be more memorable and if they do manage to scare, they often do it very well. And there are some things you can only have in horror movies that don't exist in games. This is a hard choice, but I think I'll have to go with saying that horror games are better.

8/10

10/10

OC: Brown Horizon Owner: Sir.Flutter Hooves Well, you didn't provide a profile for this OC, so I can't review the backstory or personality as there isn't one. I will just review the design. If you provide a profile, then I will edit this post as soon as you give me the profile. Ok, let's begin. The design for Brown Horizon works, but I feel it is a bit too brown. Yes, I know his name is BROWN Horizon, but a little color contrast is always nice. So, I think you should add more colors to him besides brown, but that's just my opinion. Also, the watch on his foreleg looks really weird and I think you should keep his legs free of accessories. Overall, a nice looking OC that could use more diversity in the color scheme and could do without the watch. Grade: C+ OC: Vivid Kicks Owner: Sir.Flutter Hooves For reasons said above, I cannot review the personality or backstory, and will be reviewing the design instead until missing elements are given. Let's begin. I don't really know what to say about the design of Vivid Kicks. The colors are usually bad looking colors and they look like they would clash easily, but somehow; the color scheme is actually good. I have no idea how you made it look good with those colors, but you did and it looks very nice. Grade: B- OC: Aura Owner: Lady Rainicorn No personality or backstory given, so like with Sir.Flutter Hooves' OCs, I will have to only review the design unless the missing elements are given. Let's begin. Wow, a dragon OC. That's something rather new. Anyway, Aura is a very cute dragon OC and I like the main skin and eye colors, but I think that the underbelly color is a bit too prominent of a color. I feel it would look better if the shade of yellow in the drawing was replaced with a paler shade of yellow to complement the grey part better. Grade: A- OC: Dark Moon Owner: Dark Moon Starting off with the design, I like it quite a bit. It looks nice and I don't have any major issues with the base design. However, I think the armor should be redone in some way. He looks nice with armor and all, but it looks really weird to have armor on certain spots only. The locations chosen for the armor pieces make the whole thing look cluttered. Next up, his personality. Wow, he has a lot of traits. Socially awkward, kind, intelligent, not arrogant, never gossips, fearless, minor anger issues, a little impatient, goofy, and competitive. I think the personality should be edited a bit. It kind of feels like he was given random traits with no correlation to each other. Try giving him a distinct personality with traits that would make sense together. But you did a good job with avoiding not giving enough traits, but you kind of went overboard with this. His backstory fits his personality and I don't really have any problem with it. However, there was a minor spelling error in the backstory in the profile. The plural of pegasus is pegasi, not pegasuses. That's about it. Overall, this OC could use some edits to the armor in his design and could benefit from a more distinct personality. Grade: C- OC: Silverwisp the Bard Owner: Silverwisp the Bard Design first. I really like the design for Silverwisp. I especially like his hat and it really has a lot of character to it. His cutie mark looks nice as well. However, the color scheme does seem quite similar to that of Big McIntosh's. This is a very minor issue and isn't really worthy of being mentioned, but I decided to say it anyway. I love the personality for him. It is very simple, yet it works perfectly. I really like how is flaw is something very unique for OCs I see most of the time. Kind of reminds me of Pinkie Pie, but in a good way. Anyway, probably one of my favorite personalities I have seen so far in OCs. His backstory is rather lacking in details, but it isn't that bad and it works for his simple character. So yeah, don't really have too many issues with it. Overall, a great OC that is worthy of: Grade: A+

Long lost Grandpa

Nope. 22?