Blue Moon

OC: Icarus Owner: Twiliscael I like this OC quite a bit. He is interesting to me because his name suggests that he is cool and awesome (Couldn't think of better words), but he actually turns out to be just be an "Average Joe." It is kind of humorous and clever on your part. As for his backstory, it's kind of plain but I think it fits for this kind of character. I like how he just a normal pegasus and not some overlord or all-powerful pony like I see with some OCs. (Not all; just some.) His personality has a natural feel to it and it is very believable and because of that; I could see him as a character in the show. He has a cool design as well. The colors fit nicely with the name and the cutie mark is a nice too. While I don't particularly like the mane design on its own, you made it look nice on your OC. Overall, I saw nothing wrong with this OC and it is pretty unique to see such a normal OC. Grade A+ OC: Snowdream Owner: Snowdream Snowdream has a nice pretty design that is pleasing to the eye. I like the color scheme you chose for her and fits her character very well. Her personality works, but I see the traits you used for her in a lot of other OCs. Nothing wrong with them; even my OC has similar traits. But I think you should add a bit more to her personality. I think a few more unique traits would help the personality greatly. I also found a lack of Snowdreams's interests. Interests and dislikes are important parts of a character's personality and I think you should give her some. What does she like to do? What doesn't she like? I'm not particularly fond of the backstory as it seems incomplete. I think tell how she got inside the sphere or at least elaborate more on that part of backstory. Also, I think you should add more about her brother. You didn't give a lot of detail on that other than she had a brother. How did he disappear? It doesn't really feel necessary to mention if you don't give more info on it. Overall, a pretty solid OC that has a pretty design and theme, but could benefit from editing to the backstory and personality. Grade: B+ OC: Mist Chaser Owner: Snowdream I love the design for Mist Chaser! It has such a good look and the colors are perfect together. The mane style is very good too and I like how it is messy; gives more character to her. And the expression goes very well with the traits given. I kind of liked the personality of Mist Chaser. It has pretty nice trait and the "flirty" trait was a great idea and it makes your OC much more unique. It leads me to wonder if she happens to like writing or reading romance novels... However, the personality is lacking any flaws for Mist Chaser. It is good to give a fictional character flaws as well as good traits as it gives them a more three-dimensional personality. But I do like how she has an interest in writing; good to know she has interests which helps the character a lot. I don't like the backstory though. In my opinion, it doesn't focus on Mist Chaser enough and doesn't give much detail. You don't explain why she was bullied which isn't good. You should give some reasoning why she was bullied which in the process; could give your OC some needed flaws. Also, I know your OC has a flirty personality, but I think you shouldn't focus on that as much as focusing on other things such as her interest in writing. Writing seems like the main focus in her character and a backstory to reflect that would help greatly. Overall, a very nice looking OC with a personality that could use some additions and a backstory that should be edited a bit. Grade: C+ OC: Peach Heart Owner: Snowdream This OC has a couple of issues. First off, the personality. I don't you think you should have more than one OC with the "Flirty" trait for the sake of redundancy. I think you should try to come up with another trait (This trait can still be a romantic one. Perhaps "Hopeless Romantic?") As for "kind" and "caring", they work but they are really plain and give your OC a really boring feel. Try to add more unique to traits so she can be distinguished from other OCs easily. And there are no flaws which isn't good because of reasons above. And like I said before, interests and dislikes help. The backstory definitely needs some work. Living in Cloudsdale and being best friends with Snowdream isn't a backstory; it's just a few details about her. So I can't say anything else other than to make an actual backstory. The design is nice and I don't really have any issues with it though. I read that you will update the page later, so I will edit this review of her when you do that. Just let me know when you update it. Until then, I will have to give it a Grade: D-

That is even weirder the more you look at it as well. Kind of reminds me of a snake.

No, it's true! She's gotten worse and much more desperate! Would I ever lie to you? (Don't answer that.)

No! Please forgive me! Diamond Tiara is making me find juicy stories for her new gossip magazine and I have to comply or she will post an embarrassing article about me! It wasn't under my own free will! You gotta believe me!

Yeah, the one with MLP Princesses was taken already by this girl at the store. I tried chasing her down, but that girl can run! Thanks for liking it

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Eesh, the more you look at Twilight's expression in that, the weirder it gets.

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Ooh, bikes. Might as well show my awesome bike. Yeah, you're jealous and you know it. Quit trying to hide it. This bike; top speed of 5 MPH. Yeah.

No please! This wasn't under my own free will! I have to do this or she will post something embarrassing about me! Wait, why am I brohoofing a post asking for me to get banned?

Pinkie Pie One of Ponyville's most well-liked citizens. Who cannot like the wonderfully cheerful and friendly nature of this happy mare? Little do most ponies know; this so called "mare" is actually a stallion. Where is the proof for this claim, you say? Well, I'll tell ya. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-i8NMausV9s At the 21:06 time marker, we can clearly see Pinkie Pie's leg go up as she pees on Fluttershy's bush. Why she is peeing on Fluttershy's bush, we don't know yet, but our top reporters are investigating. Nonetheless, because of the raised leg, we can now confirm that Pinkie Pie is in fact, a guy. Looks like Pinkie Pie is actually "Pinkie Guy." Thanks for coming in to check out the first article of MLPForums Gossip. Make sure to check out the next issue!

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