First work: Hooves could've been larger.
Drawn again: Ehhh, there IS room for improvement.
Another OC: Very nice.
Friend (Prim3Maverick) and his Sister: Looks alright, alot of room for improvement.
Friend (Galapagois) rides dinosaur: That dinosaur looks b0$$!
Friend (Flutterbro) sips his tea: Looks very fancy! he looks like squilliam
That's right another OC. This time she has a name: Numara. my pen era begin: I really like it!
Octavia: It looks traced.
How about a nice big cup: 5/10
Numara Practice: Those eyes remind me of Buttercup.
Numara is unamused: Very well drawn, good sir!
Steampunk OC: Jansen Friedh. This OC is actually still sort of alive: *insert jaw drop image here*
Indubitably. For my friend: (Sasukex125): Looks alright.
Jansen Friedh Coloured: Wow, looks terrific.
Radicalness: Looks traced.
Traditionally animated icon: Looks cute!
Failed Pinkie Pie: Traced.
Potato.My Ponysona, except I'm actually a guy: Looks creepy..
Rainbow Dash as Beatrix Kiddo: Why kill Twilight? :c
Rarity as Elle Driver: 10/10.
All of the Effs: Pun...?
The Apple, the Singer, and the Chicken: What a shame. It should've been in a slient film.
Anyway, over all, I'd rate this an 8.1/10. Good luck in your further drawings, OP!