@@Ansollis, so, a new hardstyle producer eh? i am probably one of the biggest hardstyle/hardcore/hardEDM fanboys on this forum! (next to projectRKA ofcourse)
anyway, i'll try and give you the most detailed review i can muster!
here goes:
intro, fades in kind of strange. at fisrt i thought you messed up the mastering but then that other synth took over and it all suddenly made sense
it's a nice twist from the more mainstream hardstyle productions nowadays.
break, you got the vocals down pretty sweet. i love how you made the sample glitch and stutter! also, dat underlined bassline!
drop/climax, it took a while to get here, and honestly i think it took a little too long. but that's just a personal prefference.
introduction of the kick comes in nicely as you make it do a few pumps before the kickline actually drops in.
oh god, there is basically next to no kick! the horror!
you got a perfectly fine track here, but i just can't seem to find any sort of kickline! hardstyle is all about the kick!
fix that, and the track would actually be pretty good IMHO.