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  1. Great so far can't wait for the next chapter C: That is the best love story ever o.oNothing can compare to that little pink horse.
  2. Is it weird I think Sombra is alittle cute Back on Topic> I'd be like "OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG" And be jumping up and down while spinning, then ask how this is even possible but I would hurt my brain trying to figure it out. Then ask (little pleading) him to take me with him xD Then he be my special some pony C:
  3. Note: Very First Fanfic, posted this somewhere else and ppl liked it so I'm posting this here! Y does everyone always hate on Sombra? No one can get past the whole enslaving the crystal ponies thing. And yes he was a filler, but he was the best filler ever! This is writin in the point of view of my OC Red Rose. Here it is! Oh hey look a bunny Rise of King Sombra Day 1. I'm writing this to tell the story of us. Our struggles, sacrifice, and our glory, Maybe one day this will be a famous book! One would hope. Back on topic. Our village was attacked by humans, so now our leader BlackNight is leading us to find a new home. Maybe the ponies of Equestria will help us. There must be room for us after they found that new land when they were forced to leave when the big blizzard hit them. We have not heard from them in many years. But back to now. With our leader, the small group of us that is left after the slaughter of our people by the humans are traveling to a new home, far away from the humans expanding their land. Many of us are just little foals and fillies, with no parents that tried to protect them after the humans attacked. Me, BlackNight, Sombra, and a few other ponies are the only ones left to take care of the young. The older, weaker ponies were easily slain. We've been walking for a few hours. The young ones are whining about being hungry. We didn't have time to get supplies before fleeing the village. Sombra has been encouraging them to keep walking and that we will find food very soon. I respect him for that. We've always been best friends, and I've always notice how good he is with foal and fillies. But I should introduce my self. My name is Red Rose. I'm white as snow. Have long black tail and mane. I have red eyes, I wear light armor, also I'm a Pegasus. And this is our story. Day 2. The next day after we left our small make-shift camp, we starting walking out of the forest surrounding the village. And before us was a great plain and a wall of huge mountains."Geez, that's going to be a long climb". I muttered as I looked up at the mountains. " It just looks that way from all the way back here" said Sombra a little to cheerfully. I realized it was to make the younger ones think it wasn't going to be such a bad climb. " Let's get walking" called BlackNight from a little ways ahead. " We don't have all day, And I'd like to get to the mountain before nightfall". To our luck we found some bushes full of berries that would tied us over till later. As the sun set we got to the edge of the long plain, we found a small lake with fruit along the shore. BlackNight told us that this is where we were camping for the night. Sombra and I made small nest-like beds for the foals and fillies by the shore. " I can't wait till we get over the mountain" Sombra said happily as he pictured our new home in his head. " Do you think the Princesses would even welcome us?" I said with a worried look on my face. "Why wouldn't they?" He wonder confused. "When the great blizzard came, the three tribes came to us looking for food." I replied and looked up at the stars hanging above us. "We knew that if we gave to one tribe, then we would have to feed them all. And we didn't have enough food to feed all three." I looked back at him again waiting for a reply. He was silent for a few minutes, but I waited without out compliant. "Maybe... They must have forgave us by now. They can't hold it against us for this long." He said quietly. We were quite for a few minutes with our thoughts. Breaking the silence- "We'll have our answer once we get past the mountain. But we should get to bed, or we won't have the energy to make it up the mountain." I said as I stepped into my make-shift nest. "Ya..." He said quietly as he too got in bed by mine. A few minutes later I could hear his slow breathing knowing he was asleep. I ran through my head our talk. Worried now more than ever about the Princesses not helping us. Putting my thoughts aside, I fell asleep. Day 3. The next day after we cleaned up camp we set out to climb the mountains. We found a path going up the slope that travel must have used long ago. Eventually the path slowly faded away and left us to wonder. Still going straight from the path, and then suddenly a snow storm pick up. "Everyone follow me, we need to find shelter!" BlackNight yelled over the rising storm. BlackNight turned his head left, and then right looking for a cave. Sombra and I gathered the foals and fillies into small rows so we can an eye on them. The other ponies were up front with BlackNight, looking for a cave. After about ten minutes of looking, they found a small cave that was deep inside. Sombra, the Children, a few ponies, and I stay at the opening of the cave. While BlackNight and two others went into the cave to make sure it was safe. After a few minutes they didn't come back, a pony went in after them. Later none of them came back and it was just Sombra and myself." I'm going in to find them" I said as I unsheathed my sword hanging at my side."Wait! I'll go in, someone as to watch the kids and you have a weapon to protect them." Sombra said as he walk to the tunnel where the others hadn't returned from. I didn't argue and he made a good point, I sheathed my sword and sat down next to the sleeping children. "Alright, just hurry it up." I said looking out to the storm raging on. "I'll be right back!" He called over his shoulder as he raced in. For a long time everything was silent. I love the quiet and all but, with no one coming back. It worried me. I pushed rocks to hide the children from the storm and anything else that's out there at this time and galloped in to the tunnel. After awhile of running in the dark tunnel, I could see a faint light ahead. And with the tunnel opening up, I spead my wings and lifted off the ground. I flew into the large dome to find a few dead ponies and blood all over the ground. I landed and looked at the bodies. Not BlackNight and not Sombra. Sighing in relief but sad at the lose of the ponies. I slowly looked around taking in everything. No way out be the dark tunnel, where could they have gone? And who or what killed the ponies? I heard movement above me. I look up and there is a giant spider coming down very fast. I flew up and unsheathed my sword, cutting the short be that kept it in the air. The spider hit the ground, breaking a thin leg. An idea came to me. The spider shot it's web at me, but it wasn't fast enough and I swerved out if the way. I flew to the ground, wings still flapping, but hooves still racing on the ground for dear life. I flew up to where a long, thin leg connected to the body. And cut the leg, sending the unbalanced spider to the floor. I quickly cut the other six legs off, leaving the spider no longer mobile. And finished it off its head. After it died I flew up to its web. Thankfully found the rest of the missing ponies unconscious in the web. I cut them one by one from the web setting them carefully on the ground and flying up for the next pony. Once I had every pony on the ground, I sheathed my sword and started nudging them all to wake up. BlackNight woke up right away and stood in a self-defense stance, and looked at the dead spider. Confused, he sat down next to the spider." Can you wake the rest up? I need to check on the kids." I called, snapping him from his trance." Ya... Sure." He said staring off into space. I walk up the dark tunnel to find the kids still asleep. Then once again walked back to the dome to find every pony awake and talking. As I walked into the room, Sombra bounded up to me, of course wanting to know what had happened. I yawned and with a bored look on my face said "Its no big deal. Just killed the spider is all." "But it was like huge!" He replied with his hooves up trying to show how big it was. "It was a spider, and spider are to be killed." I said as every pony was standing up. "Every pony, we're heading out." Called BlackNight heading up the tunnel with the rest of the ponies following. "Shall we?" I said jokingly. "We shall." He said in the same manor. Once we got to the opening the storm was over and we woke the children and left the cave with bright, warm sunlight greeting us. Looking around we found our self at the top of the mountain with a easy climb down. In the distance was a city, maybe where are new home with be. Every one seeing this, ran down the side of the mountain on the path that had become visible again. Day 4. We stayed the night at the bottom of the the mountain. The next morning we set off to the the distance city. The way there had endless rows bushes and trees full of fruit. "We'll stay here for a few hour, eat as much as you can while we're here." BlackNight said while everyone was eyeing the food. After awhile of eating we set out, even close to the city. When it got dark we where only about a mile from the city. We quickly set up camp excited for making a new home for our selfs and talking to the leader of the city. While the children slept, we sat by BlackNight and spoke about tomorrow." When we enter the city, the first thing we are to do is speak to the leader." BlackNight said. " We'll need to talk about the surrounding area nearby the city." " What if they want Bits? We are broke!" Wailed Par Parody. " We can pay them later, when we start earning Bits from farming and other jobs." I replied. " But it'll tie us to the land if we owe them, we'll spend the rest of our lives and our children's paying it off!" Moonlight Mist countered. "Maybe the ruler is nice and he'll give us the land the land for free." Said Music Melody cheerfully. "In your dreams." Moonlight Mist muttered. "What about you Sombra?" I asked, Sombra lifted his head. "Do you think he'll be nice enough to give us the land for free?" He thought for a moment. "It'll depend on how rich they are and if they have land sitting around that they have no use for." He replied. "Sombra is right, if they have land sitting around then they are more likely to give it away for free. We'll just have to wait and see tomorrow." BlackNight said. We all nodded. And a few minutes later, we were all asleep. Day 5. BlackNight, Sombra and I walked out of camp and neared the city. From close up it shined off of the crystal it was made of. The guards were giving us weird looks as we walked through the streets. We made it to the castle doors, BlackNight requested a audience with the leader. A few minutes later we were allowed to go inside to speak with the ruler. In the throne room sat a fat looking unicorn with a servant feeding him grapes. Something inside of myself wanted me to slap him off his throne. "Your majesty, would like to-" BlackNight began, but was interrupted by the King. " Where are you from?" His voice bounced off of the crystal wall." Passed the mountain Sir." BlackNight replied. The throne room was silent for a minute. "Where the three tribes were from?" The King ask. "Yes Sir." BlackNight said. "Which of the three is your group from?" Asked the King, his words once again bouncing off the walls. "None Sir, we were the ones that united together before the great blizzard." BlackNight replied looking down. The King looking like he was going to have a fit of rage shouted "OUT! GET OUT YOU BETRAYERS! YOU LEFT US IN OUR TIME OF NEED!" The King screamed. "Sir, we have a good reason for what happened-" BlackNight began only to be again interrupted by the King. "GUARDS GET THEM!" The King yelled. "Run!" BlackNight called as he unsheathed two short swords attacking the guards charging at us. I quickly pulled out my sword and prepared myself for the line of guards coming at me. "Come on!" Said Sombra as he pulled at me to follow him out of the castle. "But Black-" I started, "He is buying us time, now come on!" Yelled Sombra. Sombra half dragged me out of the room. We galloped from the large doors to the inside of the castle only to find guards coming from every street. I began to hover over Sombra, using my teeth, I picked him up by his cloak and hovered over the guards while we slowly made our escape in the sky. We landed at the clearing that we made camp at, everyone gathered around waiting to find out what happened during the visit and where BlackNight was. ********************************************************************************************** What are we to do now? Wail Par Parody." We need revenge!" Answered Moonlight Mist. Sombra sighed "That isn't going to do us any good." "Sombra is right, we'll only lose more us." I said looking around the clearing thinking about the guards finding us at any moment. " Maybe we can take over the city!" Music Melody chimed in. All of us stared at her, that was a brilliant idea! "Yes! That's perfect payback!" Yelled Moonlight Mist with a evil grin on her face. "But how would we over-throw them? The King has guards and there isn't many of us." I wonder aloud. "They might have something in a library. If they still remember the time of the blizzard, then they must have a book on a nearby power source." Sombra replied, answering the question. "Ok then." I said as I stood up towering over the ponies sitting on the ground. "Tomorrow Sombra and I will go into the city to the library, undercover." Day 6. The next day after planning to sneak back into the city and visit the library. With our cloaks on, we dove into the crowd. Both keeping an eye on one another to make sure we both didn't one another, we enter the library. We look around and there were hundreds of books, with no one at the counter we looked up books with power sources in a big book with the name of very book in the library. Nothing about power source books were in the bigger book, we had to look in all the books on the shelves. After a few hours of searching, Sombra comes over to me on the other side of the library with the book we were looking for. "Found it!" He said while he trotted over to my side. I take the book and flip through the pages. "Nice! There is one nearby the city!" I said still sitting in the floor as a guard walks in to the library along with the librarian. "We'd like to put this wanted poster in here by the door if you don't mind." He said as he went over to a open wall. "Of course! Feel free to put them anywhere in or outside the building." The old women said as she took books to a shelf and put them in order before setting them on the shelves. "Thank you very much, I'll just put them up every so often on the walls." He replied has he began to hang them upon the empty walls. "We need to hide!" I whispered as I watched the guard get slowly closer to where we were sitting. Sombra scanned the area, spotting a supply closet. "This way! In there." He said quietly as he dragged me over to the door. He opened it, dragged me in, enter it himself, and cracked the door open so we could watch the guard. The closet was very small, we were pressed side by side as we watch the guard tape a poster on a nearby wall. I was blushing, very hard. And by the crack where the light was still shining in from, I could tell he was too. I was having a very hard time suppressing a giggle. The guard passed by, and right at the last second he noticed the door was cracked. "Better close the door." He said as he shut it, making the room feel cramped. "Little ones might get in!" He chuckled as he hung up another poster. "Hurry up Rain Dancer!" Called a voice "We can't be late for the execution!" Rain Dancer stuffed the tap and posters in his bag. "Coming!" He cried as he rushed down the steps to the exit. "Do you think they are going to kill..." I started in a worried manor, hoping they aren't going to kill who I thought the were. "Only one way to find out." Replied also in a worried tone as he opened the door. No one was in the large book-filled room once again. We galloped to the exit, pulling our hoods on and walking out the door. When we got outside there was a giant crowd before a stage. There were a few guards on the stage eyeing the crowd. We slowly made our way to the middle. "We are here today to punish a traitor from a tribe that left us to die in our time of need." The guard from the stage said to the crowd. We watched as they brought out BlackNight who looked like he hadn't eaten in days. They brought his head down, a pony with a mask raised a giant axe above his head with magic. The guard was ready to give the signal, I want to look away but my body wouldn't move. The guard gave the signal, I closed my eyes and a moment later I heard an axe swing and a slight crunch. I opened my eyes to seethe horror of BlackNight's headless body laying on the stage, with magic a captain hooded BlackNight's head up. As if showing that if we ever showed our faces again, the same would happen to us. The crowd slowly left the stage, my wide eyes still staring at BlackNight's body. Sombra brought me back from the trance and looked at me worried. "You ok?" Sombra quietly asked. I couldn't bring myself to speak so I just nodded. "We should head back, we need to talk with the others about the information we found." He gently guided me away from the stage looking worried about me. Together we slowly walked back to camp. Day 6 Part 2. We had told every pony of what happened to BlackNight and that we had found what we were looking for at the library. After we had talked, Par Parody walked to the edge of camp. Dark Star, her daughter joined her in her grief. BlackNight was her husband, I can understand the want to be alone after having been told the news. Sombra and I sat down and talked over what our plan of action was next. He plopped down right next to me and opened the book in front of us. Our sides were touching but neither of us cared, we were focused on action. "Tomorrow, me, you and Moonlight Mist will head to the location where the source of power is said to be at." He said as he pointed to a cave on a page of the book. "Power doesn't come easy, we might have to give something up to gain the power." I replied thinking of the possible body parts we could lose. "I will pay the price myself, no matter what the cost." Sombra said firmly. "Hopefully it won't be something you can't live without, like the heart or a lung." I said then sighed. "Then what's the point of paying without being able to use the power granted?" Sombra pointed out. I shrugged. "What if it takes your sanity?" I wonder aloud. "Why would anyone want another pony's sanity? It's pointless." He said as he chuckled. I pushed against him. "Are you making fun of me for thinking?" I pouted. He laughed, "You've probably thought of stupider things then that." He said as he pushed back. I stood up towering over him as he sat. He too stood up, little over a foot taller than me. He playfully pushed me over on the grass. I flipped, laying on my back and held a hoof out for him to help me get up. He took my hoof and I dragged him to the ground beside me. We laughed for a minute before both standing up. "Race you to the river!" I said as I pointed to a nearby river at the edge of camp. "Ok! But I'll beat you for sure." He said with a grin on his face. "Ok... Ready, Set-" I began. But before I said go, Sombra took off, heading straight for the river. I quickly started running, trying to catch up. But right before I made it to the river, he won. He held one hoof right above the grass, I tried to stop but I was going to fast. I tripped over his hoof and fell into the shallow river. He started laughing really hard, pointing a hoof at me. Angered, I pulled him into the river too. Laughing at his shocked face. While I was trying to stop laughing because my cheeks started to hurt, he made a huge splash right at my face with his hooves. One moment with a blank face and the next making a even big splash going right to him. After awhile of playing in the water, we dragged our selfs out of the water and on to the grassy bank. Falling asleep with our two back hooves being lapped at by the water and with one of other top two, holding each others hooves as we slept. Day 7. We set out for the cave where the power source is located. After an hour of walking, we came to a deep cave. Using magic, Sombra lit the deep damp cave as we walked deeper in. After navigating through the cave we came to a large cavern with high ceilings. Inside the dome room was a crystal clear pool, we all kneed down at the edge of the pool. Wind coming out of nowhere whispered in our ears. Instructing us to drink from the pool to gain its power. "I'll be the on to pay the price for the power" Sombra said to us. We stood up and took a few steps back. Sombra drank from the clear pool, he slumped unconscious. The pool that lit up the room with a u worldly glow went dark, the room was consumed with darkness. For about ten minutes the room was silent. Sombra came to, but with a dark pressure about him. "Ready?" He asked while looking at us. His voice didn't change. Neither did his appearance by much. "Yep!" I replied and started up the dark slope to the surface. When we got out into the sunlight i looked back at Sombra. Thankfully he still looked pretty much the same. For now I pushed aside any fears about the pool changing him. We went back to camp, tomorrow we take over the crystal city. At camp we made our plan to attack. We'd sneak into the castle in the middle of the night, kill the King and use Sombra's new power to knock all the guards unconscious. The rest of the night Sombra and I joked about what would happen to us after we that the city. "And I'll buy everyone a big mansion of their own!" Sombra joked as he pushed against me. "Then will will I get the biggest of them all?" I said as I pushed back. He laughed. "You can be my queen and live in the castle!" He said with a grin. I blushed, "Then I'd be honored to be your wife." I joked back. Wondering if he meant what he had said. I yawned and set my head on my hooves. Sombra did the same, with bodies leaning against each other and our heads side by side. We fell asleep. Day 7 Part 2. [italians] "Jump!" Sombra said with wide eyes. He took my hoof and we jumped from the flaming building and on to the ground. The building collapsed from under its self. An arrow whizzed passed us. We look back and there was a human behind us. The human notched another arrow. This time pointing it right for me, Sombra then stood in front of me blocking the humans view. The human fired the arrow and-[italians] I woke up and looked around, everyone was asleep. I looked beside me, empty. Where was Sombra? I rubbed the back of my head trying to wake up. I walked to the river where I found Sombra sitting on the bank. I sat besides him. "What's wrong?" I asked quietly. "Do you think I've changed?" He said has a fish swam by. "No. You look the same." I answered and changed sitting positions. "I feel all dark inside..." Sombra replied, still staring into the river at our hooves. "I wonder if there is take-backs on power" I wonder aloud. "Or..." He began. "Or what?" I asked. "I need a distraction." He finished, shifting his hooves. "What kind of distraction?" I asked, confused about what he meant. He was silent for a moment, then he turned his head to me. "You." He answered as he tilted my chin up and kissed me. After that the rest if the night was a blur of our faces pressed together. Day 8. I woke up to Sombra's face right in front of mine. I slowly untangled my hooves from his and sat at the edge of the river, splashing my face with water and collecting my scattered thoughts. For some reason my head was hurting, I rubbed head to force the pain to leave. Behind me I heard Sombra getting up, I trotted back over as Sombra was struggling to wake up. I rubbed his mane to bring him back from whatever dream he was having and back down to earth where we needed him today. "You awake?"I asked. "Mhm" he mumbled, he stumbled down by the river and splashed water onto himself. He walked up next to me. "Today is the day! You ready?" He asked positioning himself next to me. Ready when ever you are." I answered and we started back to the center of camp. The other ponies were already up and getting ready. A few minutes later we left camp, leaving the children hidden. With our hoods up we entered the city. Sombra and myself would face the King, then Sombra would knock all the guards unconscious. Par Parody and Music Melody would round them up. Moonlight Mist would tie up all the guards in the castle. We explored the city, we had time to kill till it turn night and we needed to know many different ways to get out of the city undetected if the plan didn't work out. **********************************************************************************************Night time swept across the land, we got into position. Sombra and I quietly entered the King's bed room. Trying to kill him in his sleep may not be honorable, but we weren't looking for glory. We were there for revenge, and we didn't care how we killed him. Sombra went to either side of the bed, just in case he tried to make a run for it. Sombra started to charge up the spell, right before he finished the King's eyes flew open. I grabbed for him, and held him down the best I could while he was wiggling around and trying to get my hoof off his mouth to call for help. Sombra used his spell to kill the King, guards came rushing in and I killed them with ease. I stood with my sword out ready to protect Sombra as he charged the next spell to knock out the guards. Three more waves of guards came in before the spell was ready. Sombra used the final spell, i looked out a window to see guards falling to the ground with Par Parody and Music Melody tying them up. We walked outside where we had all the guards tied up. "What now?" I asked looking toward the sleeping guards. "Brainwash them?" Moonlight Mist replied. "That is a good idea. We'll need the guards and we don't have many ponies to replace them with." Sombra answered, thinking what spell to use. The rest of us yawned. Sombra laughed."You guy can go to bed, I'll take care of the guards." He said looking up at the castle. I nodded at Sombra and behind me Music Melody cheered "Yay! Sleep!" The rest of us walked back to the castle leaving Sombra behind to solve our guard problem. Par Parody went back to the kids at camp. The rest of us went to our rooms. A few minutes after I got in bed I went right to sleep, awhile later I felt someone flop down next to me. Day 9. My father pushed Sombra out of the way and took the arrow to the side. Father fell to the ground, the human was ran over by a colt that charged at him. Sombra quickly went to his side. I followed him over. Father said something to Sombra, I couldn't hear it over the building by us collapsing. A few moments later we watched him die, helpless to stop his fate. Sombra looked around. "This way!" Sombra said over the roaring flames. We galloped from my father's dead body and into the forest under the cover of night. I slowly blinked, the sunlight from the window entering my eyes too fast. After a minute I looked around taking in what happened last night and us taking over the city. I stared up at the ceiling for a few minutes. Sombra shifted besides me and my stomach made a small growling noise. That was a signal to get up and eat. I slowly got off the giant bed and on to the floor careful to not make any noise. Thankfully Sombra left the door open when he came in last night, I got through the door without making a sound. In the kitchen there was no cooks, I though nothing of it and dug through the shelves. I had never seen so much food in my life, I started to drool a little. That Fat King ate well. A few minutes later I had a load of different breakfast-type foods before me. I had made big plate of pancakes and waffles with lots of different fruit and whipped cream. I looked at the plate. Something was missing a few seconds later it came to me, chocolate! I went back to the shelf where I last saw it. I found it and set it on the counter, looking for a spoon. I went back to the counter and the plate was gone. I looked around on the other counters to find it nowhere. I heard giggling. I sighed and looked behind the counter. I saw the three girls with their mouths full of my food and the plate half empty. They both pointed at Moonlight Mist. I went back to the counter to get the chocolate. When I came back they had food all over their faces. I set the chocolate and spoon in the floor next to them and went back to the stove to make some pancakes. After making a stack of pancakes with syrup, I set them on the table and returned to the kitchen for a glass of orange juice. As I set the glass on the table I saw Sombra stumbling down the stairs and sat at the table rubbing his head. I pushed the food his way, he gave me the "are you sure?" Look and I nodded and smiled. I went back to the kitchen and settled for toast and a bowl of fruit. After I finished Sombra was gone and the girls went to explore the city. I looked around the castle. I found a big library, billions of halls, bedrooms and bathrooms, a training room I'll come back too, some other rooms and a giant throne room. I found a nice bathroom and closed the door behind me. It had been to long since I had been clean. I took off my armor, my sheath and my pony tails that I threw away. After a nice and very, very long bath I walked out leaving everything in the bathroom. I'd be back for it. The food and warm bath made me feel sleepy. I slowly made my way back to the big bedroom. Sombra was already asleep. I crawled into bed and curled up beside him. Day 10. As soon as I saw sunlight, I hid under the covers. My long hair not in a pony tail was all messed up in my face. I clawed at my hair trying to keep order, but of course there is the static problem. It only made it worse, now my hair was doing its best to stretch as far as it can under the blankets. I threw the blankets off only to be greeted with cold air. I quickly dived for the blanket on the floor. After wrapping myself in the blanket, I did my best not to trip as I walked over to Sombra standing at the window. Looking down I saw ponies looking up at the castle. Probably wondering what happened to the King. I sat down and yawned. "Now that your going to be king, you might wanna have a coronation to make it known to the ponies." I said hoping to get him out of his trance. "What? Oh yes." He shuttered. He sat down and crawled with me under the covers and sat there and cuddled me. "What if the ponies ask about the old King?" He asked in a worried tone. I laughed softly. "Anyone can be better than that fat king" I replied. Then Dark Star appeared from the outside of the blanket. "They need you guys!" She squealed, then left the room. Sombra sighed. He went from under the covers and walked to the door. "You coming?" He asked as he turned around to look back at me. I ran quickly over, almost slipping over the covers from when I came out from under the blanket. We walked downstairs to the Throne room. Two servants came over a dragged Sombra out of the room. I went over to sit with the girls by the Throne. "Where are they taking him?" I asked as I looked over at the door. "We had his coronation set to today, they are getting him ready." Par Parody answered. We sat and talked for a few minutes before two more ponies walked in and towered over me. They dragged me away to the same door they dragged Sombra through. My eyes pleaded with them to help, but they just sat and laughed. "A queens gotta look her best!" Moonlight Mist yelled while laughing as the women dragged me out. Queen? I thought as they did my hair. Since when was I married? After hair was make up. Ya, no. Then of course the dresses, unlike with make up I couldn't get out of this one. Puffy, no. Frilly, no. Slimming? Better. Before I could look at myself in the mirror, the women pushed me through the door to Par Parody and Music Melody squealing. "What's the big deal? It's just a dress." Asked Moonlight Mist. Finally someone who felt my pain. Then we walked outside and up to the back of the stage. The girls disappeared. I yawned this was already a long day. Like me, Sombra was pushed back stage. "They don't have to push me for me too-" Sombra began, but stopped at the sight of me. I blushed, what was there to stare at? I personally didn't think I looked even close as good looking compared to other ponies. "Now presenting..." An announcer said on stage to the crowd below. We stood side by side waiting for the pony to announce our names. "King Sombra and Queen Rose!" The pony called. "Here we go!" Sombra said with a smile. Oh dear... I thought as we walked out on stage as the curtain rose up. Day 10 Part 2 After sitting on the Thrones on stage and having crowns out on our heads while being announced King and Queen. We were taken from the stage and pushed to the Throne room, where the girls had planned a party for after the coronation. A pony had walked up to me and introduced him self has Sand Surfer. And had many odd questions to ask me. "I congratulate you on becoming queen." He said bowing, then added. "I am Sand Surfer, I am a Secret Agent that worked for the King. And I have a few questions about what happened to him." He finished. "Ask away." I answered doing my best not to sound worried about him finding out that we had killed him. "When was the last time you saw the King?" He asked. "5 days ago if memory serves." I replied thinking back to the day we met with the King. Sand Surfer shook his head. "Ok lets cut to the chase, are you and the other ponies being held hostage?" He blurted out. I gave him a weird look like he was crazy. "It's ok. It's ok. You don't need to be afraid anymore, that's why I'm here. Just tell me the truth and then Everypony can go home happy." He said. "I have no idea what you are talking about." I replied now annoyed. "Ok, I'll just put it down has too scared to talk about." He said as he walked away writing down notes. Ya facehoofing it. Sombra walked over. "Who was he?" He asked looking over his shoulder. "A secret agent on to us." I answered rubbing my face hoping I'd never see the pony again. After the party I was in the bathroom of the big bedroom taking off my clothes and slowly undoing my "uff" hair. After spending an hour getting clean, I walked out of the bedroom and flopped onto the bed. I slowly clawed my way under the covers, and laid there half asleep. A little while later Sombra came in and laid besides me. "What are we going to do about the Agent? He'll stick his nose where it shouldn't be and find out what happened to the King." I mumbled. Burying my face into his neck, trying to forget about what would the Agents do if they found out that we murdered the King. Sombra put his hooves around me. "I'll send Moonlight Mist to check out the Agency tomorrow." He said quietly. "Mhm" I said as I fell asleep. **********************************************************************************************Meanwhile at the King's Agency... "Ok men." Sand Surfer said in front of his elite group of agents. "I suspect that the Queen, three mares and the children are hostages used by the new King so we can't attack head on." He said as he paced back and forth in front of the colts. "So, we'll remove the mares and children and bring them here under our protection, then we'll attack the castle and over throw the new King." Sand Surfer said while thinking about all the secret of passages that run thought the castle walls. "We'll move them tomorrow night, till then men I need you to watch the activity in the castle and report back if something odd happens." Sand Surfer finished and dismissed the agents. He thought back to the party that had happened a few hours before. The queen had looked very beautiful, and they weren't married so... There was still hope for him! He went back to his office to day dream of the day of their wedding day. Day 11. A knock on the door was a rude awaking, sliding out of Sombra's embrace, off of the bed and opened the door. To my display Sand Surfer stood in front of me. "Did I wake you up?" Sand Surfer asked trying to look innocence. I looked behind me, Sombra was still asleep. "No it's fine, did you need something?" I said as I stood straight up. "I just need to take a look around the castle for any clues." He replied trying to look into the bedroom behind me. "Of course, feel free to look in any room you want. I'm going to sleep for a little while longer." I said as he started looking around in the hall. "Mhm" is all I got back as I closed the door behind me. I sighed and rubbed my head, that'll get him off my case for a few hours. I climbed back into bed, the sun wasn't fully off the horizon. ********************************************************************************************** I woke up to yelling, trying to get up I fell off the bed. I looked up to see Sombra yelling at Sand Surfer who was standing by the door. "Get out!" Sombra growled as he stood in a fighting stance. "How dare you use-" Sand Surfer began as Sombra charged at him. Sand Surfer got out of the way just in time before Sombra almost slammed into him and skidded to a stop right before he hit the door. Sombra charged again, Sand Surfer jumps out of the way but Sombra couldn't stop in time and runs into the wall shaking the room. I gallop over to Sombra, after seeing no physical damage I looked over at Sand Surfer. He snickered as Sombra got to his hooves, Sombra tackled Sand Surfer. "This is your last warning, get out now!" Sombra yelled and lifted Sand Surfer with magic to the door. "I'll make you pay for this-" Sand Surfer began but Sombra interrupted him. "You go ahead and try." Sombra said and then slammed the door on his face. Sombra sat down in front of the door, I walked over and sat next to him. He pulled me into a embrace, for awhile we just sat there holding each other. The only sound was the ponies outside and some one walking by the door every so often. Eventually someone knocked on the door and said lunch was ready. "Eating will make us feel better!" I said trying to sound excited to cheer him up. Sombra stood up and smiled, which I could easily tell was forced. After we walked a few feet from the door Sombra's eyes shot wide open. "You go without me, I'll be right down!" He said in a hurry and ran back into the room. I walked downstairs to the dining room where the girls where sitting. "What was all that nose upstairs?" Par Parody asked eyeing a bowl of fruit next to me. "It's a long story." I replied passing the bowl to her. "Do you guys know of anyways to cheer Sombra up?"I asked as I put my head down on the table. "Sword fighting!" Answered Moonlight Mist as she waved her hoof around like a sword. "Not really what I was looking for." I said defeated. "How about a romantic night in bed?" Par Parody teased. I blushed really hard. "I meant during the day." I said eyeing a roll that magically appeared on my plate. "Could you past me a date?" Music Melody said pointing at one on a plate. "Music! You're a genius!" I yelled and galloped out of the room. "What about my date?" Music Melody asked the other ponies. I skidded in front of Sombra trying to slow down. "Sombra! Wanna go out?" I asked still trying to catch my breath. "Like... A date?" He replied. "Ya!" I said finally breathing normally again. "And we're waiting for?" Sombra asked as he turned toward the other direction. "Nothing!" I replied as we headed to the big doors. Once we got outside I looked around for a cafe that I remembered the girls talking about, once there we ordered some food and talked for awhile. Then went to pay for the food before we left. Mean while when Red Rose is paying. Sombra sighed at repeatedly opened and closed the small jewelry box he had purchased a few days before. How hard could it be to say four simple words? Other colts did it, why couldn't he? Where other colts always this scared? That the pony they ask would say no? He had taken over a kingdom, so how could asking a question be so scary? There was a chance she would say no, what would happen to them then? What if she said yes? What would be after that? She was most definitely the pony he wanted to spend the rest of his life with. But does she feel the same way? There would be no other prefect time to ask then today. But what would be her answer? Day 11 Part 2. After we left the cafe we explored around the city, and a few hours later. "Do you wanna head down to the river?" Sombra asked pointing to a street that lead out of the city. "Sure!" I replied as I looked at the setting sun. We walked to past the clearing and down to the river bank. I looked down at my reflection in the water, behind me Sombra was acting strange. "What's wrong?" I asked with concern. "Ok... Here we go." He muttered as he took out a small black box. A little black box means... I thought trying to hide a big smile on my face. "Will you marry me?" Sombra asked opening the box. I pounced on him while yelling yes as loud as I could, then we ended up rolling into the river. We climbed our way back on the shore laughing, and walked back to the castle. When we got back every pony was finished with dinner, we headed to the library to look thought the books. An hour later it turned dark. "I'm turning in for the night, what about you?" Asked Sombra as he walked to the door. "You go on head, I won't be much longer." I replied as I flipped the page in a book. Sombra shrugged and walked out. After finishing three books about the last King and his "deeds" I heard hoof steps and ponies talking quietly pasting the door. I silently poked my head into the hallway. Empty, I come out fully and follow the quiet whispers. I saw them dragging ponies out of their rooms, I did a head count. Twenty big colts, I couldn't take them all on by myself. I turned around to go get help, and behind me was a big pony. The next thing I saw was darkness. Day 12. My head was pounding when I woke up. I looked around, everyone was in a cell. Moonlight Mist was banging on her cell door, Music Melody was turning her head in circles and Par Parody was trying to pic the lock. The kids whining and crying, we heard hoof steps coming down the stairs. Sand Surfer came down the steps and took a look around the room. Of course, if anything strange happens we can always blame it on him. I thought to myself. "Mares and Gentlecolts, I apologize for bring you here but we needed to get you to safety because the castle is under attack." Said Sand Surfer, standing tall as to show what he said is important. "Then why in the world are we in cells?" Moonlight Mist yelled. "We have the guards taking care of the murder of the king, and you are here so you can't be taking hostage." Sand Surfer answered trying to get Moonlight Mist to stop asking questions. "That dirty piece of s-" Par Parody began, then covered her mouth. Sand Surfer gave her a weird look then continued. "You will be released soon, now if you excuse me." He said walking up stairs. "You know, I just noticed the key on the desk." Music Melody squeaked as she turned her head sideways. We all turned our head to the desk, Par Parody picked up the key using magic unlocking our cell doors. "That was stupid of them." Replied Moonlight Mist. "Well it's because of how stupid they are that got us out." Par Parody said back. We slowly crept upstairs and with no pony insight, we left the building. We galloped to the castle, inside we split up to check where the guards had gone. *CRASH* The castle shook, I galloped down the long corridor. Another crash came from nearby, I ran up to the Throne room and opened one of the tall doors. I was greeted by waves of dust, chunks of ceiling fell to the floor. I waved away the dust that was trying to escape the room. Looking around the crumbling room Sombra was firing balls of energy at Sand Surfer who was behind the Throne peeking out to fire back. After slowly crawling my way behind rocks when Sand Surfer wasn't firing I finally got to Sombra who was behind a large chunk of of wall firing whenever there wasn't something flying at his face. After shooting at Sand Surfer again Sombra turned to me, he quickly game a hug and then shot again at the Throne. Sand Surfer shot a ball of fire at the rock, Sombra put up a shield and the ball of fire bounced off and hit the wall behind us, showering us in dust and pieces of the wall. "Do you think you could do something to get him from behind the Throne?" Sombra asked putting down the shield. "I'll think of something." I replied coming out in to the open and picked up some rocks. I flew up and went to the side of the Throne. "Hey over here you idiot!" I called from above throwing rocks at his feet. He looked away from where Sombra was hiding and shot beams at me, dodging I threw more rocks. Sombra galloped out and Sand Surfer charged a spell, Sombra fired a ball of energy. But it was it was to late and everything went white, then black. I woke up in the dark, I could make out the walls of the room. I saw a hall way that lead out. After what felt like forever walking in the corridor I saw light ahead, I galloped out of the hallway and saw a large white room that never seemed to end. I looked behind me and the hall way had disappeared, when I had turned back around a tall white Alicorn had appeared she had Light Purple Hair, Butterfly Wings and Spiral Horn. "Where am I?" I asked looking at the white space around me. "Nowhere." A voice in my head had said. I could only guess that is how the pony talks to others. "And how did I get Nowhere?" I asked looking around for the nearest exit which I couldn't find. "You do not remember? You dead." The voice answered. Day 12 Part 2 Dead? Impossible. I never felt any pain before or after the white flash. Could it have been the white flash that had taken my life? Could I be killed so swiftly? "Fear not, it is a mistake that you are here. You have arrived at the gate of Heaven to soon." The voice said, I sighed heavily in relief. Gate of Heaven? There was nothing but white all around us. The Alicorn moved out of the way and before me was a Golden Gate. "It is time for you to go. My sister will show you the way out." The voice said as I turned around to find a smaller black Alicorn with black hair with blue streaks and a Vortex Cutie Mark waiting for me by the dark hallway that had once again appeared. I turned my head back to see if the larger Alicorn was still there. After seeing empty space I followed the black Alicorn back in to the dark corridor sloping down. At the end of the long tunnel I saw light, the black pony nodded and I proceeded. I opened my eyes to find myself in a large white room with beds in long rows on either sides. "She Lives!" Yelled Par Parody with the voice of the Doctor of Frankenstein. Everypony galloped over from a bed on the far side if the room. Sombra was about to give me a big hug but was stopped by Par Parody in mid air. "STOP!" She yelled in a firm voice, everypony backed away from the bed. "She has finally stop losing blood and I don't want anyone ruining my work!" She said trying to not sound threatening has she had before. We all watched as she slowly left the room. After the door had closed everypony asked a billion questions."What does Heaven look like?" Cried Moonlight Mist over everypony talking. "I never saw it!" I yelled back over the noise. "QUIET!" Music Melody shrieked over the ponies. For a minute the room was silent. "Geez guys one at a-" DarkStar began but stopped as Par Parody walked back in. "You guys are still in here? Out! Sombra your gonna be fine, just don't push yourself for a few days. Now out with you!" Par Parody growled as she walked over to another pony that was in a bed. "She doesn't have to be so bossy." Moonlight Mist muttered as they walked out of the room. Final Chapter A few Weeks later UGHHHHHHHHHH, for the billionth time today boredom strikes again. Moving the big stack of books aside that Sombra had brought in the day before I stood by the window. I quickly glanced at the clock, 1:54 in the morning. I don't think being this bored and lonely at the same time is healthy. Everypony except Par Parody is held in the Throne room working on something, and Par won't leave her room. No pony would let me see what their doing and tell me to go somewhere else. It's not fair, I wanna get in on this secret stuff! I sighed and looked out of the window and into the night. She didn't feel like sleeping, she would just wake up an hour later escaping from another nightmare. After a moment a flash came from the forest. Odd and it'll finally give me something to do. For the first time in weeks I unfolded my wings. Par said I couldn't fly till tomorrow, and the clock says its tomorrow. Climbing onto the window sill I flew to the ground. If I flew there I would have a chance of being seen, its saver to run. With all this noise I'm sure to go deaf. Sombra thought as they were putting the finishing touches on the stand. To much white for he taste but he didn't want to say anything when everypony was working so hard to get their wedding ready. It pained him to leave Red all alone, especially after the whole Sand Surfer thing. If only Par Parody had let him kill Sand-. Sombra shook his head. Dark thoughts were coming more and more often. He chuckled, he had other thing to think about to get them out of his mind. But... they still bothered him. He left the room, he had to check on Par Parody. She might be having one of her Fabric fits again. He opened the door, almost having his face hit with a roll of Fabric. This always happened back at their old Village, and BlackNight was always there to calm her down. But now... "I'm going need my face for still quite some time." Sombra said stepping over the Fabric thrown all over the place. "Sorry!" She cried, "But these Wedding Gown books don't do me any good!" She threw the books at the wall. "I'm just gonna let you be..." Sombra replied slowly and backed away to the door, closing it behind him. Sombra returned to the Throne room. He walked over and opened a window, he saw someone galloping in to the forest. He ran for the door. The cave? Red Rose sighed in defeat, there isn't anything in there! She saw a flash inside the cave. She followed the trail down to the room with the pool. She looked into the pool, nothing. Just as she had thought, nothing was ever do here. She turned around and- something grabbed her hind legs and pulled her into the pool, the pool wasn't shallow like last time. She had gotten 1/3 out of the pool then pulled down again. Sombra raced in and tried to pull her out. "Som-" then another pull and she was dragged into the water. And it all went dark. Sombra jumped into the now shallow pool, he dug with his hooves to reopen the hole. Something was behind him, he turned to see a dark cloud floating. "Now... About our agreement." It said with a evil smile. This was written like writing in a journal, chapters in days hoped u like! Gonna start writing da sequel called Phantom Earth. Please tell me what u think!
  4. All we need to do is trust the writers. They'll turn this into something great. Just go have fun at the Alicorn Party and you'll "Just Fine".
  5. I would love to see him in the next season. Yes, I get he is under devopled. But if he is in the next season then he could have his own episode for a back story. I don't see any harm to adding him in for a love interest, yes I know it's for little kids. But Hasbro needs to think of the older ppl watching this and add more mature content. But it would make alot of older ppl watching this happier then little kids. Most of the viewers are older, so shouldn't they get more mature content?
  6. I'm excited to see where this is going. We'll just have to wait and see how the writers are going to use this, we need to have at least a little faith in them that they'll turn this into something good. Remember this show is for little girls, and they like princesses. This show isn't targeting older men. We'll have to wait and see and trust the writers.
  7. Thx! But I might not stay o.o I hav no clue how to do anything lol. Peace!
  8. I is also new no clue what to say now o.o lol. This website is SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO confusing -_-
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