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  1. Grace managed to somehow lose track of the battle very soon after she joined it. There were many of the monsters - too many for Grace to be able to pay too much attention beyond just a few feet around her. At most, she managed to note the very general progress of a couple of people near her in-between roasting, freezing, and slashing anything that got too close - Allan was surrounded by a small swarm, while Alexander and Marcon seemed to be holding their own.

     

    There were so many of the monsters that, after a while, Grace wondered if they would ever stop coming. Thus, when Alexander wiped out almost all of the beasts with just one spell, she was so shocked by the sudden lack of enemies that Grace simply stared in numb disbelief as Alexander's limp form was taken by some girl, and only dimly heard her say she was taking him to the Third District. It took Sam asking her and everybody else if they were alright for her to finally snap out of it.

     

    "Yeah, I'm fine. I got a couple of minor scratches, but other than that they barely even touched me." As she said this, she casted a couple of minor cure spells on herself in order to get rid of those minor scratches before they could get infected. When Allan collapsed next to Sam due to his leg, though, she took a moment to stop and walk over to him.

     

    "Sorry, I don't know how to heal anything worse than a few minor bruises or scratches, so I can't help much. However, I have a feeling that the girl who just took Alexander might know somebody who does, so we'll get you fixed up when we find her." Grabbing his arm, Grace managed to pull Allan off of the ground. "Until then, we can at least help you walk there."

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  2. Akari. I'm going to need to remember that. She has a hell of a lot of potential for one so young, Grace thought to herself as everybody began to introduce themselves. Alexander seems to be a rather...odd character, what with his talk of some goddess, but it appears that he too has some power. Then there's the newcomer, the only one I don't have a name for yet; I have no idea how strong he is, but he sure as hell has a dedication towards protecting children at least. And then there's Sam... 

     

    Grace mentally groaned and facepalmed herself when she thought of Sam. 

     

    Well, that was just embarrassing, getting him confused with Bairre. There's nothing I can do about it now, though, so I'll just have to suck it up and hopefully save face.

     

    At this point, she finally realized that Sam had asked her who she was. Placing her arms behind her in a way that represented authority, she thought for a second on how to respond to him.

     

    "My name is Grace, although my full designation is Grace Braid, Major General, serial number 784569, leader of the 4th division of the Throne's Army in Tador, my home nation, located on the world Icesh."

     

    She then turned her head over towards the newcomer(who finally introduced himself as Allan),  and was about to tell him to slow down when a scream and an influx of bright light came from the plaza.

     

    Damn! What the hell is happening now?!, she thought as she blinked her eyes rapidly from the sudden light.

     

    "I have to agree with Allan; we need to see what's happening now," she said when she managed to finally get her bearings again as she rushed past everybody. When she arrived in the plaza, she had to stop for a moment to take everything in. There was some man, roughly her age, standing in the middle of a growing ring of the dark beasts, with bright light emanating off of him. Most of the beasts seemed to be the weak shadow kind, from what Grace could see, but she knew better than to think this would be an easy battle; with how many there were now, they could swarm the man and make the battle take a decidedly deadly turn fast.

     

    Damn! This isn't good. I gotta think fast, or else he's a goner.

     

    Taking her free hand, she pointed it towards a particularly large clump of the shadows before firing off a rather large fireball at them. While half of them managed to sink into the ground in time, the other half weren't so lucky and were melted before they could do any damage.

     

    "Heads up, backup is here!" Grace shouted towards the man as she sliced a shadow that had gotten too close to her in half.

     

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    "WHERE IN THE #$@%^&' HELL DO YOU THINK YOU'RE GOING?!", Cid shouted after Marcon had walked in to the Second District, well outside of hearing range of Cid. He growled as he looked at the place where Marcon slammed his fist, thinking I'm going to need to find that bastard sometime and make him pay for a new $#%&@^' counter. Still, he's a lot stronger than I thought he would have been, if he's able to smash this wood so easily.

     

    Brooding for a second at his smashed counter, Cid then grabbed what looked like an old-style camera with the inscription "Cid Cannon" from behind the counter and headed off towards the entrance to the Third District.

     

    I s'ppose now is as good a time as any to tell Squall about that Alexander kid and his Keyblade.

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  3. I honestly think it's a little early to be asking something like this. It's not a bad question, but I think it might be one to ask once everyone meets up and we are actually going. 

     

    But to answer your question as of now, I think the biggest thing noticed is character interaction namely because there are more posts with character interaction than anything else. I do like that you are actually DM'ing. I rarely see someone acting as the NPCS and whatnot in a forum RP. That I do like, so keep it up.

     

    One question to ask is, where are we going to go after traverse town? Is there going to be a boss battle before we leave? Or are we just simply heading out?

     

    It might be a tad bit early, but I've found that in the RP's that I follow, RP's that I have been in, and the rare few DnD campaigns I have had the pleasure to actually be in, getting feedback about the experience right from the start is extremely useful and can very much so help out the one running everything to adjust. Thus, I wanted to try and get at least some sort of feedback from you guys so that I can see right now if there's anything that would just be rubbing you guys the wrong way, so that I could adjust or change that in some way to make the experience better for everybody. Alternatively, any positive feedback(like the one you just gave me) would help me in knowing what is going well so far and thus what should NOT be changed.

     

    Now, for your question... I honestly can't say much. It's a spoiler, after all, and a fairly major one, relatively speaking(since that would be saying how the plot for this entire world is going to end up being), so my lips are sealed. Don't worry, though, as you guys will be finding out soon enough hopefully.

  4. This post seems to be more like a rant against humanity and how humans suck instead of a fair comparison between the two systems. To put my opinion on the subject, though, I don't think we have anywhere near enough of a view of pony economics to see how well it would run, due to its nature of being a children's cartoon. Things like Rarity being able to find rare gems in the ground could actually devalue those very gems if used too much. Using gold as currency is also not a fool-proof system, as there are SIGNIFICANT negatives to using gold or having a gold standard. It has its benefits, yes, but the costs can very much so outweigh the benefits.

     

    So yeah. We don't have enough details about the pony economy, and what details we do have could actually point to a potentially precarious economy.

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  5. @@Cranium Tyranus

     

    Don't worry. I have a post drafted up and to be posted soon. I'm simply having somebody go over it right now to make sure that it at least avoids any obvious grammatical/spelling errors. 

     

    I must say, though, you people nearly broke me. I was wondering when SOMEBODY was going to finally use the thread, and was going to make a post here right after making my post in the thread just to kick off some discussion. I mean, I'm still going to make a post, but still. I get to say that you guys didn't break me at least tongue.png.


    @@LeJAKoJAK@@MagicalStarRain, @@@@@Cranium Tyranus,

     

    So yeah, why don't we get some meaningful conversation going on here?

     

    What part of the RP have you guys enjoyed the most so far? Is it character interaction, pacing, etc, just name something that you like so far from what you've seen.

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  6. "Well, Marcon, the first thing I can confirm is what Huey and 'em told ya: if you're here, that means your world is gone. Kaput. Erased. Whatever #!$%^&' word you want to use, the meaning remains the same: you no longer have a world to get back to, and are quite possibly the only survivor from your world."

     

    "Now, to fill in a couple of blanks for ya: Traverse Town here is a pretty young world, from what I know. It only came into existence when the Heartless got here and started *#&@$%' everything up. It seems to exist so that those lucky bastards who survive their world's destruction aren't stuck shitting their pants in the Realm of Darkness." Cid then leaned over his counter and got up close enough to Marcon's face that he could smell Cid's breath. "Now, if you want to hear anything else, I suggest you drop any sort of $%#&*@' attitude that you have. I'm not going to help some punk who thinks he can give me any sort of shit and get away with it. Got it?"

     

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    'I'm not a little kid'? Why would Bairre say that? Just what the hell has gotten in to him lately?, Grace pondered as she lagged behind the rest of the group. Everybody seemed to be sprinting compared to her, especially the one who was originally chasing after the armored black monster, who despite his injuries was running faster than anybody. Well, I guess I won't be needed.

     

    By the time Grace reached the alleyway that everybody was at, the kidnapped child was no longer in sight. Instead, the original chaser and the tall man were fighting the creature up close, although neither were really having much success. The teenage girl managed to change things up, hitting it with a bolt of lightning from her weapon that nearly, but not quite, killed it. Before it could get away or cause more harm, though, Grace hit it with an ice blast that managed to finish it off.

     

    So it looks like the kid is gone. Even though there was only one of those things here, I think it's pretty obvious that the kid is one of them now. Walking over to where the original chaser was, Grace put her hand on his shoulder and said to him "I'm sorry, but we didn't make it in time to save him."

     

    "That was a nice shot, but I can tell you're new to this," Grace asked the teenage girl as she walked towards her. "What's your name, if you don't mind me asking?"
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  7. Didn't you guys hear me? Futurama hasn't been cancelled, it's on Hiatus until July. We didn't get another season for 11 months last time, it'll come back, don't worry.

     

    http://variety.com/2013/tv/news/futurama-cancelled-by-comedy-central-1200406963/

     

    This proves otherwise. The season starting in June is the final season, at least as of right now, because Comedy Central has stated they are NOT renewing the series. Thus, after the final episode of season 7 runs on September 4th, it is done for, potentially for good this time.

     

    It's disheartening, as the show is still good, but there's not much we can do about it besides bang down Comedy Central's door with torches and pitchforks.

  8. Another Keyblade wielder, eh?, Cid thought to himself as he watched Alex walk away. Seems like those things are gettin' handed out like #$^&@!' candy these days. First that silver-haired kid, and now this Alex guy. I s'ppose I should tell Squall about this, when I get the chance.

     

    Going to the back of his store, he began to arrange a few boxes in the back of the garage - boxes filled to the brim with the bracelets, belts, and other such accessories he sold to his customers. This would take him a few minutes, and by the end he was beginning to break out into a sweat when somebody came calling his name.

     

    @@Cranium Tyranus

     

    "Bastard could do with a little patience...", Cid grumbled to himself as he walked back to the front, where he found some brown-haired, goateed man waiting. "So you need to speak to me, eh? Well, spit it out then, since you seem to be in some sort of hurry. Might as well introduce yourself while you're at it."

     

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    @@@@MagicalStarRain@@LeJAKoJAK

     

    "Sam? Bairre, is that really the best fake name you can come up with? Now, stop screwing with me for once and answer me: do you know of anybody else that made it here? Or are you also alo-"

     

    Grace didn't get a chance to finish her sentence, as she heard somebody yell, followed by a unnaturally strong gust of wind passing right by her. She barely had time to give a bewildered look towards where the shouting came from - not even enough time to draw her sword - before one of those armored dark beasts ran in front of her, carrying a small child. Following behind it was some man - a rather clumsy one, at that - who was wielding what appeared to be a similar weapon to what she had summoned up once before.

     

    JUST WHAT IS GOING ON IN THIS PLACE?! , she thought, drawing her sword just as she noticed that there were two MORE wielders of those weird weapons - a teenage girl at the top of the stairs, and a ridiculously tall man a short ways in front of her - probably the one who used that wind spell. First, I get sucked into some dark portal thing and dumped off at this place while in the middle of a battle two days ago. Then, I manage to find Bairre, although he insists on pulling his "I'm somebody else" crap at the worst possible time, and now there's three people wielding weapons that look like the one I summoned one time, one of whom is chasing after a child that's getting kidnappe-

     

    She stopped her train of thought for a second.

     

    ...Oh dear Mitaya, I should probably go help get that child back.

     

    "C'mon, Bairre. It looks like that man needs some help," she said, beginning to drag 'Bairre' behind her as the teenage girl ran ahead of her. "Maybe we might even get an explanation for this mess from him..."

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  9. Closing the hotel door behind her, Grace walked out into the fresh air of Traverse Town and breathed deeply.

     

    This place is nothing like home, but I suppose there's always something nice about breathing some new air. 

     

    She stretched her arms over hear head and groaned. A nearby noise caused her eyes to shoot open. Drawing her sword, she saw that the cause of the disturbance was only a entering the hotel from the rear entrance. Grace gulped and sheathed her sword.

     

    Maaaaaaaaybe I should relax a little bit before I make mince meat out of some innocent bystander. 

     

    Taking one last calming breath, Grace headed down the closest staircase and towards the large open courtyard, until she passed by somebody...familiar looking next to the stairs. He had brown, spiky hair, and that short-sleeved gray jacket that she was always telling him looked far too civilian for a soldier, and his face was ringing 40 different, unique set of bells.

     

     

    "Bairre...?" she whispered to herself as the man passed her by. She let one second, then two seconds pass before sheturned around and shouted, "Bairre! Is that you?!"
     
    Grace embraced him.
     
    "Oh, thank Mitaya I found at least one person that I know in this place."
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  10. Kingdom Hearts: Alt Mix


     


    Two days. It's been two whole days since everything fell apart and I found myself here.


     


    Such were Grace's thoughts, waking up once again in her bed in some hotel in the Second District. The hotel, which was rather small with only two rooms, was empty and unlocked when Grace found it, and the full supply of food, water, and the lack of any Shadows attacking her made it the perfect HQ to use in this new place. Of course, there wasn't a whole lot of good that an HQ could do for just one person, at least compared to what good it could do for a whole group instead.


     


    Walking over to the mirror and sink in her room, she washed her face off to try and wake up, before looking in the mirror at herself and losing herself in a train of thought. 


     


    I haven't heard of anybody else making it here safely that I know of. For all I know, I'm the only one who landed at this place. Or the only one who's still alive... NO! I can't think that. It could be possible, but there's no way that I'm the only survivor out of millions. ...Right?


     


    Backing away from the mirror and flopping herself back down on the bed, she sighed deeply. 


     


    Well, in any case, it looks as if for now I'm alone here.While these supplies will last me a good long while, living out the rest of my days as a scared child trying to hide from the boogeyman is not exactly an appealing prospect. Still...


     


    She sat up on her bed, and for probably the 50th time in the past few days flicked her wrist, praying for something to appear. Of course nothing did, just like the other 49 times. She didn't truly expect anything to happen, of course, but that didn't make her any less disappointed. 


     


    Would be nice to have that weapon again. Would mean something is going my way for once.


     


    Stifling another of her sighs, she stood up and, after grabbing her sword from the bed stand and securing it to her waist, walked to and straight out of the hotel door. 


     


    Imaginary powerful blade or no, I need allies, and I need them badly if I truly want to survive. Maybe that one blond shopkeeper in the First District could help me out somehow...


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  11. So apparently, when I'm bored I take Mary Sue tests now. I put Grace, one of my newer OC's to the test.

     

    For the first test results:

     

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    Well then. Now, for the second test:

     

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    I guess I'm doing a good job, then. Or something. The test at times couldn't really apply to her, since the RP that she is in hasn't started quite yet, so. I wouldn't be too surprised if this stuff goes up a few points within a couple of months or so.

     

    EDIT: The second image total is 16, in case it's too small to be seen clearly.

  12. sorry my new post didn't save my profile update i have to re edit it again sorry for the profile

     

    Sorry, but I can't accept your new application. You have already had two chances, and we've rejected you both times, so you gotta wait a while. Sorry man. :/

     

    Also, an announcement I forgot to make a couple posts ago: The RP shall be beginning within the next 1-2 days. Either me or LE shall make a post telling you guys when the thread is up, and shall include a link for it there and in the first post. That is all.

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  13. ok i'm back with my character sorry if its kinda bad but i have to go to my grandparents house (the dont have internet) so here it is http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/david-r3122

     

    While the swaggy glasses remain, the application as a whole is still unsatisfactory. The appearance is rather poor in detail, as it doesn't elaborate beyond "like the picture above but human," which is really not satisfactory at all. The personality is also extremely short, and really doesn't give us a clear view of who exactly he is supposed to be. 

     

    While the backstory is an improvement over last time in terms of length, it is now an unnavigable wall of text that is a slog to simply try to read through. The pacing is also extremely poor and the grammar is sloppy at best.

     

    Since this is your second time getting your app rejected, you need to take a sit out for a few weeks before you can submit another form. We suggest that you look at other RPs here and work on your grammar in the mean time so that next time you might be accepted.

  14. I'll go ahead and join. Here's the character I'll be using in this role-play. 

     

    http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/akari-revonoc-r3097

     

    I'm a KH fan and I think this looks awesome! Can't wait to start!

     

    Accepted. However, I echo what Alex said: your backstory is rather weak, so you should probably patch it up.

     

    May i make a question? Does this mean... "ponies" are not allowed? Or perhaps anthro? Thats what you mean by "human-like"? What if they became human or their anthro version?

     

    Ponies in any form are *not* allowed, at least as they exist on Equestria. Other anthros, such as something like a beastman, however, would be fine.

  15. Alright, so here's my character. If there is anything I should fix on him, please tell me. His name is Allan Johnson, a student teacher.

     

    Accepted.

     

    I may be interested in joining. I do like kingdom hearts, and we could explore new (possibly non-disney) worlds.

     

    Reserved. You'll have two attempts in order to submit an application that we find acceptable before you have to wait a little while(like, a couple weeks or something) to apply again, if you want to. This goes for everybody.

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  16. RP Thread

     

    Your world is not alone.


    Existing in the oft-theorized Realms of Light, the various worlds that make up the whole of existence have been at relative peace for eons, separated from one another by barriers ever since they split apart. Unaware of one-another’s existence, those who live on the worlds are unaware of the greater universe they are part of.

     

    That peace shattered when the Heartless appeared.

     

    Hailing from the Realm of Darkness, the Heartless invaded the worlds and began to greedily consume them, leaving nothing more than a handful of refugees, who would spread throughout the Realm of Light and, if they were lucky, chance upon a new World to live in. But with more worlds being consumed every day, there will soon be no place for life to escape to.

     

    Not all hope is lost, however. King Mickey, of Disney Castle, spends his days seeking out the ‘how’ and ‘why’ of the Heartless’ entrance into the Realm of Light. Perhaps if more is known of the Heartless, the devoured worlds may yet be saved. But even if such a thing were possible, it would take more than one royal mouse to turn the tide of genocide.

     

    Hope lives on in an unlikely world: Traverse Town, known for its sizeable refugee population, may be the new home of several individuals who are capable of changing the tide of battle.

     

    Would you count yourself among them?


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    Welcome to Kingdom Hearts: Alt Mix!

     

    This RP is, quite obviously, a Kingdom Hearts-based one, set during the time of the Heartless Invasion in Kingdom Hearts 1. Your characters are refugees from worlds consumed by the Heartless, left with nothing but memories of those places and a desire to fight back. Banding together is the only way to survive and potentially stop the invasion; however, not everything is as simple as it seems on the surface, and there are those who will stop at nothing to make sure that all of the worlds are consumed in darkness.


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    Rules:

     

    This RP is joint ran by Legendary Emerald and Skyman. These are the rules that have been agreed upon.

     

    General Writing/Posting Rules

    • This is an Advanced RP, which means that you will have to put more effort into your posts.

    • Time-bending is strictly forbidden. Time-bending refers to the act of ignoring part of a player’s post in order to respond to events that are no longer taking place.

      • For example, if character A says something to you, and then immediately leaves to talk to character B (with both actions taking place in the same post), you cannot respond to character A unless you first recognize that his character has already left and is engaged in conversation with someone else.

      • Time-bending check:  

        • Having your character watch actions that have already taken place, and verbally or internally react to events that have passed in the RP, is not time bending.

        • Having your character interrupt actions that have already taken place, in such a way that they contradict other player’s posts, is time bending.

    • You don't have to know that much about Kingdom Hearts to join as it differs significantly from the canon universe, but some basic knowledge would be appreciated. For those who need more information, we direct you to the KH Wiki, or to me - I would be glad to explain anything that you want to know.

    • For major, named characters from the Disney worlds or the Final Fantasy characters, it shall be LE and I controlling them. However, for things such as generic townspeople, they are fair game and can be used in the story by anybody to help move the story forward.

    • Proper spelling and grammar is expected at all times. Minor typos won’t be punished, since that’s just flat-out draconian, but if you make consistent and moderate to major mistakes, even after we have warned you about your grammar/spelling, then we WILL kick you out of the RP. You have been warned.

    • Posts must be, at bare minimum, a full paragraph in length, with two or more being preferred. Stretch your writing muscles, and don’t be afraid to write a over a page in one post if you feel it is necessary to get an idea or action across.

    • Due to the slower pace of this RP, rapid posting is going to be limited. After your first post, you will not be able to post again until at least two other players have posted. This will continue for the duration of the RP.

    • If it has been one day, however, and only one other person has posted, you may post again.

    • Those two rules above may vary depending on the amount of people active in the RP, and so we’ll keep you notified if we decide to change it.

    • Speaking of activity, you must post at least once every two weeks. If you have not posted in that time, then your character will be kicked out of the RP and your spot will be vacated for new players. However, if you post that you’ll be gone for a while, then we’ll automatically double the activity check timer to four weeks, or longer if you specifically designate how long you’ll be gone (although we won’t go above six weeks, since that’s just reaching the point of ridiculousness).

    Character guidelines


    • We will be carefully overlooking and approving every character form that is posted. Just because you post, it does NOT mean you are automatically accepted. If you are accepted, one of us will quote your post and say Accepted. Until then, you are NOT accepted into the RP and cannot post until we say so. If you are not accepted, one of us will quote your post and explain what you need to change to become accepted.

    • No godmodding, Mary-Sues, etc. See The General Guide to Roleplaying for the big no-nos in more detail.

    • Your character should have a Kingdom Hearts specific background. This means that their character fits nicely within the Kingdom Hearts universe - which generally means that so long as they're human or human-like, they should be fine.

    In addition, please place the following fields in the “Other” portion of your character sheet:


    Weapon Type: Note: You CAN in fact have a Keyblade; however, it is NOT required that you do. You can do just fine without one, if you decide that you don’t want one.

    Weapon Design: Self-explanatory. Just give the overall design of your weapon; if you can manage it, a picture would suffice instead of a written description

    Combat Specialization: Magic, Physical Combat, Defense, Healing, etc. If your character does not necessarily have a specialization, putting down “General” works too. This specialization may change over the course of the RP.

    Canon Deviations:

    In case you couldn’t tell, we’re going to be doing a few changes from the canon of the actual games. Many supporting cast members from the original game will be present, though perhaps not in the same way. Other cast members might be replaced or have no representation at all. All of this is done to provide the players with a focused storyline that contains plenty of new surprises, rather than being a beat-for-beat retread of the original game’s story.

     

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    Character List:

    1. Skyman: Grace/F/26

    2. Legendary Emerald: Serah/F/20

    3. Alex_Night: Sam/M/18

    4. LeJAKoJAK: Allan/M/20

    5. Half-Note: Reserved(HURRY UP)

    6. MagicalStarRain: Akari/F/16

    7. Kyoshiro: Alexander/M/19

    8. Cranium Tyranus: Marcon/M/26

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    Kha'zix can't carry, they said. I'm a moron because I even considered trying him, they said. Well I'm pretty sure this disproves that, at least for me :P.

     

    No, nobody in that game said it. Just a couple of other friends that you guys don't know. Still, this amuses me greatly.

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  18. Man, I've been looking for a decent RP for so long! I'll be more than happy to join this one!! I just got a few questions though, hope I don't annoy you too much with them. :s

     

    This'll be a human-only RP, right? If so, I still have to create a human OC. Can it be an already existing character from a game/anime/cartoon, but with different personality and characteristics chosen by me?

     

    If I, for instance, choose to have a Pokemon instead of a Keyweapon. Will I start from Twinleaf Town? Can it be any Pokemon as long as it's not legendary and it's in his first form? Do I need to have a Drive Form for it or can I choose not to?

     

    English is not my first language, so I may make a few minor grammatical errors. I hope this isn't much of a problem.

     

    I don't mind the questions.

     

    For the first one, yes this is human-only, at least at the beginning(due to character development/transformation/what-have-you into Nobodies/Heartless. But that's later).

     

    For the existing character thing...hmm. I guess if you sufficiently change the character's personality and at least some of their appearance, I won't mind you basing your character off of an existing character from some show or whatever. If that makes sense.

     

    You can start with both a Keyweapon AND a Pokemon, although the it'll take a few posts before you get the Keyweapon most likely(this is going to start right before the invasion, so). But yes, you can start with any Pokemon so long as it's not Legendary or a final-evolution. I'm not sure about non-evolving Pokes that aren't Legendaries, but I'll think about it.

     

    Your grammar probably won't be an issue, since it looked like you did fine in that post!

     

    ....Oh my that was a big wall of text. Well I would say that a Kingdom Hearts and Pokemon crossover is a weird idea but then I remembered that Kingdom Hearts itself is a Disney and Final Fantasy crossover. Either way I think this would make for a really cool and interesting RP but I have some questions.

     

    1. Will this all take place in Sinnoh or will we eventually go to other regions like Unova and Kanto?

    2. Should we really involve Team Galactic? They where defeated at the end of Diamond and Pearl, so we would need a reason for them to be back.

    3. How long should the average post be? I know you said this is an "Advanced RP" but what does that mean? For example would about a paragraph be enough?

     

    Also I know nothing about Kingdom Hearts past the first game and the only reason I know a few things about the first one is because I watched a "Lets Play" on it. I will make my character and post a link to him in a bit, I just need some time to make him.

     

    1. That's classified :P. Seriously though, I have not decided yet and that won't be decided for a while yet, since it really depends on how the plot unfolds for some details like that.

    2. Well, this is Alternate Universe, and thus I interpret it as being before the events of Diamond/Pearl/Platinum. It's lazy, yes, but it's better than having some half-assed explanation for their return to power.

    3. Well, the "Advanced" RP section has a character limit of 800, so there's your minimum. I'll take that, really, however it would be nice if it was longer, as that means more plot developments per post. I am perfectly fine though with just 800 characters, if you can't come up with anything/you feel satisfied with your post.

     

     

    Hey Sky, I'm just popping in to reserve a slot for my character in this RP. She's nearly done, but I still need to come up with a backstory for her. Plus, this is the first time in a good while that I'm RPing as a female character

     

    You're Reserved then. Just post when you're done. Drizzle and N are both also reserved, just so you know, should you still want to join.

    • Brohoof 1
  19. Do you by any chance have any space left? I'll admit, I'm very much so intrigued by this RP, and thus I want to join. However, it's going to take me some time to come up with a backstory/whole new character(since the one I currently have will most likely not fit in to this setting, if only because his cutie mark represents computer things, which doesn't seem to exist in this universe from the quick glance I had), so I just wanted to see if I could reserve a potential space while I come up with something.

     

    http://mlpforums.com...tache-r1335 This is the character I mentioned before, if you were curious.

  20. Set Up



    It all happened so fast.

    One moment you were in Twinleaf Town, at your home, enjoying the warm sun of this bright and cloudless day. Maybe you had problems on your mind, or maybe you were enjoying a carefree existence. Regardless, your priorities, and what you define as a 'problem', are going to change drastically. Because then the Darkness came. It swarmed like a flood, alive, biting at everything, overcoming everyone, drowning out all light. All around you the screams of your fellow neighbors escalate, but they too are drowned out, until there is only silence, and the intense certainty that this is your end. But then there's something...a spark. Of light...of hope? And suddenly the darkness abates, writhes away, and you stand, armed with a weapon you've never seen before. But the darkness readies a second strike, and you'll have to use that weapon very soon...

    They must set off on a quest, to find and seal the heart of the world away before the Heartless can. But their quest will not be easy. Team Galactic's evil hearts have attracted many Heartless, which they now work with. The Heartless have corrupted powerful legendary Pokémon, which must be stopped. And Nobodies, (the emotionless shell that is left when a Heartless corrupts someone's heart) are also searching for the heart of the world, so that they may again feel emotion and be whole. Set against such odds, can victory ever be achieved?





    The RP


    Hello, welcome to The Dark is Rising, a Kingdom Hearts/Pokémon Crossover. If you haven't played Kingdom Hearts, worry not, for this lacks all of the characters and plot of that incredibly complex series. To put it briefly, an unknown force controls beasts known as The Heartless. These creatures are born of darkness, and can infect the hearts of others, killing them and twisting their hearts into dark renditions of their former selves. This unknown force has recently unloaded this hoard upon the world of Pokémon, starting with Twinleaf town in Sinnoh. It couldn't have picked a worse time-a string of natural disasters have driven the people and Pokémon of all other regions into this one. The Heartless could corrupt the world of Pokémon entirely, and if they find and corrupt the world's heart, it will forever fall to darkness. However, in the initial attack on Twinleaf town, Hope was sparked. Arceus gifted powerful weapons, known as “Keyweapons”, to those with strong enough hearts to wield them. These Keyweapons are the only things that can destroy a Heartless. They can have a variety of forms, depending on the wielder, but all are powerful forces for good, and the one thing standing between destruction and salvation.

    Well, I hope we've piqued your interest. We'll do our very best to make this a fun experience, but in this interest of order, we'll need to discuss some guidelines.



    Rules


    1. The basics, no Godmodding, Mary Sues, etc. You have no excuse not to know these.
    2. Constant interaction between your own characters and none with others is expressly forbidden.
    3. All Pokémon must start off at their first evolutionary stage. Evolution will be approved by me, just so that we don't have final stage evolutions very quickly.
    4. No Fakemon, unless you can make an EXTREMELY good case. Even then, I'm just going to suggest that you stick with the canon Pokemon so that everybody's lives are slightly easier.
    5. The maximum amount of Pokémon one character can own is three, of any Generation. You may only start with one, however.
    6. Characters may not own any Legendary Pokemon.
    7. Characters can not start out as Nobodies or Heartless - Humans only, please! Once the plot gets going, however, than your character may become one of the above if certain events occur.
    8. Proper spelling and grammar is expected at all times. I will not chew you out for minor typos, but if it is consistent, I will have to put my foot down.

    9. You are not accepted until I quote you and say Accepted. This is just to make sure that your form is fully finished/up-to-snuff.
    10. You may not post until at least two people before you have posted. This is to make sure the RP goes at a decent speed without one or two people posting several posts rapidly. If, however, only one person has posted before you and it has been a day since the last post, you may post again. This rule is subject to change based on activity level.
    11. Every two weeks I'll do an activity check. This is to make sure that everybody is active. If, however, you have told me/posted here that you are going to be away for some time, I will extend the activity check on you to a reasonable amount.
    12. This is less of a rule and more of a notification, but this is indeed an Advanced Roleplay. Only apply if you don't mind being in one.

    There are three things I would like for you to add to your "Other" section. The first one is these two questions:

    Keyweapon form: (Do they wield a Keyblade? A Keyblowgun? A Keyclaw?)
    Pokémon: (Name, gender, and species. Ex: Rebecca the Female Zigzagoon)


    The other two are two features unique to this RP, described below. HOWEVER, you are NOT required to have these forms filled out yet. They will apply later on in the story, so I am getting them out of the way now and allowing you time to think of what you want. You can have them filled out right at the start if you wish, but neither of the forms will apply until after a suitable amount of time in the story has passed, and I shall not be examining the forms for whether or not to accept you.





    Keyweapons and Keychains


    The first unique feature we need to discuss are the Keyweapons. Every character gets a Keyweapon. It's form is altered to the character's personality and preference:One may wield a pair of Keyguns, another a Keysword, yet another a Keybow. Any possible weapon may be used. A character can not change his or her Keyweapon's form at will-it is what it is, from the Roleplay's beginning to its end. Note that all Keyweapons must be designed with Keys in mind, as the 'Key' part of them is essential to the plot. Another thing that is interesting about Keyweapons is their relationship with memories. After bonding with a Pokémon, or defeating a very powerful enemy, Keychains may be formed. These, when attached to the Keyweapon, change it's appearance and give it extra abilities and a special move. These are all created and customized by the Player, but must be approved by the Dungeon Masters. You will gain the ability to forge a Keychain when defeating certain enemies, and it must relate to that enemy in certain ways. If you do not want to create a Keychain, a generic one will be provided for you. You may designate one of your Pokémon for the creation of a Keychain too, and it must be based on that Pokémon.

    The form for a Keychain is as follows:


    Name: (The Keychain's name)
    Appearance: (Picture or written description, both are acceptable)
    Party Pokémon Keychain was forged from: (If it was forged from a Pokémon in your party, name it here. If not, disregard this field)
    Enemy Keychain was forged from: (If it was forged from defeating an enemy, name it here. If not, disregard this field)
    Extra abilities given: (If the Keychain was formed from a party Pokémon, lets say a Chimchar, an ability may be that this Keyweapon can set things on fire with this Keychain equipped. If it was taken from defeating an enemy, say an Articuno, then an ability may be that damage dealt by the Keyweapon with this Keychain equipped is now Ice-type)
    Special Move Given: (If the Keychain was forged from a party Pokémon, lets say a Chimchar, a special move may be setting the Keyweapon on fire for a limited period of time to boost damage. If it was taken from defeating an enemy, say an Articuno, then a move may be being able to summon a powerful gust of Icy Wind).




    Drive Forms


    Another feature unique in this Roleplay is the ability to create Drive Forms. A Drive Form entails merging with one of one's Pokémon, becoming more powerful in the process. This entitles the player to use all of the Pokémon's moves, and access to a powerful Special Move of the player's creation. If you do not wish to create a Drive Form, we will be happy to provide some for you. Characters can't be in a Drive Form for longer than what is reasonable. I'm going to leave that judgement up to you, but please, no 5 hour long drive forms or other insanity.

    The form for a Drive Form is below.

    Name: (The name of the form)
    Altered Appearance: (The character is being combined with a Pokémon. Explain how they will look different. This is totally up to you, and for all I care you can just have very minor differences in look).
    Pokémon Used: (The Pokémon who is being used in this Drive Form).
    Abilities: (As well as gaining the Pokémon's movepool, you may gain the ability to fly if the Pokémon has wings, or to survive under water if they are aquatic. Any such things should go here).
    Special Move: (If you are in a Drive Form with a Chimchar, a Special Move may be tossing fireballs. if you are in a Drive Form with a Gyarados, a Special Move may be creating a tidal wave).




    Remember!


    Only Keyweapons can slay Heartless or Nobodies. Pokémon and other weapons can harm them, but they will be not die unless struck with a Keyweapon. Keep this in mind.

    Your character IS allowed to fall to the forces of darkness. Not at the beginning(don't want to split the group that early after all!), but later on yes. But they won't die. You may turn them into a Heartless or a Nobody, with all the fun character development this entails.
    • Brohoof 7
  21. Excellent move there, Electrobolt! I would be disappointed if we lost Numbers to the changelings as well. By the way, I can't wait to see how the dramatic dismissal of Artsy will play out and how Jack Stache will react. Speak of which...

     

    @, Hey, Sky-Master! Where you at, my man? ^_^

     

    Actually...this is probably where Jack makes his leave too. It is literally impossible for me to come up with absolutely anything that Jack would have now that Artsy is gone. Her existence was very much so key to him, so really there's...not much left. Almost all of his interactions with other characters were really just with her, with one true interaction occurring when he digitized Serah. Thus, he has nothing, absolutely nothing, so I will simply be leaving the RP I guess. I honestly don't expect things to last much longer, honestly, unless you guys somehow find somebody who can take Arylett's direction and do it very effectively.

     

    EDIT: Actually, this might as well be my unofficial withdrawl from ever joining an RP here again. Beyond the murder mystery by Scootacool, there really aren't that many RP's that interest me here. There was one that was going to be released sometime in the future that I was going to be interested in from Arylett, but, well, she's not here anymore, so. Unless somebody comes up with some really good idea I won't be joining another RP.

    • Brohoof 2
  22. Well then. Welcome, Matt! Didn't 100% expect you to join, but it is nice nonetheless. Over here on the left, we have the main section of the forum, where you can discuss about generally anything relating to the show. On the right, you got the art area, with both pony and non-pony artwork displayed, including things such as videos, indie games, music, etc. Down the middle we got the Roleplay section, which is currently very much so active and always wanting more people for RPs, whether they are pony or non-pony related. And I suppose behind us or something(damn you lack of directions!), we have Beyond Equestria, which is non-pony entirely and contains things like forum games, media discussion, and a general non-pony discussion area.

     

    Once again, welcome to MLP forums!

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