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  1. @, Rainbow gladly returned the kiss. She trotted over to the table and looked at the paper. "Ooh, these are some interesting ideas you got here," she commented. ~~~ "Sounds interesting," said Riley. "Who knows? Maybe I'll wake up next to Anala in her bed!" he joked. He sat down at the bar. "A Pega-Drift, please," he said to the bartender.
  2. @, Rainbow took a while to think of what to say. "Well... you know how I used to give you a hard time back in school for being sort of a... nerd?" she said. "I apologised for that and stopped doing it, and I learnt more about you. You have such a kind heart, and a way with words... I just liked you as a friend, but a great on, nonetheless." ~~~ "Any particularly interesting drinks here?" Riley asked Thunderlane as they trotted into the bar.
  3. @, Rainbow turned to Thunderlane. "Looks like I won't be needing to stay at your house after all, Thunder," she said. She turned back to Rising. "Lead the way, handsome." ~~~ "So... I guess now would be a good time to get that cider?" said Riley to Thunderlane. "Yeah, these two deserve some alone time," said Thunderlane. "Come along, there's a great bar up in Cloudsdale."
  4. @, Rainbow just stood there, speechless. This was not a dream or a hallucination. A pony had just confessed their love for her. How long had Rising even been hiding this?! She slowly walked up to Rising, staring at him, before she wrapped a wing around him and kissed him on the lips.
  5. @, Rainbow raised an eyebrow. "Well, then, what about all that sobbing?" she asked. She started mocking Rising's crying. "Waaaaah!" she said in a mock crying tone as she held her hooves over her eyes to add to her imitation. In her normal voice and mindset, she asked, "What was all that about?" ~~~ Riley, meanwhile, wasn't sure what to say about the situation. "Wanna grab a cider sometime?" he whispered to Thunderlane. The grey stallion nodded.
  6. @, 'Oh no...' Riley flew after Rising. So did Rainbow. She stopped in front of him. "Geez, why are you acting like such a crybaby?" she asked. "In case you haven't met him, he's my friend Thunderlane. See, I accidentally flew through the wall of my house, so while the repairponies are fixing it, Thunderlane is letting me stay at his place for the night."
  7. @, "Uh, you're right, Rising, it's getting pretty late out here," said Riley. He let out one of his adorable yawns. Just then, Thunderlane swooped down, landing next to Rainbow Dash. "Hey, Dashie, ready to come sleep at my place?" he asked, nudging her. "Sure!" answered Rainbow.
  8. @, "Of course. How else would I have been able to compliment them?" answered Rainbow. "The ponies who write the newspaper reviews are just snobs. I took care in reading your story and understood all those themes you put into the story." 'Well, Rainbow, you won't be disappointed at the next one.'
  9. @, "Not so great?" repeated Rainbow. "Rising, I liked your last book. I wasn't expecting the ending one little bit, and that's what made it so great." "And like I said, Rising, I think our Everfree Forest story idea could pass for just about novel-length," added Riley.
  10. @, Rainbow tilted her head. "Something the matter, Rising?" "Dashie," said Riley. "There's something about Rising I think you'd like to hear..." ... "He's writing a new story! And I'm helping him!" he said at last. Rainbow looked at them. "Awesome!" she said. "What's it gonna be about?"
  11. @, "Yeah, sure, I guess," responded Riley. He got up and flapped his wings, creating a gust to blow out the fire. "Great singing, by the way. I'm not sure which is better - your voice or your memory." As they walked out, Rainbow Dash swooped down in front of them. "Nice singing, boys," she complimented.
  12. Would Scott Weinger (Aladdin) be a good voice for Riley?

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      deletedaccount2

      YES! That or Robin Williams.

  13. @, "Okay, this is the last part of the song now," informed Riley. He cleared his throat and then finished the song. "Nopony living can ever stop me, As I go walking that freedom highway, Nopony living can ever make me turn back, This land was made for you and me."
  14. @, Riley nodded his head in admiration. If Rising's memory was this good, no doubt he'd be taking home the first place trophy in a tournament of Snap. "In the shadow of the steeple I saw my people, By the relief office I seen my people, As they stood there hungry, I stood there asking, Is this land made for you and me?"
  15. @, "Good job, Rising!" cheered Riley. "You'll be learning the entire song in just one night at this rate! Impressive!" "As I went walking I saw a sign there, And on the sign it said "No Trespassing", But on the other side it didn't say nothing, That side was made for you and me."
  16. @, 'Well, that was quite a shift in attitude,' Riley mused to himself. "You do seem pretty keen on thhis place now," said Riley. "And you remember the song really well. How about we stay here for a bit longer, and I'll teach you some more of the song?" "When the sun came shining, and I was strolling, And the wheat fields waving and the dust clouds rolling, As the fog was lifting a voice was chanting, This land was made for you and me."
  17. @, "I see..." said Riley. "Each to their own." He chomped down the last of his marshmallow. "Okay, so this is what we have so far," he began. "Two friends go for a trip in the forest. One of them is excited about it, the other is fearful. Little do they know that the forest is actually sentient, and takes advantage of the two friends' conflicting opinions to turn them against each other." "Pethaps that can be a longer story than the other ideas?"
  18. @, "Well done!" said Riley. "So, it seems I've done my job in helping you with your fear of the Everfree Forest," he said. "Does this mean you want to come again tomorrow?" he asked. "If not, we'll just stay at home and start writing up our story with all those ideas we have now."
  19. @, "You're a fast learner," commented Riley. "Now, I think this next part will be the last part we learn before we take a break. Don't want your mind getting exhausted, right?" "I've roamed and rambled and I followed my footsteps, To the sparkling sands of her diamond deserts, And all around me a voice was sounding, This land was made for you and me."
  20. @, "Well done!" said Riley, clapping his hooves. "Well, if you're satisfied you remember the chorus, let's move onto the next part." "As I was walking that ribbon of highway, I saw above me that endless skyway, I saw below me that golden valley, This land was made for you and me."
  21. @, "It's okay, I've picked up a few," said Riley, handing Rising a sharp stick and a small bag of marshmallows. "Here's a personal favourite. I'll teach it to you in small chunks." He cleared his throat and began to sing. "This land is your land, this land is my land, From Califoalnia to the Neigh York island, From the red wood forest to the Hoof Stream waters, This land was made for you and me." He spoke normally. "Like it? And can you repeat it back to me?"
  22. @, "Youre very welcome, Rising," said Riley, patting his Pegasus friend on the back. "Now we can't leave this fire unattended." He sat down next to the fire. "So... do you happen to know any campfire songs?" he asked. "I know quite a few. I picked them up from my school camping trip when I was a colt."
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