Commander Frost

As the train was falling, Twilight was crying. "I can’t believe this is how it’s going to end." Just then Twilight felt a magic vibe emitting from her and her bag which contained the elements of harmony. With almost no time to spare, there was a force field protecting the train. They were carefully placed on the ground next to the track. "Good job Twilight." Applejack said. But Twilight wasn’t the one using magic. Her train of thought was interrupted as Flash was shouting out her name looking for her. “Twilight! Twilight are you ok?” He asked. “I'm fine.” She yelled back. He quickly spotted her and ran to her as quickly as possible. “Are you ok Twily?” “I said I'm fine. But, something happened while we were falling. I don’t know what it was, but it was big.” “Yeah I saw your bag glow.” “Twilight looked in her bag. The elements were still there, but they were different now. They didn’t seem… right. “Is everything ok Twily?” Flash asked. “Yes it's just that, the elements seem different.” “They look the same to me.” “Yes they look the same, but they don’t feel the same.” That’s when twilight notice that the element piece embedded in there elements seemed a bit grayer and a bit duller. But she shrugged it off. “Let’s get going. Head count, Applejack?” “Here.” “Fluttershy?” “Here” “Rarity?” “Here darling, but my dress is ruined.” “Princess Crystal?” “Here” “Rainbow dash?” “Here” “Pinkie pie?” Silence. “Pinkie Pie? Are you ok?” Again silence. “Oh no! Where's Pinkie?” Applejack said. “Pinkie! Pinkie! Pinkie Pie?!” The mane six said aloud. “Found’er! Applejack said. When they ran over, their grins turned to frowns. Because what they saw, wiped the looks off their faces. Pinkie pie was struck on the head during the catastrophic mayhem. And she had a long scar across her head. As the train started flipping through the air, Pinkie Pie thought they had started a flying train. “OOOOO this is soo-“ SMACK! She was hit on the head by something pointy and cold. The last thing she thought was- “Fun” When they fully examined pinkie, they found 2 broken bones, and bruised legs. But that’s not that what worried them. “The gash on pinkies forehead has given her a concussion, not permanent, but I don’t know how long she will be asleep.” Twilight said. They bandaged Pinkie up and laid her on the ground. “Hey where's Rainbow?” Applejack said. “Oh, umm she told me not to tell anyone but she went up to the cloud up there. Wait that cloud was white before, now it’s gray.” Fluttershy said. “I'll see what she's doing.” Twilight said. “So twilight flew up to find Rainbow Dash sobbing into the cloud. “Rainbow dash? Are you ok?” Rainbow quickly wiped her tears and nervously turned around to see Twilight. “Uh-h-h-h Twilight, Why are you up here?” I came up here to see why you were up here. Why were you crying?” “I wasn’t crying!” “Rainbow Dash, what's wrong, you can always tell me.” Rainbow Dash looked at Twilight for a second. Then started to sniffle. “It’s all my fault that Pinkie's hurt.” “No it’s not Rainbow Dash, that pillar-“ “No Twilight, you don't understand, she was my best friend and I was sitting right next to her. I could've stopped that pillar from hitting her head. But I didn’t.” She buried her head into the cloud. “Rainbow Dash, you couldn’t have helped pinkie even if you moved as quick as you could.” “Twilight you don’t understand. Pinkie Pie was my first real friend.” “What about all those other people you said were your friends like Gilda?” “She was a friend. But pinkie was my only true friend.” “I do understand Rainbow Dash, but there was nothing you could have done. Now can we continue on our way? Pinkie would want you to keep going.” “Alright for Pinkie. But you gotta promise not to tell a soul about this conversation!” “I promise.” When they returned, Twilight said somepony needed to carry pinkie. “I’ll do it.” Rainbow Dash said. They helped place pinkie on Rainbow Dash's back and secured her with a blanket and rope. And continued towards their destination. Part 7: http://mlpforums.com/topic/78992-the-ballad-of-the-ice-princess-part-7/ Give a special thx to Our new Proofreader Mitchfizz

Lyra Heartstrings: Umm I would go with the Freddie guy. What about you Sweetie Drops? Sweetie Drops: HAHAHAHA Uranus. HAHAHAHA.

(My oc:) Rarity? Can you make my Armor look better? It looks to dull.

Lyra Heartstrings: HaNdS? Sweetie Drops: She means She likes it. Lyra Heartstrings: I can speak for my self! Its very pretty music.

Lyra Heartstrings: Oh that makes much more sense. I would probably be a bit concerned but I would remember my manners and say hello. Sweetie Drops: I would slam the door in his face. Lyra Heartstrings: Sweetie! Sweetie Drops: What? I don't like it when people just stare at me.

Lyra Heartstrings: What does liking at us mean? Sweetie Drops: Yeah what does it mean?

I have a question. Why were you so mean to rarity at the gala?

Lyra Heartstrings: Well, it would have to be that song Vinnle Scratch and Pinkie Pie made together, what was the name of it Sweetie Drops? Sweetie Drops: I believe it is called Pony Rock Anthem. Lyra Heartstrings: Yes that's it.

Lyra Heartstrings: What do you mean by become with? Sweetie Drops: When are you going to ask me a question? Lyra Heartstrings: SHHH Go away Sweetie drops, he's asking me stuff. You'll have your turn.

Lyra Heartstrings: Well I love all the treats there but my favorite would have to be their Strawberry pie. I'm still upset about how those mean parasprites ate my slice the other day.

Lyra Heartstrings: Umm can you be a bit more specific about what your asking please?

Lyra Heartstrings: What is a Klondike bar. It sounds yummy. Do we have Klondike bars in Equestria Sweetie Drops? Sweetie Drops: Umm I don't think so.

Sweetie Drops: Are you asking me or Lyra?

Sweetie Drops: Hello there Everypony! My Name is Sweetie drops (Bon-Bon), and I am here to answer any questions you may have. Lyra Heartstrings: And I'm here to! Sweetie Drops: Oh yeah and Lyra is here. We'll answer any questions you may have. Oh Yeah and me and Lyra are having a little debate. Which one of us is better background pony?

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