HomuraBL

Thank you Finest. Glad to be back.

Hay everypony! I'm back after 2 weeks without a computer! Did you miss me...please say yes... For those who don't know what happened, basically my computer's charging input, (I think is what its called), broke. I had to get the computer sent to get fixed but they failed and I'm getting ahead of myself. Luckily for me, Christmas was right around the corner. I got to play most of the games I asked for, (Only not getting one which I didn't care for much.) I was able to check back a couple time via my 3ds but it wasn't the same without the computer. Mostly because of its horrible loading and inability to watch videos. I later found out that they failed at fixing the computer and I had to get a new one. I didn't pay for the computer but I did had to pay for the insurance and protection for the computer. Anyway, yep I'm back! And this next part is for sobadnomad. I will try my best to work on the fanfics but since this is a new computer I don't have the program installed so I have to stick with what I have and also I have to talk to my pre reader. I can't wait to start back up and I'm glad to be back!

Look, its about time I said this. I have about an hour to do this before the battery dies. Ok, an unfortunate thing has happen to me. My computer won't charge. I checked the outlets and stuff and confirm that it's the computer. Two computers have already broken before it and so...My parents won't buy me another. Do you see where this is going? I'm basically going to have to live with no computer for a very long time, however, I do still have internet!...From my 3ds. Here's basically whats going to happen: 1. I won't be able to do a lot of things on this forum. I'll still be able to come here...just not talk as much. 2.I won't be able to see videos 3.The only way I can actually have internet is at my mom's and I only stay there for like 3 days. 4.I will no longer be able to write fanfictions anymore... Through this sadness is a small hope from two sources! 1. From some miracle, the computer will be able to get fix. Knowing my luck...this won't happen. 2.I pretty sure I have enough stuff to sell to convince my parents to pay the other part. That dosen't mean people are going to buy the necessary amount of stuff. I'm truly sorry. What makes it all worse is that knowing this is all my fault. To know that I've been irresponsible, to think that I'm just useless. I'm going to try my best to get a new computer. It most likely will take me a few months but with enough dedication I can pull this off. I'll then finally be able to talk to you guys again...Something I will miss so much. I Promise! I will be back as soon as I can!

banished.

Chapter 4 is finally out! http://www.fimfiction.net/story/4432/4/Pinkie-Pie%3A-Feelings-Get%21/Chapter-4%3A-Shyness-is-not-a-Rarity%21

Earth Quick was busy helping to make the party. "Remember! We don't want to disappoint the chancellor!" Earth Quick chuckled to himself. She is sure to love this! Earth Quick, noticed a one of the party helpers doing it wrong. "Hay! Not right there! It needs to be a couple feet to the left."

I just read your spoiler thing...I should hate you for including Pinkie Pie in that but...The story is good enough to kinda overlook.

Earth Quick made sure not to be seen when Smart Cookie left. "I just don't understand why she picked her and not me..." Earth Quick then sighed and went back to planning the party.

(Quick note: I'm going to say Earth Quick is jealous of Smart cookie for her being Pudding's right hand pony) Earth Quick noticed Smart cookie enter the chancellor's room. He decided to spy and see what she is up to.

"As you request chancellor." Earth Quick smiled and left while shouting: "Ponies! You heard her! Its time to get ready for the party!"

(Ok I'll start two) Earth Quick entered Chancellor Pudding top's chambers and smiled. "Anything you request of me my chancellor?"

Character sheet: Name: Earth Quick Gender: Male Description: Very fast Earth pony who can also be fun. Personality: Nice and kind hearted except when it comes to Smart cookie. Has a deep respect and admires Chancholler Pudding top and will do her bidding. Other then that he is pretty fun pony. Tribe/Species: Earth pony. Other: Photo(Not necessary): Remove wings.

Can you give more depth in what you mean by basic premise? To be perfectly honest, I dont' see it either. Your fanfic is good yes. But its not a work of art.

You told me you didn't have an editor! Anyway, I can honestly say I'm truly jealous of you. You have been able to attract more people on this site to your fanfic then mine while it being Oc, Self insert, and usually worst of all shipping a mane 6 with the self insert. I'm truly stun on how you got more people to like this with those factors in mind. I'm not saying I hate the story, Its a great story. I mean, as long as you stay away from Pinkie Pie when it comes to any shipping with your character I'll be ok. You are truly great at making fanfics. I truly envy you. I would also like to ask one final thing. Do you have any ideas where I can find more pre readers? The one I have suggest I should get more.

You know, I think Lyra x bon bon is in my top 5 favorite ships. I approve of this and its awesome!