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StableStahl

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  1. Saying that people that correct others on their grammar are "stuck up" is a bit of an insult. Now, I'm mainly an editor/proofreader over there and I value grammar highly and whenever a story has too many grammar errors or misspellings, I tend to not read it. Whenever others correct others on their grammar, they're not trying to be a jerk; they're trying to be nice and make that person's story easier to read. Believe me, I've had some horrible things to edit. Now then, whenever I see a grammar error or something of the like, I usually tell that person that they need an editor or proofread, but I never really apply for the position, since I usually have so much on my plate to begin with. However, I will admit that some people do come off as jerks while correcting others' grammar. I believe you may be talking about those lot, but they're not that bad. It's not like they're saying things like, "That should be "their" not "there". Go kill yourself, since you don't know good grammar." Heck, I've never seen anyone say something like that and if someone did, I'd probably go off at that person a bit. Anyway! Grammar is important if you want be accepted as a good writer. Some people on FimFiction are just using fan fiction to hone their writing skills so they can publish a book, so, yes, they'd take grammar seriously. While you may not think grammar is important, it really is. To prove my statement, go watch an episode of Jacksfilms' "Your Grammar Sucks". That is how someone sounds like, and how it'd be read in a reader's head, whenever a story has bad grammar. Do you want that? Does anyone want that? No. No they do not. If literature stoops so low that low quality grammar in actual books are a thing, it will make me cry.
  2. Calling all writers! No matter what you write. Be it poetry, fan fiction, fiction, scripts, music, anything! I, StableStahl (or bathroomstahl on here), have created a Steam group made for writers helping writers... or just normal people helping writers. http://steamcommunity.com/groups/AspiringAuthors <-- is the group. Please read the rules before joining and I hope everyone likes it. I made it so I can help other writers and that's my main plan for it. I hope everyone likes it
  3. Hello everypony. It is I "bathroomstahl"! And with me today I have a story to share with you guys. Now, note that this is based on a true story and a really good friend of mine is going through the basics of the situation inside of the story. I hope you guys like it; I'm putting quite a bit of work into this story, since it means so much to me. Please comment and leave reviews on if you like it or not. You can find it here: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/203594/through-the-doors -bathroomstahl
  4. dang... he's a busy pony if he has a dairy farm on the side... and how would they get said milk, do they use some type of machine or do it by hoof?
  5. Just because they are on a cheese float does not mean that cows are used for milk valid point, that's something more logical then what I was getting....
  6. Well there is soy milk as well and soy does contain protein, I was just using almond milk as an example, since everypony else was going towards the animal milk route.
  7. Dude, you implied that the donkeys were sub-citizens to the ponies of Equestria, and said that they are using another race of hooven creatures for their dairy needs. So you brought up racism. There are other ways to make dairy; ever heard of almond milk?
  8. do you realize we're going off topic... and going into racism... and you do realize cows aren't the only things that make milk right... and no I'm not talking about goats
  9. forgot to mention this, but what about the bufflo, which are cow related, are they also considered the butt of society?
  10. what about the donkeys and zebras, they are both related to horses, or ponies, but are not horses, and donkeys are farm animals
  11. All of you guys are basically saying 'They're using cows'... I hope you know that's basically like going up to someone else and asking them to use their breast milk... cows can talk and have their own personlity...
  12. So after the episode of 'Pinkie Pride' I saw a post on Twitter saying that pizza is now cannon and I got to wondering... where do they get/make the cheese, or any other milk based product, from...?
  13. Thanks for saying that on my fanfic, that really made my day, or night in my case. But if you're looking for more chapters on it, it's on FIMfiction, but I did rewrite the prologue and change the name of it to "The Fall of the Night" just search "bathroomstahl" into Google and you'll find my FIMfiction acciubt.
  14. I'd have to choose Equestria, not because I hate it here on Earth, but because I hate what humanity has become. I believe Equestria would be a lot better than living on this God forsaken planet, with the rest of humanity. Yes, I'd miss my family and my friends, but I'd rather be in a place filled with peace and friendship than here on Earth, which is full of hate, and war.
  15. StableStahl

    slice of life Dreams

    Hello everypony, bathroomstahl here and I have rewritten the first chapter of Dreams and am here to repost it, but first here’s the summary I wrote for it: What is a dream? Is it only an image of your imagination, or is it something more, something that’s real? What will happen when three teenagers start to have dreams, dreams of them in Equestria, dreams of them being ponies? What will happen when three ponies start having dreams, dreams of them being in a strange new world, a world where no one is accepted, a world where strange creatures live? What will happen when these dreams switch the humans and ponies soul and mind? What will happen when the three teenagers realize that they miss days in their dreams, when they realize that someone, or pony, else are inhabiting their bodies? This is a story of how three teenagers and three ponies switch bodies, minds, and souls. Where the teenagers are sent is to a world where everyone is accepted, where everyone is happy, where everyone is a pony. While the ponies are sent to a world where only a few are accepted, where only a few people find true happiness, where everyone are humans. Three humans will realize that their worlds are different than Equestria, that being accepted is something that is truly great, and what it is like to have true happiness. While the three ponies will witness what the true nature of humans is, what it’s like to not be accepted, what we humans deal with daily, or, in simpler terms, something nobody, pony or human, should have to deal with. Author’s note: I’m going to give you guys a link to it, because I don’t really think I can post mutable chapters on here without making mutable posts. Link: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/145773/dreams Please give me some reviews on this, I’ll take anypony’s opinion on it ^-^
  16. Well you see me and Wing Beat are orphans and we tried to survive in Canterlot, but nopony would give us jobs so we resorted to thievery, and we've been doing so ever since.
  17. Currently my best friend, Wing Beat, and I are thieves inside the wondrous city of Canterlot.
  18. I’m trying to get more of my friends to join the herd… but they absolutely refuse to watch the show, except for two and one of them has already watched it and hates it the other said he’ll watch it but I haven’t been able to let him borrow my first season yet . But everyone else refuse to watch it because they say it’s “creepy” for a teenage guy to watch a little girls show. So can somepony try and help me to convince them to watch it without practically forcing them to.
  19. Can somepony get me a detailed map of Equestria. It would be a big help to my and the fanfiction I am currentally writing. Get to me as soon as possible XD
  20. Ask me anything everypony. I'll answer your question best to my ability XD!
  21. So out of curiosity do any of you people watch anime as well as ponies, I personally watch Naruto, Bleach, Full Metal Alchemist, Fairy Tail, Ouran High School Host Club, and Bakuman XD.
  22. Hi everypony, I am bathroomstahl XD, and I write fanfic! Does anypony write too XD!
  23. StableStahl

    adventure Dreams

    Dreams are more dangerous than you think. What happens when normal teenager Alex Orin and a pegasus from Equestria gets switched through their dreams? Chapter 1 Changes.docx
  24. Twilight was shocked to learn that there was a seventh element. Nightmare Moon has won. Now Twilight and the others have to find the seventh element. For Twilight and the others to defeat Nightmare Moon they must find the last element. It's not completely done yet this is just what I have so far, enjoy XD! The Seventh Element the whole story.docx
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