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Blog Comments posted by Solid
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Very interesting story, took me a while to realize that the characters are all in fact animals 0.o
Some grammar aside, I think the biggest issue here is excessive information/action. Such as when Kunni placed a paw on Alexander we know Kunni is comforting Alex, there's no need to add the "comforting him." May seem like a negligible issue but it adds up and could be a bit annoying.
Overall I'm impressed, this story has a lot of potential with its creativity and unique background, you just need to do some twinkling with the expressions and writing style and it will be a great story. Keep it up :3
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Yep, this sums the gay thing up pretty well.
I will review your oc!
in NightmareCadence's Blogs
A blog by Slice0Pie in General
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I like these kind of blogs
Uh, awkward question but, are human ocs allowed? (They're metal gear and mlp crossover)
Which probably means no cutiemark unfortunately.
Hope it's allowed. :33