Dark Qiviut

...nd Automobiles, which started with the cover itself xD

It was a very fun comic with a lot of good execution. The landmark crazy criticism is one I can't really fully delve into because I only saw the average tourist who was wanting to sight-see - while AJ was there for business, Rarity was just a tourist. Can't really say that's a good criticism in my eyes, unless I'm going to criticize every tourist out there xP

It was more of that Rarity kept messing things up in the arc because she was sightseeing the landmarks rather than be more alert for her friend's needs. Course Applejack wasn't great either with her lack of good business sense(seriously, has no business sense despite running the most successful one in Ponyville). Their characters being not portrayed to possibly cynical standards wasn't the comic's flaw but rather the plot was rather pointless other than to show off the world...

The plot was more Slice of Life than pointless. Whilst arcs like "Reflections" and "The Return of Chrysalis" would be more or less the book ends of a season, this comic would be in the middle AJ's lack of business sense was the most grating flaw for me, but the dynamic they possessed as well as the fun yet not strangling humor and great world building is what lured me in.

And the only time that Rarity legitimately messed things up was in the yarn section xD...