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Scribblegroove

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  1. I'm excited to see an older character being submitted, and a griffon no less. We could use more OCs in both categories around here. I really, really like Featherwing, and I'd say he's about ready for approval, there are just a couple of tiny things I noticed. First off, Featherwing's family would be best referred to as nomads or travelers, as the word "gypsy" refers to a specific real-world ethnic group, and the unfortunate stereotyping which you refer to is strictly a product of human society as well. Second, there is an accidental use of the word "people" in the fourth paragraph of your backstory.

    Changes have been made. I'm glad you like him :3

  2. Whoops. Didn't notice the comment up until now. I'll get right on that! Thanks :)

     

    I must agree that indeed the acquisition of his cutie mark was a little clunky, just seemed like a powerful scene. I'll try to change that without ruining it.

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