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Chapter Five
Alone.
That's the first thing that registers in Twilight's mind as she slips into consciousness. The darkness is noticed shortly after, when she opens her eyes.
"Hello?" she calls out, her voice noticeably hoarse, but gets no reply.
She has no idea where she is, or how she got there. She doesn't even know what happened. In fact, the only things she remembers are her friends, her studies, and her name.
Still wondering where she is, she stands shakily and stretches. Then she gets a thought in her head.
Patting the top of her head, she finds her crown missing. Did I even have it in the first place? she thinks as she searches the cold stone floor around her. Realizing that fumbling around in the darkness is getting her nowhere, she tries to shed light on the situation.
Using her magic, Twilight casts a faint green glow, entrapping herself in a protecting sphere of light. Looking around, she sees that her sphere does not stretch as far as she had hoped. Her magic is weak.
Eager to find some answers, she takes a couple steps deeper into the darkness, dragging her light with her.
"Hello?" she tries again, clearing her throat. "Where am I? How did I get here? I need answers!!" Enraged, she screams into the darkness, squeezing her eyes shut in the process. Dropping to the floor, she begins to sob. Tears stream down her face as she opens her eyes again.
Her light is brighter. It must have happened when she screamed. But something else is different about her light. It has turned a bluish green, like the color of the sea.
Surprised, she ventures into the darkness.
But she's not alone.
So that's chapter five. Thank you for reading, and remember to tell me what y'all think.