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A smart and intelligent villain that is one step ahead of the heroes, often setting up Xanatos Gambit and manipulating the heroes to his advantage. He is a villain with motives, sure, but he isn't a Card Carrying Villain. That's my view of a villain should be.

Ah thanks. Now, I'll start writing up more premises, but thanks for the advice.

Yeah, but I don't think its that "original". Sure, there may be a couple of subversions but I don't really like the idea of eight protagonists trying to reassemble a MacGuffin. Which is why I tried to ask the forumers for more premises, so I can pick one up and added to the story (yes, the creator of the idea will be credited).

I do however thank you for making me clarify the details. No, it isn't sarcasm. It isn't really. Well, the reason why the gems is so "bad" (do realize that I thought up the premise on the spot, so details are still spotty) is the fact that they grant the re-assembler whatever they want, it can change worlds but cannot destroy worlds. So, the villain organization is a bunch of former Soviet KGBs that want to take over the world and force all nations to be communist. (Yeah, its a bit cheesy). Also, I do like to keep in mind that Princess Celestia does not know about the other shards in the other four universes. She's basically left into the dark. She only knows that twenty shards have appeared in the universe, and she wants to get the twenty shards in order to reassemble it. Also, what I think will happen is when 40 shards are collected by the eight, the collected shards will bring the group together into the real world, and there, they have to get to the portal at the organization's headquarters.

1. Yes, real world is Earth. And yes, I have skipped on a few details. 2. Ordered by Princess Celestia. Hmm, well, first of all, a organization who is looking for the gems is trying to get it, and they have built a portal. The heroes will try to sneak into their HQ and get to the rest of the universes to get the gem. And, its owner? That's one of the problems they have to solve as well. 3. Yes, the Conversion Bureau. And, I can imagine how it will turn out for the Mane Six to meet their TCB counterparts.

Here's a premise that I worked on: 1. 100 shards of a huge gem have been scattered over five universes (two of them will be my own creation, one is Equestria, one is the real world and one is TCB universe). The Mane Six has been ordered to find the twenty shards in their world. However, two teenagers, who question their chosen status have also took up the quest to find their twenty shards in their world as well. They are unaware of each other until the 40 shards are collected. However, a cult is also bent on searching these 100 shards. Can they return the gem to its rightful owner?

Thank you for the advice. Anyway, I also need some premises. Do you have a premise in mind? Just curious.

Yes, another Rainbow Dash fan! Welcome to the forum. I'm new, just like you and I enjoy the forums.

So, I have a really cool idea for a fanfic. What if MLP was retooled to become a show aimed for teenagers (no, it won't be a drama set in high-school, because that's generic)? I have already settled onto a genre and a basic "structure" for the fanfic. Of course, it will have elements of a scriptfic but it won't actually be a scriptfic. There's still going to be prose. I also have to note its inspired by Calvin and Hobbes: The Series (yeah, I know its old but that's where I got the idea from). So, here's the structure: -Will have humans (there will either be 1 to 3 human protagonists) -It is live action/animated, so what that basically means is if the human protagonist(s) is in Equestria, they would still be live-action with an outline surrounding their bodies. If the Mane Six is in the real world, they won't change and instead stick out like a sore thumb. -Dark and edgier (but there will be no sex). -Will still have the Mane Six as main characters -Each chapter will be called "episodes". Fics will be called "seasons". -Some fics will become meta, like maybe a fic that revolves around a fan of the "show" -My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic will exist as a show within a show. -No, there is no such excuse as "they will cut you up". I am trying to plan a scene where the ponies are revealed to the public in the real world. -Humans will go to Equestria, and ponies will go to the real world. -Will be either TV-PG or TV-14 (I will not go up to TV-MA). Also the genre is adventure and action. Now, here's the "tropes" that I have a dilemma with: -Should the human protagonists be teenagers or adults? -Should Mane Six have ages? -Should there be interspecies romance between a human and a pony? (but there will be no sex shown nor off-screen). (Mostly, "fans" of the "show" would write fanfics and draw fanart of it anyway, so it has been crossed out). Questions: -Should there be a feature film for the series? (no, its not going to be like My Little Pony: Equestria Girls but think of it as a film that supports canon). I will add more as I try to think up of more questions. Anyway, I'm not trying to go for purple prose, but I am going to attempt to describe scenes. I have made up a premise but I'm not sure if its good. I hope my idea is good though.

Make the victim eat bugs, like cockroaches, larvae and beetles, or even for the most foolhardy: fire ants and bees! And they must be alive too.

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I think the adult audience would be the primary demographic. However, if you are mature enough to understand what you're getting into to, then go ahead. However, really to be honest, I would just stay clear from the book because its bad. In fact, it used to be Twilight fanfiction. So, its just Twilight fanfiction with only the characters replaced with original ones.