Cosmic Flash

Applejack woke up with a yelp. "It was just a dream... just a dream." Applejack said to herself. Granny Smith appeared in the doorway, "Is everything ok in here?" She asked kindly. "Y-yes. I mean no." Applejack replied and looked down at her hooves. "What is it dear?" Granny Smith asked. "Is it those nightmares again Applejack?" Granny Smith then said caringly. "Ya, they just won't go away." Applejack muttered under her breath. "Well it's time to start your chores!" Granny Smith said quickly. After Applejack finished cleaning up, eating breakfast, and getting ready for the day she set out to do the day's chores. She was off apple bucking duty today so she set up the little apple stand. Rainbow Dash flew in like a bullet. "Wooooh! Be more careful Rainbow Dash!" Applejack yelled. "I'm so excited! I get to go visit my older cousin this week! I bet she's so awesome! We'll fly around together and do tricks together and..." Rainbow Dash was jabbering away like a bird. "Hold on a sec. have you met this pony?" Applejack moned. Rainbow Dash shook her head. "Have you even seen a picture of this pony before?" Rainbow Dash shook her head again. "But that doesn't matter! She's still awesome!" "Ok... now what do you want?" Applejack replied. "Oh ya ok I need some really cool snack!" Rainbow Dash said her head bobbing up and down. "Sorry zap apple season ended a month ago." Applejack replied crossly. "Oh hay bales!" Rainbow Dash shouted and flew off. Applejack was just about to close up when Rarity appeared. "The party for Apple Bloom is almost ready but Twilight still hasn't shown up so she can prepare for her magic act!" Rarity fretted. "Calm yourself sugar cube. We'll go get the others and check her house." After a few minutes they arrived at Twilight's house. "Dear Ponyville, I cannot make it to the party. An emergency has come up. Princess Celestia will take my place in the act. She will arrive two hours before the party. Sincerely Twilight Sparkle." "Pinkie pie stop saying random stuff like that this is an important situation!" Applejack said. "But that's what the note says." Pinkie Pie replied. "What note!" Rarity shouted as she tore the note off the door. "Now look what you did!" Rainbow Dash said. "Could you please stop girls... Please. STOP IT!!!! If you want to that is..." , Fluttershy said through the fray. "I know what we'll do!" Rainbow Dash shouted. "Rarity will do it!" "What! I can't possibly...!" Rarity shouted. "Please for Apple Bloom, for Scootaloo, for meeee." Sweetie Belle said looking up at Rarity with her big sparkling eyes. "Ok! Ok! Ok! I'll do it. But only because you're my little sister!" "Yay!" Everypony shouted. "Hurry in your places! Apple Bloom is coming!" Applejack shouted. Apple Bloom walked into Sweet Apple Acres and looked around in surprise "Surprise!" Her friends and family shouted. "Thanks guys! You didn't have to do this for me." Apple Bloom Said. "Of course we had to!" Pinkie Pie jibbered. "Why wouldn't we sugar cube." Applejack replied. Rainbow Dash cut in "And trust me this will be the coolest party ever!" "Where is Twilight!" Apple Bloom shouted in excitement as Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo rushed over. "She couldn't make it sugar cube." Applejack replied sadly. "All well. Let's go open the presents!" the Cutie Mark Crusaders screamed. Apple Bloom had opened all her presents but one. "Open it! Open it!" Scootaloo squealed in excitement. It was a piece of fancy paper with writing on it. "You will receive a magnificent magic act!!! OMG!" Apple Bloom bounced up and down with excitement. Just then smoke poured across the stage and Rarity stepped out onto the stage. Apple Bloom whispered "My life is ruined." Rarity focused her on her magic she had just been lucky enough to have read a magic book the night before since she couldn't find any of her romance novels. "You can do this." Rarity whispered to herself. "Slave. SLAVE!" A horrifying pony-like creature screamed at a yellow mare with a red and purple mane. "I'm coming..." The pony said. "What did you just say ?!" The creature bellowed. "I'm coming master." The mare said quickly with fear in her voice. "I need you to dig up the that time vortex." The creature said will shear evil in it's voice. "I still say it's a coffin." The mare whispered under her breath and started digging up the grave. After the coffin was dug up the creature got inside. "Come." It said. "Yes master..." The mare replied holding back tears knowing what usually happened. She got in the coffin. Whoosh! She could tell they were there. The mare and the creature got out of the coffin. They walked for a while, the creature keeping a close eye on the mare. The creature took it's eyes of the mare and looked at another mare with a look of pure evil on it's face. Then the yellow mare took off running back towards where they came and shut herself in the coffin. She heard a bang on the coffin but a whoosh followed not a second too soon. She leaped out of the coffin and her eyes widened in terror as she jumped right into a portal. Rarity hoped with all her heart she did the right spell and didn't mess up as her horn glowed blue with magic energy. A swirling green portal appeared out of nowhere and when it disappeared it left a yellow mare with a red and purple standing in its place. Everypony started cheering but Applejack who just looked at the mare with an astonished look on her face. "Apple Spice..." Applejack said. "Applejack..." The mare replied and they ran towards each other and caught one another in a big hug. "Darling who is this pony...?" Rarity asked. "I'll explain it all later." Applejack said. "We still need to finish Apple Bloom's birthday party." And with that Rainbow Dash flew up into the air at top speed and started plummeting downward with an explosion of color as she wrote "Happy Birthday Apple Bloom" with rainbows. "Cool a sonic rainboom!" Scootaloo screamed. The party had come to an end. "Now dear you said you would explain everything to us." Rarity said. "Well this pony is my missing sister Apple Spice. She disappeared when she was a filly." Applejack explained. "Could you tell us what happened Apple Spice?" Applejack asked. "This is not a story for filly ears." Apple Spice said quietly. "Before we leave... we were wondering if you would join the Cutie Mark Crusaders since you don't have cutie mark..." Apple Bloom said. Apple Spice tried hard not to panic while Applejack replied "Give her a while to think about it she just arrived here." After the Cutie Mark Crusaders left Apple Spice started telling her story. I went to play outside and I wandered into the Everfree forest. I was chasing a butterfly when I saw a pair of glowing eyes. I ran home as fast as I could feeling like whatever the creature was it was following me. I was so scared I asked if I could go to bed early Applejack, Granny Smith, and Big Macintosh thought I was tired because I had been playing outside all day. They were all tired from working anyways so we all went to bed early. I woke up all the sudden in the middle of the night and saw the creature I saw earlier It’s sleek black body blending in with the dark. I could see it’s big see through grey wings spread at least six feet as it swooped down and grabbed me a swirling green vortex opened in front of me. It started flying toward the portal I grabbed onto the edge of my bed and screamed for Applejack but the creature pulled me through the vortex and it closed. When I came out on the other side of the portal I found myself in a long line of fillies. I looked around in terror as I saw thousands of the creatures and I saw the lifeless barren purple wastelands around me. We were forced to put our hoof prints on paper then I was told that the creatures were called time sprites and that I was going forever be my captor’s slave. Almost nopony ever escaped many tried but only Rainbow Flash managed to escape but I don’t know where she is now. Then one day I decided to make a run for it when my captor looked away. It was too late till I noticed I had just leaped into a time vortex, but I am glad I did because now I’m with my family. “That must have been terrible…” Fluttershy said. All the ponies looked at Apple Spice with a look of empathy. “No offence dear your voice sounds like a filly’s voice.” Rarity mentioned. “You’re right I just noticed that!!! Rarity’s right!” Applejack said in a hurried voice. Then Apple Spice was enveloped in blinding white light. After all the light was gone the ponies gasped. “What is it?” Apple Spice asked. “YOU’RE A FILLY!!!” Rainbow Dash shouted in aghast. “I bet going through the time vortex meant you never really aged! In fact you might have gone back a day!” Applejack shouted in disbelief. “Why don’t you just go talk to the Cutie Mark Crusaders while we talk darling.” Rarity said quickly. “Oh. Ok.” Apple Spice said without arguing and walked off. “Ok girls we need to talk.” Rarity said. “Yes your right!” Rainbow Dash said. “I think we should go investigate the inside of the library to look for clues! Because we need to look for Twilight after all.” Applejack said. “I have a plan! We can look through the library for clues. Then we can have Granny Smith and Big Macintosh take care of the fillies while we look for Twilight!” Rainbow Dash sounded in excitement. “That’s a great idea!” Rarity said. “We could fix up the house for them!” Applejack said full of energy. “We could set up balloons and streamers and presents and cake and punch and…” Pinkie Pie exclaimed happily. “As a gift from everyone to the fillies maybe we could give them pets... if you want to.” Fluttershy said quietly. “Why thats a great idea darling!” Rarity said happily. “Lets get to work and after we finished we can pick the pets for the fillies!” Applejack replied. After the ponies finished fixing up the house they went over to Fluttershy’s cottage. "Do you have any idea's for the girls? Fluttershy asked politely. "I think Scootaloo should get a cool bat! Because they're fast, they can fly, they are awesome, and well if someone liked cutish things bats are a mix between cool and cute I guess..." Rainbow Dash suggested straight away. "I think we can arrange that. What about Sweetie Belle Rarity? Any ideas?" Fluttershy asked quietly. "Well darling I want to get her a kitten but she really has been wanting a bunny for ages so I guess I'll take a bunny for Sweetie Belle." Rarity sighed. Before Fluttershy could say anything Applejack said "I'll get Apple Bloom a squirrel she adores them but I don't know what to get Apple Spice she's real responsible and always wanted a pet though she never said what kind of pet!" "I have just the thing. Follow me girls." Fluttershy said calmly and started walking toward a little stable. The ponies stopped walking. "Be quiet or you'll scare her." Fluttershy whispered as they walked inside. "I think she'll be perfect. I don't know what she is or where she came from but I found her by herself all alone. I call her a flutter bat." Fluttershy said proudly. "I don't know it's as big as Apple Spice right now. I don't think..." Applejack started saying when the flutter bat's head lifted slowly and it yawned. "Ok ok! We'll take her I bet she'll be perfect!" Applejack said hurriedly looking at the creature with deep love and care. Let's go put the pets at home and get the fillies." She said. “Knock! Knock! Knock!” "This is the Cutie Mark Crusaders how can we help you?" Scootaloo said through the door. "We need to show you and tell you something it's important." Applejack shouted. The four Cutie Mark Crusaders walked out of the clubhouse single file and faced Applejack and her friends (you could tell Apple Spice had become one as she was wearing the special cape). "Well the news is we are going to be gone for awhile to look for Twilight AND you all get to live with Granny Smith and Big Macintosh!" Applejack said. "Yay!!!!" The Cutie Mark Crusaders shouted with glee. Then the fillies were led to the house in blindfolds. When they reached Apple Bloom's room they took the blindfolds off the fillies. "We decided to fix up Apple Bloom's room so it was suitable for all you! Here where we're standing is Apple Bloom's and Scootaloo's room and up those stairs is Sweetie Belle's and Apple Spices room!" Applejack shouted. "And there's lots and lots of super fun surprises!" Pinkie Pie said in a rush. "And I can assure you it is 100% awesome!" Rainbow Dash said. "Of course it has to be if you worked on it Rainbow Dash!" Scootaloo exclaimed. “I’m going to miss you…” Apple Spice walked over to Applejack and hugged her. “I’ll miss you all very much…” Apple Spice gestured to all the ponies “I might of just met most of you but I can already tell you’re all the type of friends I want to have.” “We will miss you all to darlings…” Rarity said with tears in her eyes. Scootaloo ran up to Rainbow Dash. “I’ll practice all the time! Maybe I can even learn to do a sonic purple boom by the time you come back!” Scootaloo cried. “I’m sure you will squirt. I’m sure you will.” Rainbow Dash said crying softly. Everypony cried as hugs were shared and goodbyes were said when Apple Spice spoke up. “I know I only just met most of you but I am going to miss you all so much. You have all been so nice and kind to me since I finally got back home. I could never thank you all enough!” She sobbed. Many more hugs and goodbyes were exchanged before the friends left the fillies. Applejack and the others arrived at Twilight’s house. Rarity tried opening the door. “It’s locked.” She wailed. “Now just wait a minute sugar cube we can still get in.” Applejack replied calmly and kicked down the door with her back legs. “Well you didn’t have to open it like that!” Rarity said coughing as dust flew around the ponies.”Oh my it’s so dark…” Fluttershy whispered. “No problem!” all the others said. Rarity’s horn lit up and everypony else got out flashlights. Rarity gasped. “SPIKE!!!!!!!!!!!” “Rarity! Guys is that you?!” Spike shouted hoarsely. The ponies all ran toward Spike. “Why are you trapped in a cage!” Rarity exclaimed. “I explain later but first Twilight is in big trouble! You need to help her! You can take all this stuff Twilight and I packed before she was kidnapped! But there’s no food left because I ate it all.” Spike said. “Thanks Spike! We might need it!” Applejack replied. “Spike we won't be able to get you out of this cage I think it’s magic proof!” Rarity told Spike sadly. “It’s ok guys… I just hope I don’t starve before you guys get back.” Spike said weakly. “Don’t worry about that sugar cube you can take all this food and we can just go back and get some more!” Applejack told spike. “Thanks guys!” Spike said happily. “Who put you in a cage and kidnapped Twilight Spike?” Rarity asked. “It was………” Spike seemed to trail off. “Was who dear?” Rarity asked concerned. Spike tried to speak but no words would come out. “Has he lost his voice?!” Pinkie Pie said happily. Fluttershy examined Spike. “There’s no reason he shouldn’t be able to talk.” Fluttershy said confused. “I bet whoever did this is trying to make it so we don’t discover who they are!” Rainbow Dash shouted frustrated. “Well we better get going. Sorry we can’t take you with Spike.” Applejack said as the ponies walked away. Sweetie Belle woke up her tummy rumbling. “Is anypony hungry cause I’m going to get myself a snack.” She whispered. The rest of the fillies all agreed. Sweetie Belle Slipped downstairs and into the kitchen. She saw a map on the table and picked it up. “This must be a map to where my sister is going…” She whispered to herself. “I better keep it just in case.” Sweetie Belle slipped the map into her saddlebag and brought up some apple jam and apple butter sandwiches. Then the fillies slipped back to bed. “Here we are girls. Canterlot.” Applejack said. “Lets go to the castle to see if we can speak to the princesses.” Rainbow Dash said quickly. Before anypony else could reply a mysterious voice echoed from above them. “You're not going anywhere ponies. Mwa ha ha ha!” A few years later… “Thats it!” Applebloom said suddenly. All the fillies were laying around in the barn doing nothing. “What do you mean Applebloom?” Sweetie Belle asked. “I’m not going to stand around and wait for everypony to come back!” Applebloom shouted. “But how?” Scootaloo asked miserably. “I found a map a long time ago that must lead to where they were going…” Sweetie Belle piped up gloomily. “Then lets go find them!!!!!!!!!” Applebloom shouted jumping up and gathering up different items. “I’m not sure thats such a good idea.” Apple Spice replied quietly. “We don’t really have a choice do we.” Scootaloo spoke up. Reluctantly all the fillies gathered up items and food to put in their bags. “Lets head to Twilight’s first to look for any clues!” Applebloom exclaimed taking the lead. The fillies arrived at Twilight’s. “The door is kicked down! Applejack must have kicked it down!” Applebloom shouted excitedly. “Who’s there?!” A frightened voice shouted from inside. The fillies stepped inside cautiously. “Spike is that you?!” Sweetie Belle exclaimed. “Sweetie Belle? Is that you?” Spike said cautiously. “Ya it’s me and all the other Cutie Mark Crusaders!” Sweetie Belle shouted happily. “I haven’t seen anypony for ages!” Spike exclaimed happily. “Sorry Spike but we can’t stay long we’re going to look for the others.” Applebloom explained. “Oh thats ok.” Spike replied his voice filled with loneliness. “I’m really sorry Spike.” Apple Spice said quietly. “Who are you? I’ve never seen you before.” Spike asked curiously. “Its a long story but for now lets just say I’m Applejack’s long lost sister.” Apple Spice replied. “Did Applejack and the others pass through here?” Applebloom asked. “Ya a long time ago probably a few years ago. They were going to look for Twilight.” Spike said sadly. “That means we’re on their trail!” Applebloom jumped up and down excitedly babbling away. “Well we better get going before Applebloom loses it.” Scootaloo looked back at Applebloom. “I get what you mean.” Spike joked. The fillies started their long journey to find their friends and family. Hours later… “We’re finally at Canterlot girls!!!” Applebloom exclaimed excitedly bouncing up and down. “Lets go check out the castle for clues because I’m sure the princesses aren’t there.” Scootaloo shouted. The fillies reached the castle within minutes. “We should split up in two teams so we can find clues easier!” Applebloom ordered. “Scootaloo will go with Apple Spice and I will go with Sweetie Belle.” She said calmly. The fillies split into their teams and set off in separate directions to find out as much as they could. Apple Spice looked around nervously “I’m not sure this is a good idea…” she whispered. “Me either but what else are we supposed to do?’ Scootaloo replied as they walked through the pitch black hallway looking back at Apple Spice. Scootaloo tripped and knocked her head against a door. The door opened a crack with a loud creak that seemed to echo through the halls. Scootaloo got up and looked at the door. “Apple Spice… come over here I think I found something.” she whispered. “What is it?” Apple Spice asked nervously. The fillies looked around the room. There was a tv and a Xbox 360 sitting there in the room. Along with a bean bag chair. The room appeared to have been shot multiple times with powerful magic blasts with one giant one that went through the whole room and started in the middle of the room. “We got to go tell the others!” Scootaloo yelped. Meanwhile Sweetie Belle lit the way through the darkened hallways as Applebloom checked every single room they passed. Sweetie Belle noticed one of the doors was open. “Applebloom come check this out…” She said. The fillies entered the room. It appeared to be Princess Celestia’s bed room. It looked almost completely normal except the bed sheets were thrown off the bed and there was ink and hoof marks every where. “I think we might want to find the others…” Applebloom stuttered. Apple Spice and Scootaloo were running down the hallway when the suddenly smashed into something. “OUCH!!!!!!” An unknown voice cried. “Applebloom is that you?” Scootaloo cried. A small green light lit up the hallway suddenly. “It is you!” Scootaloo sighed in relief. “Lets get out of here we can tell each other the details on the way!” Apple Spice said. All the fillies agreed. After walking about three hours Apple Spice piped up. “Do you guys remember when we got our cutie marks?” “Of course how could we ever forget!” The fillies cried happily. “I still can remember every second of it.” Sweetie Belle replied happily. “It was the day of the Great Ponyville Talent show… I had been practicing for months! And I had my act down perfectly. When I was on stage I was nervous at first. I was going to have a professional bird choir sing a random song and I was going to sing with them note for note. I remember feeling like I was burning seeing all those eyes staring at me. But when the birds started singing I lost all my doubt and matched them perfectly. And when I was done I noticed I had my cutie mark… Which was a green music note. “I remember that we all were all so awed! Scootaloo even tossed you roses.” Apple Spice exclaimed. “Hey!!!!!” Scootaloo shouted embarrassedly. Apple Spice stuck her tongue playfully out at Scootaloo. “I remember what I did for mine!” Applebloom said happily. “It was the same talent show that Sweetie Belle got her cutie mark at. I was going to paint a picture of the Crystal Empire after seeing a picture for a few seconds. I used up all my paints on it! A stallion in the crowd when I finished tried to buy it off me for lots of money but I refused it was too special. But when I finished that painting I noticed that I had my cutie mark! It was a green apple being painted red with a couple of blossoms next to it.” “That painting was sure a keeper!” Sweetie Belle Exclaimed. “Indeed!” Applebloom agreed. “I remember the day I got mine!” Scootaloo sighed. “Before the big talent show I tried to accomplish a sonic purple boom… and I did but at a price. I had managed to fly up high enough to shoot downward at the needed speed but my wings couldn’t keep up and fly well enough. I rocketed down towards Sweet Apple Acres. I knew that I was a gonner but I got lucky somepony saw me and got some other ponies together and they held a blanket between them so I didn’t hit the ground. I was later diagnosed with a wing disorder. The talent show was only days away and I sulked and sulked. Then I noticed my scooter in the corner and a new ray of hope arose in me. At the talent show I did a sonic purple boom on a scooter! The I noticed I had my cutie mark. It was a scooter with a purple trail behind it.” “IT WAS AWESOME!!!!!!” Applebloom shouted. “Rainbow Dash would have exploded with pride!” Sweetie Belle added. “I haven’t told mine yet!” Apple Spice shouted happily. “It was a hard day at Sweet Apple Acres. Granny Smith had just died and Big Macintosh had injured himself working. I took on the task of apple bucking. I went to the middle of the apple grove and bucked the hardest I could all the apples fell perfectly into the baskets for miles around. A couple of blossoms fell onto my head and as I brushed them off I noticed I had my cutie mark! It was an apple with a couple of blossoms next to it.” “Its cool that we each got our cutie marks around the same time!” Scootaloo exclaimed. “I know right!” Apple Spice replied. The four ponies chatted on and on and on as the continued their journey. After about three more days of walking Apple Spice looked up at the crystal castle when a huge shudder passed through the ground. Hundreds of ponies poured out of the castle being led by a young pink mare with a rainbow colored mane. “RAINBOW FLASH!!!!!!!” Apple Spice shouted. “RUN!!!!!! THEIR COMING!!!!!!” The mare shouted. The ponies all ran as fast as the could alicorns, pegasi, unicorns, and earth ponies alike. A dark shadow passed over all of the ponies. “They’re here…” The mare breathed. Millions of time sprites surrounded all of the helpless ponies. Zulily burst out of Apple Spice’s pack and gave off a giant high pitched shriek. The time sprites all exploded in a wisp of purple smoke screaming with agony. All the ponies looked around on shock then broke out in cheering. A mare with dark blue eyes a purple coat and a stunning silver mane woke with a start from her trance. She looked down at her piece of parchment in horror. I must get to Canterlot and tell the princesses at once! She thought wildly grabbing things from the shelves around her home. She quickly ran out the door into the ocean determined to get there before it was too late. The mare saw a dark shadow coming towards her. She started running faster. “You can’t escape us Cosmic flash…!” A voice from the shadow shouted. Cosmic Flash’s horn glowed brightly with a flash of light and she disappeared leaving the dark shadow behind.

It is at home I will post it as soon as I can I promise.

This is the best one I have on me right now I'll post a better one later. Lol.trim.7FE06DAA-26FF-4EE5-983D-201846A9FBA2.MOV

I'll try I can do some animation. I am not a pro though but I will try my best. I would love to help.

wow you went all out on your oc nice

I confused she lost all of her happiness but is still happy? She is a cute character.

rarity

Apple Spice fretfully paced back and forth. "We were supposed to bring an offering?! What am I going to do?! WHAT AM I GOING TO DO?! I DON'T HAVE ANYTHING TO GIVE YATA! I am such a dumb pony of course you should have to give Yata an offering she is helping you after all!" Apple Spice yelled in her head. "I'll just have to figure out something." She muttered under her breath as she walked off into the main part of the town. Then Zulilly's head popped out of a bush and put a package by Apple Spice's feet. Apple Spice opened it and she saw her special supplies. "That's it!" She yelled in delight. "Oh! Sorry..." She said when she noticed ponies were staring at her. She walked to a hidden place and spread out the supplies. "Let's get to work." She whispered. Zulilly sat down next to her intently watching with curiosity. After a while she was done. Apple Spice went back to the line where Itiri was still at the statue. "You can have your spot back." Said the pony that was behind her before. "Thanks!" Apple Spice replied. She started thinking about all that had happened on her way here when suddenly Zulilly flew out of nowhere and stood next to her with a "I'm not going to leave your side" look and let out a soft purr.

Apple Spice laid there motionlessly as the vines grew tighter. "SCREEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!" a high pitched wave of sound exploded. A flutterbat flew out of nowhere. The vines shrunk back rapidly. "Zulilly!" Apple Spice whispered in delight. "You glad to see me?" "Screee." Zulilly purred and gently guided Apple Spice too safety. "I'll take that as a yes!" Apple Spice replied happily. Zulilly made a chirp sound and flew away then came back with some apples and a loaf of bread. "Did you steal from ponies again?" Apple Spice said grinning. Zulilly bowed her head slightly. "It's ok Zulilly I'm not mad at you." Apple Spice said playfully between bites. Zulilly made a buzzing noise and did a few tricks in the air. "I feel better now. So I should get going... will you accompany me on my journey?" Apple Spice said more seriously. Zulilly immediately flew over and gave Apple Spice a big hug and purred. They walked for a few more hours. "Yata should be right ahead of us!" Apple Spice exclaimed. Zulilly flew in circles then stopped abruptly and flew into a tree. Apple Spiced looked up. It was a DRAGON! She had heard stories about them from Granny Smith. She followed the dragon excitedly then stopped as she saw a pony in a black cloak with weird writing on it and she seemed to be holding a staff. "Hello. Who are you?" Apple Spice asked.

Steel Accord I was wondering if this creature I thought of might be good for the Applejack's lost sister story. It would be time sprites. Time sprites kidnap fillies and take them through their time vortex. Then they force the fillies to work as slaves. They also have a creepy network to different times and lives, which is a surprise. They also have a king or queen I don't know what yet. If you think their good what should they look like, should they have a king or a queen, and whichever you choose what should the king/queen look like? If you don't like the idea what do you think the creature should be?

I think that you should have a warrior girl filly in the heroes because a filly girl could be a bad ass too kind of like the warrior princess' but without being royalty or rich or anything. As for the H.L.F's I don't understand that, but for locations you should do Rarity's boutique and Tokyo, Japan that would be fun.

Thanks Steel Accord! I'll have to keep that in mind. I think they will be two separate stories. That would make it easier to follow and you seem to think that they would make very good stories by themselves. Again thank you.