Jeric

You do realize that I snicker when ever I see, hear, type the word button.

He only got extreme when the writers truly had a reason to be bashed.

Then you have to admit he is at the very least a poor writer with his YT scripts to have to leverage such 'eloquent' colloquialisms as he did. To me, it doesn't matter if he gets back up or not, but considering how poorly he conducted himself, I he earned this battle. 

Remember YouTube folks ... when your face gets out there ... you become a brand. 

Act accordingly

Happy Birthday! 

ooBrony! You have aligned with the false King?

Koukatsu! I swear on all that is fabulous and divine that you shall rue the day you have created this Schism!

FOR FABULOSITY AND CHIGENS!!!

You are aligned with Seaponies? 

Why throw away life so recklessly?

@Wingnut, you realize this obligates you to join now.

A single warrior! Against an army as fierce and determined as the Mongols? My you are a brave one Kou!

Brave ... but foolish.

One shall stand. One shall fall!

OWO JOIN OUR SIDE~! WE HAVE COFFEE~!

<3

I see you speak with Arty. 

Done. 

...for real, though, I have NO idea what you said after "1v1 me"... <_<

Oh Koukatsu ... you are making my decision to remain neutral in the upcoming war that much more difficult

Ideeaaaaaaaaaaaa!

Seriously that is a thing of beauty. I'm stealing this concept. x)

Y u make me bald? x)

One moment in time, one kindness, one small success, can make a difference ... even amidst overwhelming frustration and hopelessness.

I liked this immensely

Happy Forumversary! A lot can happen in two years. Two years ago was (as you mentioned) Hurricane Sandy, and my grandmother lived in Manahawkin ... so I had taken time off from work to help with the aftermath.

I actually pull up the threads from two and three years ago and it's like finding treasure when I run into some of you old timers

Now imma hunt down your first post.

That rock slide scene pretty much nailed it. You saw determination, strength, concern and frustration in Maud in the span of ten seconds. That is good writing right there.

Ha! I missed an obvious Lipstick Pone joke. :/

Thank you for mentioning Lauren's comments regarding Spike's crush. It was obvious that Lauren wanted to at first set Rarity up attractive, but as the Mane Six all have the same body style this was the best way to go about it. It is also a great way to set up the dichotomy we have with Rarity - a method to destroy the concept that 'the pretty girl' can't have a great heart and be strong willed. 

And you win the 'my mind is blown' prize for today. I honestly overlooked the idea of 'appealing to authority' in Green Isn't Your Color. 

Also, Rarihick ...

O.o

Son, if you can come with me for a moment ...

I would seriously love that, but only if you have the time.

I have time, I actually have the grammar spelling edits done, but it's on my network drive at work and I've been down with the flu or some such for a few days. Imma send to you first thing tomorrow

Not bad at all. I continued to be amazed that English is not your native language. I have a soft spot for the old fashioned pulp adventure series and serials, and this feels like it may head in that direction. I am absolutely looking forward to this continuing. Positive notes are characterization of Governour Rarity, verb tense, and point of view/perspective selection. There is one or two times to switch POV to a 3rd person tight POV to a 3rd person omniscient within the span of a paragraph reverting again to 3rd person tight  - which can be a very difficult switch to pull off. The use of dialog tags, while not necessary, still have that familiarity that the reader has been conditioned to expect. I would suggest starting to employ them, and fight back the urge to use adverbs with dialog tags. Let me know if you want a quick copy edit (I promise I will not change one iota of the story).

The important thing is interest, characterization of Jewell Butt, pacing, and story are all decent. That means some tweaks to the craft will make your style and voice sing. I've always said that you have great potential especially as a romance writer (I prefer that term over shipfic). I still hold out hope in the future that we will collaborate on a serial of some sort. 

Keep freaking writing man. Oh, and the tease at the end.  

I just put this on my calendar as my next read Obsi.

Heh, I will always remember your journey through fabulosity my friend. XD

I want to hear your take on Magus and his motivation

Whoa I just saw where Winter Wrap fell ... was that just a victim of the numbers?

And did you do the song sorter yet?

Just finished and my Top Ten nailed it. The rest are weird due to my penchant of looking at some related episodes and unofficial arcs. I couldn't do that as easily with this.

FYI EQG actually wound up in the middle. Which is accurate now. O.o.

I haven't been very vocal about my hated eps ... 'cept one. Now some are gonna see what I really think.

I'm going this now in fact. I always calculated that the results will not be fully accurate ... but I expect the Top Ten at least to be close.