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Flamestreak1990

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  1. Crossovers are dangerous, especially with 'VS' in the title

     

    Put that there and you expect conflict between the two parties, so if you put that in your title, you need to have the two parties fight, and effectively as well

     

    Make sure you get the two groups to have equal screentime and proper interaction with one another

     

    Combining TTGO (which I like to think of as a parody of the original show, since it's undoubtedly superior) and the PPG reboot (which is more or less pandering to Tumblr-class feminists) is not a good idea imho

    This

     

    This is what they forgot while making this episode

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  2. Paragraphs and capitalization are your friends!

     

    As for Twilight's meanness, that's a good point, but then again, that's where her character development starts. If she were all gung ho about friendship from the beginning, then she wouldn't have a chance to grow.

     

    I think you could have a really good series of episode reviews if you take a bit more time and care on your formatting. Good luck! :D

    yeah this was rushed as i was in the library and had an hour to write this 

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