Just wanted to point out, that Fluttershy can't really control animals.... She just can understand them, and their thought processes to better convince them to see that she's likely correct, and show them why they would want to do what they say.... kinda like a politician !
Well, once I've had a bit more Practice, I might see about Drawing this OC... If I do, I'll send a copy of the end result to you for YOUR Criticism ...
Anyways, as far as the judging of the OC's personality and such.... I think that the OC turned out pretty well. even if a bunch of ladybugs may not normally be able to do something like that, It's good to remember that these were the MAGICALLY ENHANCED ladybugs, magic from a very panicked unicorn filly at that. Totally believable for me, after all just look at what happened to Twilight Sparkle, she panicked, and not only levitated the proctors, but also turned her parents into plants, AND turned baby spike into a REALLY BIG dragon. so yeah, I can believe the magic enhanced ladybugs could kill a giant spider, Especially since it was also caught COMPLETELY off guard. I mean, if your food jumped out of your fridge, or cupboard and started to attack you, would you really be quick to respond? with anything other than panic that is...?
Totally understand being a bit of a jerk.. Not only does her cutie mark appear after a life and death situation, but she is also denied the ability to do much of anything regarding her cutie mark, despite having found her Destiny! I mean come on, If you got a cutie mark, but never managed to use anything related to it, how would you feel? that's like Twilight having her horn chopped off after getting Her cutie mark, or Rainbow Dash having her wings splinter beyond repair before or after her first Rainboom, or Fluttershy being recalled to Cloudsdale and being forbidden from going to the ground for some reason..... though Fluttershy might not get jerky... After all ponies are herbivores !
But I like it!
and if you want to go see my OC and leave a comment on that, well that would be just SuperDuperific!
Storm Shine! (http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/storm-shine-r7197)
Stay Safe, Have Fun, and eat CAKE! AND MUFFINS! YAY FOR SWEETS!