AmberDust

Still no name, eh? ^^' I wish I could help. Great character otherwise.

He is a leaned-back mare.

Just so you know, "Mare" means a female pony. ^^

Aaaw, thanks! :3

His profile is actually hilarious. XD I love the way you wrote it.

Aslo shee is perfect and everboby loves her even discord who iz hur boifrend.



jk jk I just....

Alicorn OCs. I felt it was necessary lol

The more I RP with her, the more her Adventuring spirit overshadows her wish to become and artist...I'm thinking of changing her profile up a bit, and making art more of a hobby or secondary interest. :/

Speaks horrible French?

You ought to include her list of abilities here.

Really? We're gonna get an Octavia episode?

Her profile is short and sweet. It seems pretty believable to me, but a lot of it is...well, entirely fanmade. Like, her relationship with Vinyl. They've never actually interacted in the show, so if you plan on submitting this to EQE, I'd suggest removing that part.

Her personality could be expanded upon a little bit. What else does she like, besides music? How does she act around friends? Around strangers? What inspires her, and what bothers her? Things like this are good to consider in order to really get into character.

Dang you Notifications! Anyway. Yep~

 

I need to edit this a bit.

alright, PM me when you want a review.

You seem pretty good at drawing. Not sure what you need me for!

Cool. I like this character. She has some interesting complexes. Hopefully we can RP together sometime!

I'm 16. So Please, Be harsh!. I will correct all of my spelling mistakes as soon as possblie.

Jeez, I never even noticed that you replied to my comment. @_@'

Do you still want a review?

(Love the reference sheet, btw)

@Khajiit, Do you think this mare stands a chance in the EQE?

I liked the way you described her personality. It's short, but is describes peppermint candies perfectly. Very cute.

The backstory seems a little strange.

Hey, its me...You wanted me to review your character?

I read it over, and I like it, but I insist you spellcheck and edit it before I give you a full review...if that's okay with you. it just makes it easier to read and understand if everything's organized and spelled correctly.

And, if I may ask...how old are you? I just don't want to be too harsh if you're younger than 14 or something.

Although admittedly I haven't read her backstory yet. It still seems a little too gimicky.

If you're going to give her a power like that, maybe you should just make her a unicorn...

I think her name should be one word (Rosemary, not Rose Mary).

Good character, but her colours look too much like Fluttershy's. :/

I really like her character though.

At first I really liked the design, but then I realized the colour scheme is nearly identical to the pony "Octavia", who's also a musician.

I'll try and come up with a new colour scheme for her. Something less natural, more magical. Can you send me the drawing of her original design again?

This character seems to much like a high level D&D wizard to be able to fit into the canon of the show. She's definitely overpowered. You really should focus more on personality instead of all these ridiculous powers. She's like all the Marvel superheroes in one.