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Chantilly Angel

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  1. The reason for the whole name fiasco, if because it was about ¾ done with this one when I noticed your GF’s OC changed her name, and I was like, “Noooooooooooo!” and I didn’t want to rewrite the whole thing over again, so I made her say that she changed her name.
  2. I...I just can't do it! *sobs*
  3. Hey, Twilight, Do you love to write? I figure maybe we can write a fanfic sometime. It'll be fun *giggle*
  4. New avatar...don't I look fine?

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    2. Victoria and Co.

      Victoria and Co.

      Pegasus are ruffians, they have no beauty.

      Now, if you were to drop the wings and add a Unicorn horn...

    3. TwiForLife

      TwiForLife

      I like my ponies with horns.

    4. Storm Spark

      Storm Spark

      No problem!

      It's easy to say when it's true!

  5. Finally done the third installment. It took me long enough, eh?

  6. Ok, it took me long enough, but I finally finished! Here are the newest characters in this installments: http://mlpforums.com...ssion-page-r623 http://mlpforums.com..._/splinter-r259 http://mlpforums.com...ight-cloud-r480 As well as all of the main characters from before,so let's get started! The Life an Times of Chantilly Angel in "Those Meddeling Ponies" Dear Diary, You know all those TV shows about how meddling in people’s love life always end in disaster? Well I thought that was just for entertainment, but as I recently discovered that those are very important lessons that needed to be learned by everyone, especially me and our friends. Take what just happened to me just last week… Chantilly Angel was taking notes in her algebra class in the pony college she and her 6 other friends attended. She never really liked math, all she saw she squiggly lines and numbers that makes no since. But between her and her friends she was the one who could understand it the most…well enough to manage a low B in the class. She soon got bored and started drawing pictures and writing little poems in her poetry notebook that was filled with poems of love, life and other events in her always exciting life. What got her attention was one of her friends, Draw Toonz, who was opening a letter from an envelope. He read it for what it seemed like a thousand times, let out a dreamy sigh and placed the note in his textbook. Chantilly looked over at him with a smile, Draw always wasn’t this happy… “So what got you all happy?” Chantilly whispered, after all they still were in class Draw returned her smile with a smirk of his own, “You’ll find out soon enough, my dear Chantilly.” “And since when do you talk that?” Chantilly asked cocking her head to the side “Talk like what, my sweet friend?” Draw asked, he seem oblivious to the now enchanting tone for he was now speaking in. “That! Talk like that!!”Chantilly whispered hoarsely “Whatever do you mean?” “Uh never mind,” Chantilly sighed in defeat, “So are you still coming over for our study party at my house later?” “Oh I’ll be there as quickly as my legs can carry me!” Draw said in an unnecessary heroic tone “Please stop talking like that!” Chantilly said now giving him the evil eye. Soon then the bell rand and the class was letting out “Talk like what?” Draw asked again, resulting in Chantilly facehoofing, but just then Draw checked his watch and his eyes got big “Oh snap! I have to go!” At that Draw flew out of the room making a huge mess around his and Chantilly’s desks “I’ll see you later Chantilly” He said with his voice fading as he flew farther for her. “Bye” She shouted, but then he noticed he left off in such a hurry that he left all his belongings, but before she could call him back he was already gone. “Well I guess I better bring it back to him” Chantilly said to herself as she tries to put his books in her bookbag along with her books, but ash she picked up his algebra book she discovered the note that fell out. “Whoops!” She picked up the note and gave it a once over “Hello, what do we have here?” She said looking down at the note. She knew she shouldn’t read it, but she thought that it could give her an idea why Draw was acting so weird. At that she opened the letter and began reading it: Dear Draw, Last night was simply the best night of my life. I have never felt so alive, and I can’t wait to see you again Chantilly’s face lighted up it became so clear why he was acting so darn strange… “Aw, sounds like Draw’s got himself a marefriend…that ladies man!” She giggled, however the giggling stopped on a dime when she discovered who it was from “I love you…Love…Crystal!?!?” It seemed that he eyes would pop out of her head after reading that. Chantilly read it over and over again to make sure she read that right, but she still couldn’t believe what she just read. “Wait a minute…It can’t be…” It just couldn’t be that Draw could be in love with…Crystal! Her thoughts were interrupted as Speedy Transition peered into their class room, “Hey, Chantilly, is class over yet?” Chantilly quickly put the note away, “Um…yeah. I was just about to leave.” After she finish packing she walked out with Speedy still in dazed of what she just discovered. She tried to picture it in her mind…Draw and Crystal…a couple!?!? It just seemed too uncanny. She had to get to the bottom of this, and she figured that Speedy would be an acceptable start. “So Speedy,” Chantilly began casually, “Have you seen Draw lately?” “Yeah I have, but he’s been acting super weird lately…is he okay?” Speedy responded. “Weird, as in he’s super happy all the time and he’s talking like he’s in the 1600’s?” Chantilly continued Speedy turned to her sharply, she knew she got him. “Yeah, how did you know?” He asked “He was acting that way around me today in class, but I think I know why…” “Know why what?” Ivy said suddenly appearing with the always-peculiar Pencil J. Doodle by her side. “Why Draw’s been acting weird lately.” Chantilly said a bit annoyed. She hated repeating herself “Oh yeah, he’s been ridiculously perky lately, I almost was ready to slap him silly” Ivy said cutting her eyes “That’s your answer for everything isn’t it, Ivy?” Speedy said rolling his eyes yet with a smirk, she new Ivy would get pissed at his remark And she did, “Don’t start with me, Speedy” She barked at him “GUYS!!!” Chantilly yelled, she didn’t have time for their petty squabbles “Oh sorry, now what were saying?” Ivy said, blushing a little “As I was saying, the reason that Draw has been acting funny is because…Draw’s has a marefriend” Chantilly said in her official tone “Well that explains everything.” Speedy said putting his hand behind his head “Well now it gets weird because you’ll never believe who I think he’s dating…Crystal!” “Wait…our Crystal? Ivy asked “I think so.” Chantilly shrugged “Excuse me…” Ivy began as she opened her bookbag pulled out a bottle of water, drank it and did a spit-take. “ARE YOU KIDDING ME!?!?!” She shouted in disbelief “Now hold on,” Speedy jumped in “Why in Equestria would Draw be dating Crystal?” “I don’t know, but I saw it in this note” Chantilly gave the note to him. Speedy read the note once, and let out a “humph” as she turned to the others “Well it’s pretty convincing, but I still don’t think that-“He cut himself off immediately when Crystal Sparkle, herself showed up. “Hey guys what’s going on?” Crystal said in her usual perky presence. The others tried to cover up the fact that they were talking about her and Draw…but they weren’t very good at it. “Uh…nothing. We’re just talking” Chantilly said trying to act casual, but just came off a little jumpy And Ivy wasn’t any better “Yeah…we’re not talking about you or anything…” was her reply “Um…okay” Crystal said, being the group’s airhead meant they didn’t have to do a lot of convincing on their part. Chantilly decided to change the subject, “So Crystal, y-you still coming to our study party tonight?” “Oh wait…that’s tonight?” she gasped “I-I can’t go.” “Why not?” Speedy asked Crystal seemed a little jumpy, but she did a better job of trying to remain cool than the others, “I have plans. I’m meeting a friend and I sort of promised I’d show up on time, this time. It’s a pretty big deal.” Chantilly knew something wasn’t right…Crystal would never forget something that involved her friends…maybe her theory was right. She unleashed in inner interrogator and got in Crystal’s face and spoke in a skeptical voice, “So what exactly are these plans, eh?” Crystal started to sweat, like she knew that Chantilly was on to her but still, she maintains her composure and pushed her away from her, “My plans are nothing that you should be concerned about.” Crystal turned the other way, “I have to go” and at that she parted from them. “Well that was oddly suspicious” Chantilly said raising one eyebrow, watching her leave “Maybe she and Draw are together…” Ivy said, even after saying it, it still didn’t sound right. Speedy, however, still couldn’t wrap his mind around it, and refused to believe it. “Ok, you two are forgetting a very big flaw in this theory…Crystal has a boyfriend!” This was true, as far as everyone was concerned; she was happily with her boyfriend, Storm Spark, who was also one of their friends. “I know, that what confusing me” Ivy said scratching her head, “M-Maybe they broke up?” “Did you see them in the last installment? They couldn’t keep their hands off of each other. There is no way that they broke up.” Speedy said as if he knew more about the randy couple then they did. Speaking of which, Storm Spark himself came walking along the lockers up to the gang, “Hey guys.” Chantilly knew this was her chance, “Hey, Storm, can I ask you a question?” “Okay, shoot.” “Have things been okay with you and Crystal?” Chantilly asked nervously. It felt weird that she was asking about their love life. “Of course they have!” Storm quickly responded, “However, she has been canceling our dates lately…” “Wait…she has?” Speedy asked now getting interested in the conversation “Yeah,” Storm continued, “She says she’s always busy…even our sex life has died a little.” “Humph, now that doesn’t sound like her at all.” Chantilly said suddenly feeling like a detective in the case of possible infidelity… “It’s almost like I don’t see her any more” Storm said getting depressed just thinking about it. Chantilly knew that it usually physically pains them to be away from each other, so this must be sheer torture for him. The gang remained silent after his words feeling guilty knowing that the love of his life is possible cheating on them with their other friend, soon Storm broke the silence. “Oh and by the way, can someone explain to me why Draw is talking so…proper?” he said Ivy gave Chantilly a look, “Should we tell him?” “T-Tell me what?” Storm asked now getting worried of what he might hear With a nervous sigh, Chantilly gave Storm the bad news, “Draw has a marefriend…and we think it’s…it’s…” “C-Crystal?” Storm finished a bit fearful, and Chantilly nodded in regret. There was a moment of silence, but then Storm broke out in laughter, “You’re kidding right? Why on the ever blue-eyed earth would Draw date my Crystal? Chantilly answered his question with one of her own, “Why would Draw received this note from her?” She gave Storm the note He read it, but she didn’t seem too phased by it, “There must be an explanation for this.” He said at last, Chantilly could see that he was starting to worry. “I agree.” Speedy said with a nod. “Crystal would never cheat on me, right? Right?” Storm asked the gang, but he didn’t get an answer “Let’s finish this at my house.” Chantilly said turning to walk off as the rest of the gang followed behind her, except Storm who still wanted an answer to his question. “Right?” Later at Chantilly’s hut the gang sat around her table to continue discussing the issue at hand. “I still don’t believe Crystal would sate someone else behind me back.” Storm was determine to prove that his woman was faithful “Well this is Crystal we’re talking about…” Ivy said turning away, she knew how Crystal was, and she knew Storm wouldn’t appreciate the fact that she basically called his marefriend a slut. “Hey!” He shouted at her, “She’s a little wild, but she’s not promiscuous, and she loves me!” “Pfft, what’s love got to do with it?” Ivy argued “Hater…” Storm said, feeling that Ivy was just jealous of him and Crystal. “Enough you guys!” Chantilly cut in, “Now we aren’t sure that Draw and Crystal are together…but this note is definitely suggesting something is between them two.” “I wish there was a way we can know for sure…” Ivy began “I know a way!” Pencil cut in with his signature monotone voice, as everyone started at him, usually whenever he spoke, (which wasn’t often) the room would get so quiet. “W-what do you have in mind?” Chantilly responded Without saying a word, Pencil dialed in her phone to a friend, “Hey, Splinter? It’s Pencil…I’ve got a job for you…how fast can you get here?...Ok, cool.” At that he hung up. “Who was that?” Storm asked still trying to figure out what just happened “A friend” Pencil responded “Can you be more specific?” Ivy asked a tad bit annoyed. Pencil just starred at her until she became uneasy and turned away from him. Speedy let out an exaggerated sigh, “This is crazy! Why are we even dwelling on this?” “Speedy, two of our friends could be possible be dating. Aren’t you a least bit curious?” Chantilly said somehow starting to lose patience with him. Speedy had to think about it for a second, he had to admit, he was curious to find out if Crystal really left Storm for Draw, but he still thought the whole idea was ludicrous. “I-I know there is something more than what you’re leading on.” he continued “I have to agree with Speedy,” Storm said, “There is no way my beloved Crystal is with someone else, especially if it’s with Draw.” Suddenly there was a knock on the door, and Chantilly flew over to open the door to see a gray Pegasus with sunglasses. “Hello, the name’s Splinter” The grey Pegasus said as he shook her hoof rather frantically “Nice to meet you.” “Do I know you?” Chantilly asked the moment he stopped “No, but you’re friend Pencil called me and asked me to come over.” Splinter walked into the house and looked around, “He said he had a job for me” Chantilly looked over at Pencil, “Pencil, what is he talking about?” she asked. Pencil responded, “I wanted to hire him to follow Draw and Crystal around to really know what’s going on.” “So you hired someone to stalk them?” Speedy asked in disbelief Pencil just started at him, until he made him turn away. “Stalk is such a strong word,” Splinter said with a cringe “I prefer the term ‘private investigating’.” “O really?” Ivy said with a smirk, “Let me see your badge.” “I said I prefer the term, not that I was one.” Splinter responded in haste. Chantilly had to get to conversation back on topic, “So you’ll just going to follow them around all the time?” “Just to see what scoop I can get on them,” Splinter said with a stroke of confidence, “If anything happens, I’ll let ya know! “I’m not so sure about this…what if you get caught” Storm said a bit skeptically Splinter turned to him raising his sunglasses to give him a wink, “Splinter never gets caught!” “Well I’m convinced!” Chantilly said “I am too!” Said Ivy Storm gave a sigh and said, “I guess I am too.” Everyone was starring at Speedy waiting for his response “Fine, but I still think this is a crazy idea!” Speedy said, he felt he had no choice in the matter anymore. “Yeah yeah yeah, we heard you already!” Ivy said playfully, but also to shut him up. “So, how soon can you start?” Chantilly asked the hired stalker “My job starts as soon as I walk out of the this door” Splinter said “And how much do we pay you?” Speedy said cautiously “You worry about that when the job is done, alright?” Splinter said giving Speedy a playfully punch on his side. Afterwards he walks out. “Good, well good luck and thank you.” Chantilly said closing the door behind him. “God, I hope this works.” “Is it me or was Splinter kind of cute?” Ivy said with a little blush, but everyone just looked at her like she was crazy “What?” she asked growing embarrassed. Splinter wasted no time in his assignment in spying on Draw and Crystal. His first sighting was Draw outside of Ponyville’s local jewelry store, he was obviously waiting for someone. Soon enough Crystal showed up excited to see Draw who was happy to see her as well. They exchanged hugs and walked in to the store together. About an hour later Draw and Crystal walked out with Crystal wearing a jewelry set fit for a princess, and Draw put other jewelry in his bag. Draw had spent thousands of dollars on jewelry for Crystal and she was walking around Ponyville showing them off. Splinter took a note of this in his notebook. His second outing is Crystal and Draw having lunch together, but Crystal was playing in his hair, and Draw looked highly pleased with her in his hair, some may say a little too pleased. Next, a couple of days later, Splinter overheard Crystal talking to a brown earth pony with a wavy brown mane. Splinter records what Crystal was saying to her. “I’m telling you girl, this man is such a freak in the bedroom. I mean the moves he puts on me, and the way he looks, waaaaay better than my previous boyfriend. Not only that, but he’s sweet, caring, smart, brave-all of that! I swear, I can’t believe I didn’t date him sooner…” Finally splinter overheard Crystal and Draw repeatedly tell each other, “I love you” outside of Draw’s bedroom. At the end of the week, Splinter decided that he had everything he needed to report to Chantilly and her friends. It was a week since Splinter was hired to watch over Draw and Crystal, and Chantilly and the gang was sitting in their usual hangout spot in the park, waiting for him to arrive. “Where the heck is Splinter?” Chantilly groaned “I haven’t seen him since we sent him off.” Ivy said who was equally bored “Told you, this wasn’t a good idea.” Speedy said in his I-told-you-so-ish tone Ivy, however, wasn’t in the mood for Speedy remarks, “Oh put a lid on it, Speedy!” She shouted “I don’t know about you guys, but I’m really nervous about this…I mean, I could find out that my girlfriend left me.” Storm said started to tear up. The thought of Crystal leaving him was worse than death to him. Chantilly wrapped her arms around him in a big hug, “Hey, no matter what happens, you’ve still got us.” Storm rubbed his head against Chantilly chest, “Thanks, Chantilly” he murmured Splinter had finally approached them and the look on his face said that he meant business! “I’ve done it!” he exclaimed, “I’ve followed Draw and Crystal around for a whole week and I must say, I’ve found some pretty good stuff!” “Like?” The gang asked in anticipation “Well for one thing, Draw and Crystal were seen outside a jewelry store, hugging. They later came out with Crystal wearing a royal jewelry set.” Splinter went on “Jewelry shopping?” Ivy asked turning to Chantilly. “Later I found Crystal Playing in Draw’s hair and he seem to like it a little too much” he continued “S-she used to do that with me...” Storm said started go get teary-eyed again “Next, Crystal was talking about a certain gentleman to one of her friends…” Splinter played the recording of Crystal bragging about the man. The gang listened but they couldn’t believe it. Was Crystal really bragging about leaving her man? Was she really that…cold? “Wow” is all Chantilly could say Splinter finished in a sad tone, he hated to see such despair in their eyes. “And finally, I heard then saying ‘I love you’ to reach other repeatedly.” He turned to Storm who was now brokenhearted, “I’m so sorry you had to hear that.” “Y-you were right, Chantilly.” Ivy said a bit wearily “Yeah, but I didn’t want to be.” Chantilly said feeling Storms depression springing on her. “I…I can’t believe it” speedy said in total disbelief, it finally got through to him. At that moment, guess who decides to show up but Draw and Crystal, the heartbreakers themselves. “Hey guys, anything new happen?” Draw said failing to see the thick melancholy atmosphere around their friends. Then something happened, Storm become furious seeing Draw with his girl that his eyes went from their normal color to red to a flaming red. Veins were popping out the side of his head, and steam was coming out if his nostrils lie an angry bull’s. It frightened everyone as she super charged after Draw and tackled him so vigorously towards to the ground that it could have killed him, which were his intentions. Storm was now trying to strangle him, it seemed like he was determine to kill the man who stole the one woman he’s ever loved in his whole life, or at least have him suffer for as long as his esophagus was crushed between his hooves. “You dirty SOB! Trying to take away my woman away, huh?” He shouted in his coldblooded rage Crystal finally pulled Storm off of him, “What the hay do you think you’re doing?” she shouted to him at last. “Oooh, so you’re defending him now!!!” Storm barked at his lover “What?” Crystal said confused “How could you so this to me? After I’ve done everything for you!” Storm screamed now on the verge of tears. “W-what are you talking about?” Crystal said trying to find out what the heck he was talking about “I know all about you and Draw.” he said icily “You do?” Crystal said softly “Yeah, didn’t think I’d find out huh?” Storm said still in his icy tome that it had Crystal shiver. Crystal knew Storm was beyond upset..more than she’s ever seen him. She ran over to him to try to comfort him, “Oh Storm baby!” Crystal said trying to hold him, but instead, Storm pushed her away do hard that she lost her balances and fell on the ground. Crystal looked up at him, her breath taken away and eyes full of tears. “I’m not your baby anymore!” Storm shouted Tears were now streaming down Crystal’s face, How could he say that to her. What did she do for him to treat her like that! “What…what’s gotten into you?” She said her voice breaking in despair. Draw jumped in, whatever Storm deal was, it wasn’t worth treating Crystal like trash, “Hey, dude, I don’t know what you’re problem is, but you-“ Draw stopped when Storm interrupted, “My problem is you! You know what? You wanted her, you’ve got her!” He turned to Crystal who was tearing bitterly, He usually hated to see her cry, but all he wanted to do now was slap her hard across her face. “Crystal...we’re through!” Everyone gasped as Crystal let out a “W-WHAT?!?!” Storm ignored her and trotted away from her, Draw and the rest of the gang in his blind fury, leaving Crystal to break down in tears. “Woah…” Ivy managed to get out Draw went over to a distorted Crystal and tried to comfort her, “It’s okay, Crystal, I’m sure he didn’t mean it.” “I can’t believe he broke up with me!” Crystal sobbed “Well it’s not like you didn’t deserved it!” Chantilly jumped in getting angry herself. “W-wha?” Crystal looked at Chantilly with her tear-soaked face “How could you do that to him? He gave you everything, and what do you do? You left him…for Draw!!!” Chantilly shouted, she hated infidelity with a passion, so she showed no mercy toward Crystal, even if they were best friends. Crystal wiped her eyes, “Wait a minute…you actually believed that me and Draw were secretly together?” “YES!!!” The gang screamed Draw and Crystal responded, “What are you crazy!?!” “Huh?” The gang asked in confusion, now things were really confusing. “Me and Draw were never dating.” Crystal explained “But what about the jewelry store?” Speedy jumped in “I needed help picking out a few things, so Crystal said she’d help me if I’d buy her some jewelry.” Draw explained “And the hair?” Ivy asked as if they were taking turns “I was trying to fix his hair, it was looking a mess!” Crystal said rolling her eyes. “It actually felt really nice.” Draw said with a chuckle “And the “I love you’s?” It was Chantilly’s turn to interrogate them “We were practicing saying them, but we weren’t actually saying it to each other.” Draw went on “The note! Explain this?”Chantilly said whipping the note out of nowhere it seemed. Draw gave her a stern look “You read my note?” Chantilly blushed, for she knew she was wrong, but at the moment she didn’t care, “Answer the question! It clearly says, “Love Crystal”!” She ordered “Yes…Crystal Splicer!” Draw said slowly Speedy, Ivy and Chantilly blinked dumbfoundedly “Huh?” “That was my marefriend’s name before she changed it, she goes by Passion Page now, but before then I was dating Crystal Splicer, not Crystal Sparkle. All Crystal was trying to do was help me prepare for my next date with her.” Draw said annoyed with their friend’s stupidity, “I...I can’t believe you’d guys think I’d actually try to take Crystal away from Storm.” “Also Passion is one of my newest friends, and in a way I sort of set them up.” Crystal jumped in “And I can’t believe you guys actually thought I would cheat on Storm.” The gang looked down in embarrassment, they totally got the whole thing wrong, and ruined Storm’s and Crystal’s relationship while they were at it. If only they had just stayed out of it, like Speedy warned them. “Well this is embarrassing…” Chantilly said meekly “Now thanks to your meddling , Storm is never going to go back with me ever again! Thanks a lot you guys!” Crystal ran off crying, just as she left, Passion Page herself walked up to Draw’s side. “Oh dear, what’s wrong with Crystal?” She asked her lover “My friends are idiots that what happened.” Draw said giving them the evil eye, “Let’s go sweetheart!” Draw steered Passion with him as they walked away from their still embarrassed friends. “I feel so bad!” Chantilly said trying to hid her tears “But what can we do about it now?” Speedy said in frustration with himself for going along with their plans. “I’m on it!” Pencil said as he ran off, he gang was wondering what kind of plan is weird little mind came up with now. “So um…am I getting paid for what?” Splinter asked, the gang glared at him as to say “Now isn’t the time!” At a local bar Where Storm Spark goes to drink away his problems, he was chatting with Night Cloud, his favorite drinking buddy, who was also the bartender and the owner of the bar. He always confided in him, and because he was so wise, always gave him great advice. Storm was chugging on a large mug of cider. This was his fifth one. While doing so he was telling Night about his recent break up with Crystal. “I did the right thing by breaking up with her, right?” Storm asked Night slowly “What does your heart tell you?” She asked like a psychologist asks their patients. “It’s telling me I’ve made a bid mistake but…all the evidence was right there!” Storm went on, before drinking a huge sip of cider. “Do you believe she cheated?” Night went on asking all the psychological questions. “Well…no. I know how much she loves me and she’ll never do that…” Storm trailed off, he honestly hated that he had to break up with her, but what choice did he have? Soon Pencil walked in and walked up to Storm “Pencil what are you doing here?” Storm asked surprised to see him “Don’t worry about me, but you have to believe me when I say you made a huge mistake breaking up with Crystal.” “How do you know?” Storm said glaring at him, he was slightly creeped out, but tried to play it off. “Draw already had a girlfriend and Crystal was just trying to help him with her. She was never cheating on you.” “And why should I believe you?” Storm said icily “Because he’s telling the truth!” Passion said coming beside Pencil. “I’m Draw’s marefriend, and Crystal’s friend. And I can honestly say that Crystal has zero interest in my Draw. Crystal was just doing both of us a huge favor!” “So…she still loves me?” Strom said starting to feel a massive wave of regret overpower him. “Oh what have I done? I’m so stupid! She’ll never forgive me now! “That’s what you think!” Heads quickly turned to see Crystal Sparkle in the door way with a twinkle in her eye. The one she gets every time she sees Storm. He ran up to her and instantly started apologizing. “Oh Crystal baby, I’m so so so so sorry! I should’ve trusted you. I knew you’d never leave me, will you ever for-“ Storm stopped when Crystal placed a hoof over his mouth with a “Shhh” “I've already forgiven you, after I realized why you were so upset. Did you honestly think I’d ever cheat on you?” Crystal said holding him close “I don’t know…what really made me believe it is when Splinter over heard you talking about some guy to a friend.” Crystal rolled her eyes playfully. She already knew what he was talking about. “That guy I was talking about was you, you idiot!” “Really?” Storm eyes lit up “Yeah” Crystal continued seductively “You should know by now that there’s no pony that can make me crazy like you can.” She was kissing his cheek in slow, soft kisses “Oh Crystal!” Storm sighed as they started to make out with each other, and soon it got pretty suggestive. But they stopped when Speedy, Chantilly and Ivy come in. “Woah!” Chantilly said before they stopped their sexy public make-out session, “I see you two patched things up.” “Yeah, I promise I’ll never doubt my woman ever again!” Storm said rubbing her suggestively which was turning Crystal on. “Again we’re so sorry.” Speedy said, “I told them that this was a terrible idea.” “Yeah, we’ll ask before we start jumping to conclusions.” Chantilly added. “Although this whole thing was your fault.” Ivy said giving Chantilly a look, which Chantilly returned with an evil one. “Yeah yeah yeah, apologies accepted.” Crystal said in a rush to continue making out with Storm. It soon led to Storm laying her down while still in their lip-lock “Um…guys, you do realize this is a public place, right?” Chantilly asked, but Storm and Crystal ignored them as they started grinding against each other. They didn’t care that their friends and everyone in the bar was watching them. Let them watch, they thought. “I think we need to leave now…” Draw said, and the make session was slowly transitioning from a make-out session to something a much more…graphic. The gang slowly backed away from their public rump session and turned away happy that things were better between them. Chantilly peeped back in to them and smiled and said, “Have fun you two!” But after she said that, she had to turn away quickly because things got explicit with Storm and Crystal really fast. Chantilly blushed as she turned away from the sexually charged sight, “Wow!” she mouthed as she trotted off to catch up with her friends, leaving Storm and Crystal in their public display of their love. So that’s what happened. Now I realized why they made those episodes, though it’s been done so many times! It’s to warn people that meddling in other people’s lives will have consequences and people will get hurt. We were lucky that Crystal and Storm got back together, I wonder how long they’ve been at their bar? Anyway, It shouldn’t been long. And I’ve learned my lesson. Because I never wanted to go through this ever again. Sincerely Yours Chantilly Angel Later that night, Night Cloud was getting ready to lock up and looked over to see Storm and Crystal going at it pretty hard on the top of one of the tables, he didn’t seem disgusted, just annoyed. “Hey you two, it’s 1 o’ clock in the morning, and I have to lock up. Will you please take you little rump fest back to your own place?” she said “We’ll leave when we’re good and ready!” Storm shouted at him Night just sighed and left, locking them inside, but they didn’t seem to notice. “Mmm, you’re so sexy when you’re take charge!” Crystal said from underneath him “Then you’ll really going to love this…” Storm began followed by Crystal ecstatic giggles and Storm laughter, as they spend the rest of the night together in the bar. Well I hoped you like it and again if you want to request that your OC be in the next installment, please reply here: http://mlpforums.com...is/#entry379788
  7. Reyshanna Carla Loving... I know it's boring... However, everyone calls me by my nickname, Shani.
  8. I like that idea! However I'm going have to do that one later, I'm almost done writing the next installment, then I have to type it...it's a long process. Oh, I still have to type the fanfic you requested.
  9. I'm being really lazy with my next fanfic...

    1. Storm Spark

      Storm Spark

      s'ok! Everyone needs to be lazy once in a while!

  10. If things don't work with LRP and me I could always go back to chasing Kyronea!
  11. I'd love to! This just gives me an idea to what to write for the next one, but I'll wait until, she makes an OC before I start writing. You can draw the pictures if you want to, I definitely approve!
  12. NO...IT CAN'T BE!!!!

  13. What do you want me to do first? *wink, wink*
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