Fallen Valkyrie

hey Aidan welcome to forum

Hey Kasane Teto welcome to the forum

I made my frst OC not long ago and i thinked that i done good job but now i scroll tru other OC and see that they have very litle Backstory and not so much like my.So i ask some one to help my and say what i should cut out of my OC backstory(or annything other that i dont need).Im happy wit anny help Here is link to my OC http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/logan-r7848

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Hey musicSolstice17 welcome to the forum

Backstory is great(beter than anny one of my) but i think end is litle.....how do i put it....bad for my taste(i got bad taste so dont think about this too much ) i wouldn't end is like that i would go something like that she is trying to escape dream and wit evry try,dream spell is going weaker and weaker.Or something like she is banished in that cristal main under Canterlot.I would give her stil power to fight back not just she is defeated until her sanity comes back. And again i got relly bad taste so dont think too much about this i just whanted to give you some ideas. ps love your Dark Mist look

Prince of Persia trilogy (sands of time,warrior within and two thrones) greatest story ever told if i may say

Hey Beanie Brony welcome to the forum I am good how are you?

That ending i must say you have a gift

Waith a second i need to put sunglasses to see outside nop no snow

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As he got closer to the inn he heard. Kjorr asking him a question."Morning treated my beter than others"wit grim on his face he replied.He got to the inn and sat on empty barrel close to the door.He have taken his axe from his belt and dropped it on the ground next to him"Are we all arrived,is someone in the inn?",as he asked this he raised his look on Tarr.

Its nice perfect use of different blue shades

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Rytlock was siting on wooden roof and was playing wit fire around his finghers.The sun was stil no wher to be seen,but he know it will raise soon.Rytlock was deep in his maind thinking,planing his day.He knew that this day will be beter then other...he knew thet it will be different.The sun was starting to appear on the horizon,big and bright it started to give life to that black and life less wilderness.Roosters began to wake up other villagers.Rytlock raised his look on sun,taken big breath and sad "This is it.......ther is no turning back now."He jump off the roof and start started going to the towns inn.

(sry for no quotes im on phone) I was thing meaning of life was 42 but now i see i was way off.Tnx you great and all powefull Trixie for making my see light

What is meaning of life o great and all powerfull trixie?

IN NEXT TEXT THERE ARE SPOILERS-------YOU HAVE BEEN WARNEd Prince of Persia (first trilogy not this new mambo jambos)it have great opening wit sands of time but sadly thor adore puzzle is way too hard and make (at least my) lose interest,after that comes warrior within and at first moment when you start game and hear "You cannot change your fate. No man can." you know you are for great sequel running tru same island thru 3 time periods,so nice and secret end boss battle make game end in epic way, and then it come great and all powerful two thrones it gives new meaning to word paradox and when prince and black prince start arguing XD but that epic moment when you ,,destroy him,,(not alternative ending)make you so badass and then battle wit final boss make you wanting for more +end credit wit dark prince WOW they make a good trilogy But sadly it came out 2003-2005 and as far as i seen dark prince won't get his revenge anytime soon but he is waiting patiently for it

My favorite book.......this is hard one I love Percy Jackson books but from other hand The Witcher books are good too,Hobits have a nice story.....But best book must be Game of Thrones,there's so much details and story is prete unpredictable,and how he kill off best characters i must say priceless.

I think im good for now tnx on question

Cant w8 for witcher 3 (I know im going fry my computer but it will be so wort it) i have read all witcher books so hope it will be great ))))

Its nice What the program you used to create this?

Whay you dont make your own unique signature - http://mlpforums.com/topic/62260-how-to-make-a-simple-signature-and-avatar/ - its good tutorial for beginners