EnderPrince

February 25, 2015

Ok, let me see if I've got this:

I fixed the wording of those two sentences. I'll get it eventually! (Although I did think that child was more of a general term than something that applies specifically to humans.)
I toned down the colors that really stood out, hopefully making her more appealing to the eye.
I took out the thing about RPGs. Thinking about it, it really didn't fit with anything else I was talking about.

Hopefully I did verything correctly, but I'll be honest, being made of gold doesn't sound so appealing.

February 8, 2015

Alright, I've done what I can to adhere to the rules and add information to this OC.

EqE Character Comments posted by EnderPrince