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Character Comments posted by P-Jay
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i must roleplay with you sometime. XD she sounds like an epic character.
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You. Me. Party tonight in the Everfree? I'll bring the chips
ill tag along.
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why does this not have more brohoofs
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Well now...caliber would have the grandest time with him.
Personalities are almost...exact.
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#SheNeedsToFightViolet
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wow, i really do not know whether or not caliber would get along with her. XD
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#MoreTimeTravelingForTheGladiatorsRP
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bruh, his backstory alone makes him better then most of my oc's.
and he isnt even finished yet.
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#ShipHimWithRuby
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She's legit
Now make the grandpa
I DEMAND THE GRANDPA
YOU CANT HANDLE ICEBERG
because his page is actually up.
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No pic? That sucks...
ill try to get around to that.
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Nice!
it really is.
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eeeyup.
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Don't mind my personality Peyton <3.... that's how I am... still very good tho
glad to hear that.
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Well, he sure is cool.
professional pun-maker, you are.
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alright, now, lets get this review typed.
name: actually, pretty good. nice double meaning, while sounding cool.
cutie mark: makes sense, i guess.
personality: really needs to be expanded on. you cant just summarize how someone feels, thinks, and acts with one sentence.
backstory: well, it made semi-sense up until the whole 'quickly became the best assassin in equestria' thing. how did he get there? when did he realize his skill in assassination? also, whats the deal about 'demon blood?' and the deal with the devil, for immortality? and his love, moonbeam? why does this 'demonblood' abduct her? does steel and demon have some sort of rivalry?
so, my impression of this oc, is likely a ponified Spawn. you know, the superhero?
but if this is really a 100% original character, then your gonna have to expand on just about everything.
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Very good Peyton... even if it too me long to read this finally... yours is better than mine... by description, backstory and personality... keep rolling *sigh*
hey, dont feel bad on yourself. he's slowly evolved, ya know?
back in the first draft, he was OP, contradicting personality, and overly-cliche backstory. you'll get there, buddy.
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quite unique, very original.
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No prob, my man.
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*ahem*
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is this what i think it is?
might as well change his name to just 'L'
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Pretty cool character!! Reminds a bit of my OC. ^^ Also, would it be awkward if I said that my OC's sister is named Violet, lol.
small world.
Rune
in Character Archive
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wow, #LateReply
and idk, rune's been called sexy before...o.0